Wandering into the Ming Dynasty by Mistake, the Red Sunset Tour Group

The theme idea is very good, but the writing still needs to be improved. Although there are some moments where the writing is not fluent at the beginning, it is not harmful. The rhythm is chaotic later and the writing is not as smooth as it was at the beginning. Come on author, this book has potential.

It was quite interesting to write. It is written that the country's response is too slow. To be honest, it is very easy for the country to know the information on the mobile phone.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I immediately went to the last page to comment! This article is simple, clear and humorous, so why is it only worth 6 points? So here I am, contributing a 5-star contribution to the author. Come on, come on, keep writing!

This subject is quite new. Retired aunts and uncles are more reliable than young people in time travel, and city experience is more reliable than young people. Elderly people of these ages have also experienced hard times, and their ability to empathize will make it easier to deal with others. In addition, many elderly people of this age have been industrial workers all their lives. Their professional skills, knowledge and hands-on ability are really beyond the comparison of young people. If the author writes well and his writing style is better, he will have the potential to be in the industry.

After reading dozens of chapters, it should be said that the material is good, the story is relatively novel, and it is very suitable for the tastes of old bookworms who have read too many novels. Don't think about reasonableness, writing skills, and methods of designing conflicts and conflicts. Just read it to relieve your boredom. It should be said that it is a good novel.

Manxing is indeed interesting, but the author has low experience and thinks too simply. The summary in Tomato is all top-notch. I will think more about it, patch it, and update it quickly. This is less than seven points. I didn't want to click in at first. It's still good.

Absolutely a good book, IQ and EQ are all online, so happy [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker laugh][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker]

It's very interesting. Are there any similar novels? As a girl, I accidentally came across a novel written from the perspective of the male protagonist for the first time. It was really well written. I have watched female videos for so many years, but there has been nothing good to read recently. You know you men have all eaten so well and come so early.

A very novel time-travel novel. I have never read this type of novel before. It is very interesting to read without being too strict. The various character portrayals are also very vivid. I hope the official will provide some traffic so that the author has the motivation to update. I don't want this book to be eunuch [I'm about to cry]

It's funny and touching. It has no grand narrative or condescension, but describes that era from the perspective of ordinary people. Although it is suffering, it is still full of sunshine. It is the best one I have seen recently.

It's good-looking and good-looking. It's my favorite style. The author should update it quickly. Don't make it unfinished. If the framework is grand, modern energy, weapons, etc. Can be transported to the Ming Dynasty. Come on, author.

The creativity is novel, the first 200 chapters are well written, the logic is smooth, the expressions are clear, and there are plots and plots, but the later chapters are almost meaningless. Personally, the biggest problem is the creation of the protagonist. The character is not three-dimensional enough and has no growth process.

It's a good book, although the protagonist is a bit like a virgin, but in this case, the protagonist can't be the protagonist without being a virgin. I hope the settings will be more rigorous in the future, and I hope the author will update it soon. It's really beautiful.

Not bad (๑>◡<๑)👍🏻I finished reading it in one go, waiting for the follow-up

Rich imagination and clear and unconventional writing style

A funny article with a humorous style. Although some cool points and logic are sacrificed for the sake of being funny, it is really worth reading. In addition, if your eye sockets are shallow, please prepare tissues. Alas, a funny article can make people cry. From the side, it shows that the writing is really good.

(It makes sense to lose your brain) This is a beautiful book with good laughs and tears. I always cried and laughed while reading it. But there are many unreasonable places. So those who want to watch it must not take it too seriously.

Brigade-style novels, developing a new genre, unexpectedly good-looking

It's a very novel subject matter, and it's well written. It's quite interesting, but I'm more looking forward to the end of the national team. Don't waste so many resources. It must be written officially, otherwise it feels like your rating will be dropped.

It's so good. I beg the author to update it soon. In addition, the country can help more people if it takes over quickly.

Wonderful, good-looking, I hope there will be official intervention, please give the author a big boost and update it

In the late Ming Dynasty, mountain bandits began to receive tour groups Open to the fullest Comedy style, so you need to ignore some logic. The plot is detailed and relatively fresh. The character creation is relatively three-dimensional. Four and a half to five stars.

Chapter 12 [5 Stars] The pace is good, the writing is humorous, and there are plenty of laughs. The protagonist travels through the ancient Ming Dynasty and receives supplies from modern tour groups. It has difficult descriptions and a funny plot of modern tour groups. Except for the setting in the first chapter, which is a bit jerky, everything else is perfect and has no shortcomings.

It's pretty good, very novel. I'm just waiting for the county boss to come [laughing] to suppress the bandits.

It's not bad. At first I thought it was a random novel, but after reading dozens of chapters, I found that the author is quite talented and can write this type of group time-travel novel. The characters are vivid and the plot development is full of the interest of life. Overall, worth watching.

I like this book very much. It's very imaginative and very funny.

The subject matter is novel, and the storyline is based on a timeline and gradually unfolds from point to point. It is soothing and not abrupt. The characters are well-drawn and the author's IQ is online. I hope the author will stick to it and stop being a eunuch.

This is really a new track, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good

This article is a rare masterpiece in many years, and it made me laugh out loud.

I have read a lot of novels about scenic spots. This is the first time I read a tour group. The writing is good, interesting and close to life.