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Talk more about love and less about fighting for treasures. After all, we were drawn in by the title of the book

It's not exciting enough, it has the flavor of an ancient fairy tale, but otherwise it's okay. However, one thing to note is that the interaction between the protagonist and his junior sisters is more of a comic type. Readers who cannot understand that feeling may not like this kind of plot like me. After all, the protagonist will be interrupted whenever he wants to do anything, which will be more uncomfortable to experience.

Has the shadow of the return of the Dragon King In the first eighty chapters, the identity is hidden, the opponent always uses his identity to dominate, and the protagonist kills him indiscriminately. Then the article always emphasizes the identity of the opponent. In the eyes of others, he is someone who cannot be offended. It is not a big deal to watch the excitement. He was identified only after he had killed someone. When everyone saw him, he was even more untouchable. As for the opponent, he had no choice but to swallow his anger and end with hatred. The author wants to write that the protagonist does not rely on his identity, travels around the world, and achieves an invincible mind. But there is a problem with this method. It feels like it is based on the plot of Dragon King. It should be a very passionate plot, but when I think about it, I feel very calm. As the Dragon King, he dressed up as a gangster in a local shop and provoked a certain second generation. The second generation used his father's identity to dominate. The Dragon King suddenly showed his murderous intention and tried his best to hide his identity. He kidnapped the second generation and was found by his elders. I tried my best and couldn't deal with it, so I was forced to have no choice; I smiled lightly and said, no longer hiding my breath, I am the Dragon King! Who dares to hang me? Who can hang me? In an instant, Jin was out of the circle, entertainment circle, political circle,,, circle circle again. From now on, he has completely transformed from a hooligan into a big shot in a certain circle. As for those who provoke him, they will naturally kill those who deserve to be killed, destroy those who deserve to be destroyed, and surrender to those who deserve to be surrendered. Good example

I've caught up with the latest chapter, so I'll write a long review. The look and feel is closer to a certain point of "Who Let Him Cultivate Immortality", which I personally like better. To be honest, I was a little surprised when I saw someone in the comments saying that they were too aggrieved. Is it aggrieved to be slightly beaten without any malice by two loli elders in the sect who are much more powerful than me? Is it aggrieved to be treated differently by a beautiful master (even the master has no ill intentions towards the protagonist, but is more interested in the reincarnation of his old sweetheart), oh, this may be regarded as aggrieved, but if this aggrievedness is gone, then where will the refreshing feeling of taking in both the male and female protagonists be reflected? However, I was relieved to see the small print under those comments - "Read (less than) 30 minutes at time of review"... I was relieved. I guess the so-called writing method that is not aggrieved should be a world similar to "Eternal Life", right? But I have to say that this book is essentially an alternative romance novel. Cultivation to immortality only fills out the framework of the world view. A humane plot is more suitable to be integrated with the main line of love. If it were to write a world of cultivating immortality with decisive killing and all the characters frowning as soon as they go out, then this book would really be ruined. Finally, let's analyze why there are comments about being frustrated. I personally suspect that the protagonist's ruthless attitude toward others at the beginning gave readers the illusion that this was a traditional novel about killing and cultivating immortals, and gave them expectations they shouldn't have. I personally think this is the real problem with this book. My personal suggestion is that the protagonist and the protagonist's opponent should be more harmonious and mature outside. In other words, the handling of affairs should be closer to the real world. Finally, if my overall estimate of this book is not in line with the author's original intention, just assume that what I said above is all fp.

The subject matter of the novel is relatively novel and the emotions are handled delicately. Personally, I feel that the most enjoyable part of this work is the step-by-step process in which the master falls for the master (it would be boring if the male protagonist actively pursues him). From the initial disdain, to curiosity, and finally to secret feelings, of course, the emotional changes must be reasonable, not abrupt, and gradual. The author has handled this aspect well so far, it is very reasonable, and it is not that kind of trivial writing. In terms of cultivation, I hope that the male protagonist will be unparalleled in combat and reach the extreme or surpass the extreme in every realm (which is cool). After all, only special, powerful, and unique men will be attracted to the best women (masters). This is eternal. In addition to master and disciple, you can also accept other outstanding women. I personally like to read harem stories.

It's okay. Although there are logical loopholes, it doesn't affect the perception. Most of the villains are brainless characters who target the protagonist. Fortunately, not all of them are normal people. The relationship progress of the male and female protagonists is not sudden. Reading the comments, it seems that there were some small poisonous points in the past, but the author has changed them after listening to the advice. My impression is pretty good (the only problem is that there are too many fights. This kind of fighting is okay in comics or anime, but in novels, it takes up too much space and is boring. The author also knows what everyone is here to see, so he should try to write as little fighting as possible.) Come on, author.

It's very good-looking, much better than Mu Yun's book. The subject matter is novel, and the character of the male protagonist is well developed. Please don't write it like that later. Write more about daily emotions, and the most important thing is (education and training). Highly recommended.

It's full of poison resistance, and I almost died from the poison. Generally speaking, it's okay. People who like to watch it should think it's okay, right? Anyway, I was almost poisoned to death. I can barely watch it without me. I can only say that this is something that a minority group can watch.

The pace is fast, it doesn't drag out, and it has emotions. It doesn't drag on, and it also has fighting. Anyway, it's a very comprehensive book, and the subject matter is also very novel. It's worth reading.

Overall it's good. It would be much better if there were less fighting plots and more love plots and Shura fields. After all, the main direction of this book should be love and Shura fields, not the male protagonist's upgrade.

It's quite beautiful, but author, can you update it earlier? It's one or two o'clock in the morning every day, and I still have to go to school! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

Overall, it's okay. It's my first time to come into contact with this kind of writing. The impression this book gives me is very good and smooth. Of course, if you want to say whether there are any shortcomings, of course there are. After all, which book doesn't have a little flaw?

What an outrageous concept (character relationship), but very interesting, the emotional line is smooth and not stiff, and how to resolve the Shura field in the end is also very well thought out, which is equivalent to supporting this high-level and attractive tone. In fact, as of the chapter I am writing the review, all the "introductions" in the introduction are used to seduce readers. "In other words, the pitfalls have been filled, and the remaining questions about the Taoist and the world do not have a strong "starting" effect. It is approaching the end of the first major plot, and then the next step will test the author's performance. Based on my experience, I am prepared to end the story at any time [laughter], but I still hope that the author can continue writing. From a more professional perspective, the literariness of the article is seriously lacking, but this is a common problem with online articles, not a shortcoming. More importantly, the narration is very smooth and the subplots are connected very well. There is no forced opening of the book, and there is no excessive emphasis on connection that leads to tension or discomfort. This is worthy of praise. But the fly in the ointment is that although you have indeed learned to reuse supporting characters, some supporting characters are separated by too many chapters, giving people a sense of fragmentation. In fact, it is better to arrange a passerby to run the same old routine. But the emotions are very delicate, such as the healing plot between Qingcheng and Cheng Nuo [laughing evilly] I enjoyed watching it, and it was a huge hit!

I feel pretty good so far, keep working hard

It looks good. I discovered it early. I wonder if the plot will turn out that all those memories will become the real history. The so-called cause and effect can only be transcended by the fate of the time traveler, so I inserted the variable of the protagonist. The way of heaven is naturally orderly. Only the fate of the protagonist can achieve this. When the fake is true, the truth is also false.

Come, the author read with me my solemn oath: starting from today never Break updates. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will not Play around Drama, no art. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, and be unyielding Struggle, strive hard, advocate first-class, strive to create brilliance, take code as the basis Joy can be tempered a hundred times and become steel. It is worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of youth. Ashamed of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that Believe me I am a good writer. Code Yu is my bounden duty, I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can work hard I am the keyboard in the darkness and the guardian on the Great Wall of Internet literature. Wei, I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day and night. All Come on, author, please don't repeat what you said last time. Write a high-level article Talk loudly.

It feels ok so far, it looks pretty good. I think most people who read this novel are here to see the romance and Shura field, but the rest of the story keeps going into secret realms, which slows down the pace.

The strongest remaining emotions in the memory of the ancestor's past life are only the guilt and regret of his death. The strongest emotion in the young apprentice's memory in this life is vivid fearlessness and determination. If there is no overwhelming mana and soul as support, how can the memory itself produce such an effect as seizing a body? The only way for Master to win the prison sentence is to use magic and magical powers to forcibly obliterate Qingcheng's personality memory in this life. [Punch hard]

The summary is actually all about the protagonist, and more than 200 chapters are revealed (time and space). However, the front is full of bad taste, which is not bad.

It's a very good book. The author's descriptions of characters and battle scenes are quite detailed. Maybe it's because the subject matter is relatively unpopular and fewer people read it. Otherwise, there's nothing wrong with it scoring 9 points or above [Like]

So far it's very good [face covering] [face covering] I like to watch the male protagonist and his apprentice [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] There will be more plot later, as long as I don't keep repeating a word or doing weird things, then I guarantee that I will watch [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

@ Coke stewed bitter melon is okay, but how many female protagonists are there? Your profile says there are two female protagonists, so why are you so ambiguous with female characters? Let me say it again, this book does have emotional lines for supporting characters, but there shouldn't be many.

Come on, author, it's pretty good right now, but there are only a few dozen chapters missing. Also, I'm curious to ask which heroine will be the first to be with the protagonist. Currently, I personally think there are three heroines, Master Shen Qingcheng and Caifeng. I personally think Caifeng will transform later. Not bad. The twists in the plot later feel both unexpected and reasonable [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] The writing is quite good.

The subject matter is very novel, and I personally think it's quite interesting [Blowing Kiss], but I'm a little curious about the identity of the main character, the junior sister, and I feel like she's the master's doppelgänger [Thoughts]

Let's talk about the conclusion first. This book is extremely versatile, has extremely high total damage, and extremely good dps. Overall, it's a super cup. I forgot about it in the middle and forgot about it later. In short, I highly recommend it to most readers.

The writing is very good and the storyline is great, but there is a flaw in it and I don't know where it is.

I don't know whether it's Nantong or pure love [Thinking]

It's pretty cool, but the protagonist's strength improves too slowly. Next, we should find ways to improve the protagonist's realm without having to keep staring at the level.

How should I put it? It's not amazing at first, but once you listen to it, you will become addicted.

It looks very interesting, and the logic of the story is closed. I wonder if the author can update it faster. Why do you have the nerve to take a break? [Angry]