Uncle Jiu: at the End of the Dharma Era, the System Will Send Me Cultivation

As a novice who is trying to write online articles for the first time, I have to be honest about my shortcomings. Although this time-travel story set in the world of Uncle Jiu incorporates zombie themes and comedy elements, the problem of jerky writing is always present. The immature control of rhythm caused some chapters to drag on, and some of the forcedly funny passages also seemed deliberately clumsy. In terms of character creation, the growth line of the protagonist Ah Wei is a bit thin, and the villain's character is even more superficial, failing to break out of the traditional zombie movie framework. What is particularly obvious is that the article heavily imitates classic film and television works, and the originality still needs to be improved. During the creative process, I often fall into the embarrassment of "wanting to write humor but being left blank, wanting to create suspense but being discouraged". The presentation of the world view also appears fragmented due to lack of writing power. As a newcomer, I know that this novel is still a long way from being truly "interesting", but I still appreciate the readers' willingness to tolerate these immature touches. In the future, I will continue to accumulate learning and strive to tell stories of my own style.

Why is there only one female protagonist? What's wrong with having more female protagonists? Or maybe change it to have more female protagonists?

Give five stars for encouragement. Come on, then the protagonist is. The last father-in-law of the Republic of China was completely vegetarian. He had no nutrition at all and couldn't even eat meat.

Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome!

A very good book, invincible and perfect

You've continued to be a ghost.

Okay, okay! Nice

Well written, keep it up