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Well, although the routines are all the same, the male protagonist's design is pretty good. It's quite likable, the villain can be evil but he has to be principled. You can kill but there must be cause and effect. You can be wild but you have to have a bottom line, you can pretend but you have the strength. It was pretty good after reading a few chapters. Take a look later. Much better than those purely evil articles

It can be seen that if you accept less of the Destiny's Daughter, you can kill her when you need to. There is a villain girl, a destiny villain and a villain heroine.

There's nothing about the plot that attracts me, right? Lin Che could actually be killed directly. I feel there is no need to turn into a woman. Lin Jinyu knew that she was of the Phoenix, Golden and Phoenix bloodline before her bloodline awakened... This bloodline has a lower B rating in my mind. I'll take a look at the other ones later.

It's ok for now. 1. You can give the heroine more description to avoid facial expressions. 2. You can add several different types of protagonists (Gou Dao flow, behind-the-scenes flow, invincible flow, villain flow, etc.) 3. If you don't accept the heroine, don't spend too much time describing it (such as how beautiful the description is, too much ambiguity with the protagonist, etc.). Of course, I love harems. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] The above are only personal subjective suggestions. Finally, I wish the author better and better as he writes more.

I hope that the protagonist will be more mysterious and not put everything on the surface, so that it will be attractive to watch.

It's okay, it's pretty good to watch without thinking [like]

Classic plot, mark it

A very good book

It's okay, nothing poisonous

It doesn't look like a villain, it looks like a normal protagonist.

It's pretty good. It's just that Lu Lailu [laughing evilly]

Although the new author is not very good, I still give him four stars for encouragement.

Not bad, good, keep it up, you can increase the emotional description of the heroines appropriately and strengthen the depth of the heroines.

Why secretly record my daily life [note] [you taste carefully]