Naruto Doesn’t Want to Be Hokage, He Just Wants to Become an Immortal

It's okay, but I don't know if it has cp. I generally don't read books with cp. This tests the author's writing style too much. Moreover, Naruto has become an immortal, and he is still the kind of person who has been in the world of immortality for almost a hundred years. The thinking in the article is the thinking of the world of immortality. Moreover, after so many years in the world of immortal cultivation, even though it has been emphasized that Naruto spends most of his time practicing and seldom goes out, doesn't it also say that he has met many fellow Taoists? Then no matter what happens, they must at least be handsome men and beautiful women, so their aesthetics must at least be improved a few degrees. Although this world of cultivating immortals feels like a low-profile version, no matter how low-profile it is, it is still a world of cultivating immortals. The ninja world should be untouchable no matter what. Although there are many beautiful things in the ninja world, don't forget that the concentration of spiritual energy in the ninja world is lower than that in the immortal world. Is this really comparable to those who have been nourished by spiritual energy since they were still in the womb? After all, no matter how good-looking you are, can it really compare to other people's innate advantages? Unless there is some great opportunity. But it is better to give this opportunity to others than to Naruto and Sasuke. From the perspective of cultivating immortals, these two people in the original work can be regarded as children of luck no matter what happened, but one has a higher luck than the other. Aren't opportunities basically reserved for people with great luck? It feels a bit far-fetched, but I just want to say that if you have CP, if you have the delicacies of the immortal world and choose the coarse food of the ninja world, I can only say that you are really hungry, and you can eat all this. And didn't Naruto say that he just wanted to become an immortal? He was either practicing or on the road to practice all day long. He also went out to find ways to improve his strength. Under this premise, if he had a Taoist companion before becoming an immortal, wouldn't it be a bit incompatible with his choice? The above is my personal opinion. Of course, I'm not the author. I'm just a bad reader. I can't change the plot. I can only make some suggestions. Whether the author can see it or not is one thing. If you are not satisfied with it, just think that I am a fart. If you scold me in the comment area, feel free, I rarely come here to watch.

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking. In fact, if we look at the situation in Konoha, when celebrities do these things and expose these things, Danzo has already sent the root to find trouble, but I didn't see it here. I can only say that Danzo is also a new leader. The author here is really big-hearted.

(Above middle) Good++/7.5 Points, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is good, the plug-ins are average, the setting is good, the writing is good, the rhythm is average, the imagination is average, the characters are good, the main plot is average, and the logic is good. 5 Extra points: none Personal feelings: Collecting beheading swords and the following sentence means that the brain is exhausted, the main plot is not designed well, the rhythm is poor, and the combat power is being overwhelmed, and it will gradually go downhill. "But it's not too late. In this life of cultivation, I will go out more and see what this ninja world is like. ──Chapter 52" Rhythm-1, main plot-1, imagination-1. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+. (5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points. (9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points.

The writing is pretty good, I read a few of them and there are no big flaws. It feels like the ninja shadows in there are only at the peak of foundation building, and Ban and Hashirama are in the middle or late stages of Golden Core. The Immortal of Six Paths can survive in the soul state at the Nascent Soul stage or the early stage of transcending tribulation.

It looks good, but can it be updated faster? You have so little. How can I see enough? I've seen Chapter 47, tsk, it doesn't feel as good as the first time. Take Zabuza's sword. This sword is not that good for him in the world of immortality. According to this upgrade, it feels like he will become invincible in the ninja world very quickly. If it is too slow, there will definitely be many poisonous points.

I'm sorry, I've read so many Naruto's articles, and I like this one 9.9 Out of 10. There is still 0.1 Points left, so I won't add it for fear that the author will be proud. Generally speaking, the Naruto in this article perfectly demonstrates the decisive thinking of the Immortal Queen. The things that I like are the ones that I can beat... Some of the characters are very comfortable, and the linkage effect with the story of cultivating immortals and the world of Naruto is not bad. So far, there are no bad points. I hope the author will continue to update. After all, if you don't update, my book shortage will be more serious. Hehe. Come on, author, I support you!!! How can I put it so far? It's pretty good in the early stage, but a bit too toxic in the later stage.

On the eve of the chuunin exam, I don't have giant poison at the moment, but I feel that my combat power is a bit unstable. It seems to have been mentioned before that the Kage level is the benchmark for the Avatar (it seems so, I won't go back to it). Now I am still practicing Qi, but it is a bit drifting. There are no other problems. I look forward to the follow-up [Learned]

As for the evaluation of Madara, no matter what the system is, Madara is a hero. Not to mention these things, Madara's plan is also a chess piece 😜, it does not mean that it is wrong to open one's mouth to describe other people's ways.

The writing is quite good. The protagonist returns from the fairy world and kills decisively. It is not a cliched plot.

It looks good, please update it! Let me share briefly, the first is the combination of cultivating immortals and Hokage. The second is that the time traveler is a native of Naruto and is no longer a time traveler in the 21st century of Earth. The third is that the protagonist's image is well created. Fourth, the writing is pretty good.