Zhanshen: Your Fate Is up to Me.

The writing is good, but the plot is a bit slow, and the protagonists have been encountering particularly difficult enemies and situations, which made me a little tired. Maybe it's because I've watched too many plots that are a little faster-paced and exciting, but the plot will attract me to keep watching. Summary: Nice to read [Like]

This book is really nice and well written. It's plain and light, the water flows slowly, some are refreshing and some are sad. But maybe it's because the show was skipping when I watched it, so I'm rewatching it again now. First of all, I don't quite understand why when we left the training camp, the heroine and Wang Mian were still tied for first place, and then they were directly the weakest (realm) of the entire team. Then I think the heroine can love herself more. Many times in this article, the heroine does it for others, to make up for those regrets, without regard for her own life. She's not a tool to make up for regrets, is she? I hope she can love herself more and stop abusing her just for the sake of abusing her. It was like she was responsible for the cause and effect on Wang Mian's behalf. It was clear that every time Wang Mian used time to go back, she would be in pain. If nothing else, at least advise him to use it less. I don't want him to know, which I can understand, but you can advise him to use it less. It will eliminate his side effects, but the heroine will be very painful. I hope the author can love the heroine more

It's very interesting. Wang Mian is also one of my favorite characters in the original work. I feel very sad and regretful that such a good group of people except the captain have all died. Although the captain has become older, he will always shine as bright as before, and the team members are also happy to put away their souls. Xu Bao's image is very cute and interesting, and I like it very much. Witnessing their growth and relationship, I also feel like they are in a nurturing relationship [laughs][laughs]. Moreover, the author describes the other members of [Persona] so vividly that it feels like they really exist. The emotional scenes between Xu Bao and Wang Meng were great. The author is one of the few who is very lively among me. Almost every comment is either a comment or a like. It is very lively, very interesting and I like it very much. Anyway: this book has great descriptions, great images, great author, and great emotions. The whole growth is quite fulfilling. (Give the author a thumbs up~) Moreover, the author's book has quite a lot of words. Before I knew it, it was 300 words [laughs]

The author Dada wrote this book that touched my heart. It is very beautiful. It is the first time I like a book so much. The content is very interesting and the highlights are very interesting. There are many interesting highlights and I can't stop reading it. The author is also very good. I will read every review carefully. The personality is also very gentle. I like it very much. I declare this book to be the first in my heart. Such a good-looking book must be recommended. I also like the plot written by the author Dazhi. It is also super exciting and beautiful. I love reading it. I will always support the author. I wish the author Dada the baby will get better and better! [Sending Hearts]

I really like this book by the author. Unlike most of the articles I have read before (which either directly follow the original story line or simply describe the establishment of the Mask and then write a few tasks and then directly switch to the main line of the original work a few years later), the author writes in great detail about the training camp nine years ago. I really like the fact that Persona is established and then grows through continuous tasks. Moreover, the battles and daily life described by the author are very natural and interesting, making people truly feel the extraordinary trajectory of Persona. There are also interspersed descriptions of Blue Rain, Phoenix, and Spirit. The story of the matchmaker and the ceiling feels like it makes up for my regrets about the blank period that they did not describe in the original work. I hope the author will continue to write, and then it is my little selfishness. I really hope the author writes these nine years longer. During this period, everyone has experienced the ups and downs together and upgraded. It is really beautiful. I hope this wonderful period lasts longer. Of course, I don't mean that the main plot is not beautiful. I just like this kind of unknown story very much, and then I will wait for the author to update it every day. I will stay here every day [love] [love] [love]

To be honest, this is the third time I have read this article. Personal sense is that Xu Zhi has formed a circle around everyone she cares about, and then the center is herself. She focuses all the dangers of everyone she cares on herself, and is responsible for the cause and effect. But at the same time, I can also feel that the author loves Xu Zhi very much. She worked hard to make Xu Zhi a flesh-and-blood person, so that we can understand what the little girl Xu Zhi went through while reading this story, and how she went from being a person who only because of Wang Xun to not just because of Wang Xun. The reward of the slow pace is that the character is more three-dimensional and fleshed out, so I hope the author can maintain his own pace. At the same time, I would like to wish the author a Happy New Year in advance, all the best, good health and fortune every year!

Really, this novel is really good-looking. The description of the emotional line is not abrupt, unlike some novels where you kiss someone right at the beginning. Well, the description of the emotional line is relatively delicate, and the heroine also has many golden fingers. The worldview is still within my acceptance range and is quite good, and it has not collapsed. This is one of the most interesting fanfics I have read.

It's really beautiful. Although it seems a bit inexplicable at first and feels a bit embarrassing, the further you go, the more you can feel Xu Zhi's determination to change the tragedy. She originally came for Mask, but she is very humane. It is really difficult to watch people who have been with each other for a long time die. This is not called being arrogant, but there are more and more important people around her. In the later period, she is not only for Mask, but also for the entire Daxia.

The storyline is compact and there is no hydrological plot. Wall Crack is recommended (I just think this book is very interesting and interesting [shy]) Hehehe

There are a lot of words in this article, and I wanted to ask in advance when the male and female protagonists will get together, the kind that confirms the relationship. I roughly looked through the titles of each chapter. Will they not be together until the finale? It's not that we want to get together right away, I just don't want the relationship to be too slow [send heart][send heart][send heart] @ The author, please clarify the confusion about how many chapters or maybe it will be between a few hundred chapters to a few hundred chapters to confirm the relationship and so on.

Personally, I think this is the most satisfying book among the God-Decapitating movies I have read✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

This novel is very good-looking, a fanfic of "Slayer of Gods", a cp king. The plot is smooth and rigorous, and the content is very substantial. If you want to read CP King, you must not miss this good book. I really didn't skip a chapter in this novel. If you want to see a trickle of water flow, you can try it. This is a treasure novel in the "Zhan Shen" fan fiction.

So far, they are all quite good to read, and they are different from the original book that has been following Qiye. The main reason is that the combat power system has not collapsed. Some of them are super powerful right from the beginning and have no sense of growth. They also give some scenes to women. Some fanfics really have very few female scenes, and whenever there is a mystery, the female characters are described as cries. There are no very powerful female characters, and there are even fewer high-level combat power levels. The heroine is very good. She works hard to grow up and fulfill her own wishes. The friends also have their own ideas and characteristics. The author gives you a lot of support [Love] [Love] [Love]

Full marks! It's not easy. This is the first Zhanshen fanfic I've found where the heroine is normal and doesn't have many flaws. I've read it from beginning to end and am looking forward to the update. I don't even want to talk about the other Zhanshen fanfics. The heroine is acting like a rogue and has a cool love brain, but the plot hasn't changed much. The love story begins within a few chapters of the opening chapter... It's really amazing. Come on! Hope to see the main drama start soon! !

Www The author will update it soon [crying] It's not enough (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

It looks good [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] If there were no sword of the goddess of the day, I think I would like it more. Life is already very hard, and I just want to see something beautiful. Don't give me any more knives, okay, Dad? Just such a small request, big~

It's really good. I've read more than 400 chapters. That means the author is great. Did A Zhi come from the future and go back halfway, or will she stay with Mask until that point in the future? I have read the catalog. Will there be content about amnesia in the future? Is there any content about Zhi reaching that point in the future and not remembering the Mask? I'm so afraid of this.

This book is super nice and highly recommended'- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́- Moreover, the author updates it three times a day, so it's worth reading this book.

This time I have read a super awesome fanfic about God of Death. The growth experience of Mask, which was briefly mentioned in the original text, is described very delicately and vividly. The leader of the Mask team, who is crowned with the fate of possessing the character, talent, and supporting role of the protagonist, also has everything. His family, friends, and loved ones are all there. Our super good baby A Zhi is the brightest star, shining down on the eternal galaxy that they have gathered together.

One of the best books I have ever seen [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Overall, this account book is very good. I give it a five-star rating. I also hope that the male and female protagonists can have more emotional lines and be a little less sadistic.

Good cheers for the author, it's really beautiful. The story doesn't blindly pursue coolness regardless of logic, and there are no inexplicable cheats. The protagonist who grows up together is really cool [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's very interesting, but I'm a little curious, because I haven't seen the back part yet and I don't know the relationship between the system and the heroine. I just answered it and I don't want to spoil it. What is the relationship between the system and the heroine?

Good looking. Cheers, author.

I really like this book, I hope the author will continue to read it

Super wow, refreshing

In fact, I have read this book for the third time, and I still like it very much. Most fans will choose a large plot to revolve around the original text. However, the author of this book not only described a series of growth of Persona in great detail, but also wrote Lan Yu and Zhou Ping before the main plot. The supporting characters who are equivalent to "background", because each time I read it, there is a long gap, and I have the impression that I did not even get to the Yaqi plot line when I read it. Now, the plot is becoming more and more full. What is the regret of Mask? It was Mask who knew that he could escape from the small fishing village by drawing the knife, but was resolutely obliterated; it was the death of his teammates, which was not necessary in the current timeline, but was inevitable; it was the captain who personally used the rules to "obliterate" his teammates; it was the young man who beat time but ended up covered with white hair, and was questioned about not being able to hold a knife [crying] [crying ] The long-lasting love is the best thing to talk about. Many times, short articles will make the relationship progress too fast, making the emotional line very abrupt. It is just for the sake of talking. Of course, not all are like this, and there are still good-looking short stories. Overall, this article is good-looking, and it really pays off to read it patiently [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

It's so beautiful. I read more than 180 chapters in one go. Come on, author. I'll review it after it's finished [Blow kiss]

This is the most beautiful thing I've seen so far [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It looks good. Real Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people (◍ ´꒳` ◍)