The Trick************

The writing is pretty good, and the emotional scenes are not too verbose. However, this book does not explain the protagonist's detailed background experience and various means that he already possesses. It is difficult to immerse him in the first person, and the perspective is not all the perspective of the protagonist. The first chapter is from the perspective of the supporting character. From the end of the first chapter, it gradually switches to the perspective of the protagonist. Later, the protagonist faints and switches to the perspective of the heroine. , The protagonist wakes up and then switches back to the protagonist's perspective, but there is no God's perspective to observe the villain's movements, maybe to leave suspense, but properly revealing what the villain is doing can mislead the readers. I feel that the author can try [laughing] But if you really want to mislead the readers, it is best not to write too complicated. There is a reason why so many Tomato novels include the brain storage at the beginning [face covering]

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