Ghost Dormitory: Back-To-Back Survival with the Beautiful School Beauty

This book was very good in the early and middle stages, but I felt that the male protagonist's talent was a bit weak, but he also gained powerful talents later on. In the later stage, he was a little rushed to finish, and it was a bit sloppy. Overall, it was a perfect ending. The male and female protagonist's friends were all resurrected in the later stage. It was a good reunion. I like it. I feel that this book is better than the author's other book "Double Cube Survival", hehe.

There are not too many poisonous points. If you like to watch love, it is very suitable for those who love love and have fun stories, but don't think too much, or you will find the logic weird. The writing is okay, the setting is average, but the emotional scenes are also well written, and the characters (can also be regarded as group portraits) can stand up, so it is still good. If you only watch the emotional scenes and group portraits, it's still good.

Okay, it's great. The combination of the heroine and the hero is invincible, especially the heroine. She is invincible inside the apartment. Give yourself a knife, then activate the talent and randomly transfer it to the person who has a grudge against you. It's amazing.

Although the writing style is a little immature, the logic is not smooth, and there are always missing pieces, but it is no problem. Come on, author, write well, I support you [laughing evilly]

It's pretty good in Tomato. The dormitory survival and weirdly arranged dungeons are still okay, and they don't deliberately suppress the combat power. It's rare that the combat power doesn't collapse. It's a pity that the data is not good, so I can only support it like this.

The writing is quite good, the setting is amazing, and in the end I turned into a five-year-old..., The character design is very good, the heroine is not a drag, but the back part is a bit outrageous and I don't understand it, but I can't see the data. It's such a pity that the progress has been sped up for no apparent reason.

It's exactly what the author said, it gets better and better as you read later, but the ending was a little sloppy.

The plot is exciting and interesting, the subject matter is new, and the imagination of the plot is in line with my perception. He is also one of the few authors of survival works who still insists on writing. I give the author a thumbs up and hope that this book will continue to be written. I urge you to update more. It is beautiful and I can't get enough of it. I'm really looking forward to what the author will write in the next chapter? Support the author's first-day sign-in and punch-in to complete the wall!

The writing is so good that it doesn't look like it was written by a female author. So far, I don't think there is any poison in it. It is completely gourmet. It is recommended to eat it [Send heart] [Love]

It was 8.9 When I just watched it. Why is it just like this? It looks better than the cube.

The writing is pretty good, the writing style is average and unpretentious. The plot is cleverly conceived and makes people want to read it. I have read Chapter 110 and am here to comment. But there are 3 problems First, there are a lot of typos, and in some places even the description is completely missing, which makes people confused. Second, give up on your own. If you don't want to write because of traffic reasons, you can ask for votes and let everyone share more. But you can never say that you want to give up and end it quickly. Readers will be embarrassed when they hear this. You can do this, but don't tell them. Thirdly, it is not rigorous, and the benefits are ignored in many places. For example, the benefits are lost when players are killed in the game. In the middle and early stages, someone used a long-range trick to kill the protagonist, and there is no mention of why the opponent's weapon was not picked up. These can easily make readers feel stripped. If I were the protagonist, I would definitely give the long-range weapon to my girlfriend. There must be many invested readers who think so. Including the team battle in Chapter 110, the part about teammates with paper man abilities, the reward for killing is not mentioned, which makes readers wonder, where is my benefit? The author ate the proceeds from killing my enemies. In summary, this book had the potential to take off. It can be seen that you have a plan for the outline. It was very comfortable to read before 100 chapters, but your attitude was really perfunctory. If there were fewer typos and more details were polished, instead of having this mentality after the update, your book could have exploded. It's a pity.

It looks good, the skills of the male and female protagonists can be perfectly matched, and the female protagonist is not a flower vase.

The early and middle stages are really good to watch. You fight monsters and upgrade all the way. There are some minor flaws in the writing of the emotional line. It is true pure love and not scary. The pace in the later stages will be very fast. Because there is no income, it will be hastily. You can skip and watch. At the end, all the companions and family members are resurrected. It is considered he.

I think this book is very good overall and worth reading, but I personally won't read it again. The advantages are obvious: although it is long, it is not unfinished. Most of the pitfalls laid by the author have been recovered, and the logic has always been online without any breakdown. Early excitement The game level design in the mid-term is careful and the plot is compact and immersive. Happy and comfortable ending However, the work also has shortcomings The hero and heroine's S talent settings are super powerful Talented people are more likely to survive, no matter how strong or weak they are. People without talent are often eliminated quickly. Readers who like Strong Goldfinger will like it very much But those who don't like it may think that the protagonist relies more on innate advantages. Also, it feels a bit empty at the end. A large amount of space in the early and mid-term is devoted to the protagonist's confrontation with the game. But at the end, I discovered that the game itself is part of the world and there is no way to truly resist. Although the protagonist finally has a happy ending, I am also very happy But I still feel a little lost and empty in my heart.

It's a relatively good-looking dormitory survival book. It can make you feel more relaxed and romantic at the same time. Maybe the lack of vivid writing style affects the rating of this book. There is no brain-burning plot, so it is difficult to attract readers.

I was attracted by it right away. It's not as scary as a book like "The House". It's just about killing monsters and upgrading. It's very interesting👀. The only drawback is that "updates are too slow". The author would like to (💢｀Д´) update it more quickly (💢｀Д´)

It's good to read, but I haven't reviewed it since I just browsed through it, and my memory is relatively poor, so I can't summarize what I read? [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] In short, I think it's very beautiful, and the heroine's personality mentioned in the introduction is novel, but she's a bit silly and seems to others to have low emotional intelligence. But I quite like it, maybe because I'm like that too, right? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It looks good. Please update the author soon. Don't change the cubes now, let's change this book first [send my heart][send my heart]

The male protagonist is good-looking, but the heroine is not a virgin. Although she is dull, she is also very smart in important situations. You are the kind of novel that is written by AI and is not an assembly line. It is good-looking and beautiful.

I hope the author can always maintain the pure love of a single female protagonist. Thank you very much, author [laugh][laugh][laugh]

This is the first time I read a novel of this type. I find it very interesting. The early and middle stages are very well written. The male and female protagonists are both intelligent and not particularly brainless. The protagonist grows up step by step and calmly analyzes situations. The character is also very interesting. The only drawback is that the pace in the later stages is too fast and it feels a bit hastily finished. However, overall it is still very good. I am ready to dive into other novels by the author.

The first part was not good, but after getting through it, I saw that the later part was more and more exciting, and it was still good-looking [Thinking]

It's very interesting. I have read several of the author's books. This book is my favorite type. I hope I can keep updating, come on

Highly recommended to old bookworms, the writing is very good, non-toxic and fun, you can follow it with confidence [laughing]

It's so beautiful [Adoration] But I hope the male and female protagonists don't really die in the middle and only come back to life at the end [Thoughts] The author finally pinned her down until only the protagonist started to make a comeback [I'm about to cry] At least the heroine didn't die [crying]

The explanation is vivid, unlike other starting systems, invincible, more in line with the rules and worth a look.

If you don't want to watch, just watch a little. If you don't want to watch, watch a little. If you don't want to watch, watch a little. If you really don't like watching, just take a glance and tweet. I believe I fell in love with him at first sight.

The names of Gu Fan and Su Liyue sound so familiar [laughing and crying] It's a good new book

The first 100,000 words are pretty good. It's better than many books written in the early 90s. It's good at the beginning but the quality starts to drop. After reading 100,000 words, it should be pretty good.

It's pretty good. It's a new book. I'd say it's about 9.5 Points. It's not a brainless novel. >3<