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I think this version of Lin is too strong and needs to be weakened. Also, hurry up and clear up the misunderstanding with your sister. I want to fast forward to the competition process. Finally, I hope there will be more female protagonists and an ending to achieve a "world where no one gets hurt" [laughs][laughs]

I just finished reading it. It is really well written and has a unique feeling. The characters are vivid and the IQ is online (except for the main character who gets mad from time to time). It has the flavor of this type of writing. It's a heart-pounding feeling from time to time. It's very touching and belongs to the upper-middle level (if there are many female harems, I give them five stars). It's pretty good for this type of writing (the character creation is really successful). It's non-toxic, except for the hesitation of the protagonist (a characteristic of this type of writing). Well worth a look. There are a few doubts. 1: Physical problems, there is no cancer, but the protagonist can feel that his body is getting worse, and he is very sure that he will die. 2: System problem. Everything the protagonist knows about the plot comes from the sleeping system. It is estimated that the system may come to the rescue later. Three: The problem of rescuing people. Lin was rescued by the protagonist when he was a child, and then the protagonist disappeared. Obviously, he cannot do without the system. However, the protagonist does not travel through time, so what does the system use to convince the protagonist to follow the plot? There are also foreshadowings behind it. Four: There is obviously something wrong with the protagonist's memory. It is probably sealed by the system. The system is still sleeping. When the system wakes up, there will probably be a big wave. (I feel that many people have forgotten that there is a system after seeing it. The author is secretly causing trouble [laughing]) Five: The protagonist's mentality problem. The protagonist has a single-heroine mentality. I hope she can change it soon. Then, now that I already know that my parents are gone, I am still thinking about going back, or in other words, if they are ruined, they will die if they die. If they die, they will go back. I have not considered the system's self-rescue [face covering] [face covering] Would it be lonely and cold to go back after death (although I feel that the protagonist can have a good life even if he has the ability to go back) [face covering] [face covering] Finally: It's the author's support for the heroine in every sentence. I see it now. I dare to have a tragic ending and fake love to speculate in stocks. I can only have a broken mentality (I'm about to curse) [cry] [cry] [cry]

A very realistic 📖 book, not only using the theory of truth (conversation method, common poisonous points in new books [eating melon] listed in advance, [thinking] you unknowingly step into it, it feels right [exploring]) with cancer and a lot of real dedication to the heroine The content is also stated in the introduction, A good book stands the test of time and is judged by readers [OK] When he gets angry, someone comes and kicks me, thank you [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] [cool] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Speak freely, speak freely, just be civilized 269 fans came to register, waiting for you🔥It became popular with tens of thousands of people In the original world and the world of the novel, I feel that the protagonist can be regarded as the author of that novel, because [Eating Melon], the protagonist is vague about love. The female author of the book doesn't want this The protagonist is forced to have this experience in the novel world and return to the emotions that people in the original world would bring here. Once the plot is completed, the world of this novel will be complete. The protagonist [Thinking] joins the life of the original heroine in the way of the original author Go to the original world and get the same information from the novel world Don't [I'm about to cry] again (I've seen too many matryoshka dolls) Just end it as early as possible in a reasonable and non-sentimental way (the heroine is enough [laughing and crying], but there are too many and can't be portrayed).

Ms. Lin uses all her tricks to figure out Max! But I hope it's a harem ending.

Now the plot feels like it's destined to be, but I don't know where the author's twist is referring to the previous male protagonist's life experience? Or what about later? I don't like reading finished books, and the few I've updated are either completely unfinished or BE stories. Alas, I still want to read HE books.

Lin is still too good at tricks. Is there a heroine with more value?

Okay, it's quite proud.

Although it is not amazing, it is much better than some assembly line works. It really shouldn't be so low. Please support it.

If this development continues, what will happen to the family members in the original world? How to go back?

This book is actually quite good.

There is room for improvement, please encourage me.

It's so beautiful. I loved watching it.

How long has it been since such a beautiful book has such a low rating?

So far, I think it's pretty good

It's pretty good, it feels like it's not toxic at all

It looks good, but there are no meat dishes [angry]

It's good to read, and I'll read it to a high star in the future [Love][Love][Love]

It's very beautiful, and the emotional scenes are written very carefully.

Very well written

I think we can fast forward a bit.

Not bad, quite proud

You can still watch it

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It's so arrogant, I just like this kind of thing

Very interesting, come on

Miss Lin is too strong. A Shura field with unequal strengths is boring.

It's very good, I hope it doesn't stop

Yes, losers like me love to watch [eating melon]

It's good so far, but I feel like I can fake my death later [laughing]

So far, the overall performance is good. The characters are well developed. There are no major problems except that there are too many female protagonists and the plot is too bloody.