Younger Sister**********

It looks good, and the theme is novel. The protagonist is on the side of the revolutionary army and is the enemy of the entire capital world. However, the combat power seems to be a bit broken. Is gold a bit too strong? Not to mention that the protagonist's revolutionary army does not have a single gold. How can it defeat the Federation? I hope there is no heroine. The friendship with others is just a comrade. My sister will definitely fight with the protagonist in the end. I just don't know who will win.

I hope that Yan Jinghong will have a single female protagonist. The author wrote it very well, but I feel that the male protagonist could be a little stronger. After all, I think, therefore I am here. Of course, the writing is not aggrieved now, but I feel that a commander who can't even get a gold is a bit weak.

Having said that, it's time for you to update: Aiqing's article is deeply in my heart. I hope Aiqing can write a continuation of this article. Can I have a continuation of this article? I wonder if Aiqing is willing to continue writing this excellent article? Human words: Update.

Five stars. The protagonist is very strong at the beginning, and strengthens his abilities through belief, setting the tone of the story. There are also talents from small overseas countries following him, and his career is on the rise, which is promising. My parents are gone, I still have a goal to explore, and I still have a younger sister who is bound by a close relationship. The setting is very comfortable and comfortable

Good. The male protagonist is a revolutionary soldier, which feels quite novel. Usually this kind of subject is on the side of monsters.

The plot and other things also feel pretty good.

It's very beautiful, the plot is also good

In order to change everyone's deformed world view, or just my sister's? It already means a lot when personal matters take precedence over the revolution. Come on, author.

It's beautiful and has a very refreshing feeling. Please keep up the good work, author!

Beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep It's so frustrating, so frustrating

Final fantasy of creation

I personally think it looks pretty good

Good review, why is the rating so low? The quality is also good.

I feel pretty good. Why is the rating so low? The story is relatively complete. There are no problems except that the combat power is vague. The background is very interesting. Don't read it as a cool article.

Come on, author, there are flaws but you can read with confidence

I love you, I love you, my sister is good

Interesting, interesting, so interesting

That's right, it's super pretty

I'm not telling you how to advance the protagonist to gold level as soon as possible.

It's pretty good. Come on, the rating may be a little low, but it's almost the same at first. We'll see what happens next.