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Tomato is the most light novel style novel I have ever read. At present, there are no bad points. The slight shortcoming is that the combat power is not clear. It is impossible to determine the current combat power level of the protagonist and the characters currently appearing in the entire world view. Of course, this is a common flaw of many light novels, and it's harmless. Brothers who like to read light novels can pick it up and read it. I just don't know whether the author has multiple women, a single woman, or no women. Of course, as of now, I think it's best to have more than one girl, because that's what I love to watch👆🏻[laughter]

It's really good. The daily light taste is very good. Children love it. I hope it won't stop updating. Author month?

Surprisingly, it's not bad. It's not toxic. The battles and emotional lines are well written. This novel is suitable for multiple female protagonists. It's worthy of being written by Xiao Chunan. It's so ambiguous. The male protagonist's character is also not sluggish. It's just that not many people read it. The author must write it down. This name is indeed a bit like that.

Relaxing cool essay campus harem 8 points out of 10 (assuming the Lord of Mysteries is 10 and the Foolishness of the Gods is 9) If it doesn't suck Chapter 68: The first few chapters were quite... Not handled well. It is recommended to skip (skip to Chapter 69 after seeing the protagonist kill the old man) First of all, from the plot point of view, there is so much foreshadowing, and if you suddenly wear a necklace instead of killing him, you might as well kill him. (Anticlimactic) In addition, why the protagonist didn't return to China? I thought it was downplayed, but it was pointed out in more than sixty chapters. It would be better to just kill and return to China. It can't be that the panel can only be used in Japan, right? It would be better to change that paragraph to "Crows are so hypocritical, they can only trust their own kind when eating." Insinuate the Japanese, but if you don't raise it directly, there will be no question of "why the protagonist doesn't return to the country", so it doesn't matter if you let it go. They all mentioned the disgusting Japanese. If you kill them directly, your popularity will be even higher.

The plot is good, and the fighting is also exciting, but what makes me feel uncomfortable is putting on the necklace for Xiaobashi Shizuru. There is an indescribable awkwardness, which is really uncomfortable. I feel completely at odds with the main character's character. I'm shooting myself in the foot and destroying my own people. It feels really awkward. I don't know if it's just me who feels this way [scrolls] [scrolls] But I still support the author to write the plot well. I hope there won't be such awkward things in the future [please update] [please update] After the revision of Chapter 67, it is indeed more in line with the character of the male protagonist and is no longer so abrupt.

I haven't reviewed it for a long time. The character of this male protagonist is very suitable to me. [Cool] [Cool] Come on, don't be a eunuch.

OKOK I have caught up to more than 50 chapters for the time being. Judging from these, the plot, characterization, and settings of this book are still unexciting. It is also very immersive when reading. Of course, the author also added some jokes. However, some of these jokes are only known after reading the book or reading the book. They are considered little easter eggs. And the author likes to write foreshadowing. Sometimes people are confused until they see the end, so they have to read slowly and think about it. This also causes the readers to be a little confused about the setting. When I read the plot, I thought it was a battle. It turns out that it is a combination of battle, emotion, and reasoning, with a preference for emotion and reasoning. It is more about the shaping of the characters, the elicitation of philosophical insights, and the reasons for the occurrence of the incident, rather than simply fighting and killing. The settings are a bit sewed but still have my own style. It looks relatively novel and quite interesting. The characterization is pretty good, but some of it is unclear. The president of the reasoning department later portrayed social, weapon, power, wealth, gossip, and foreknowledge. The reasoning was taken over by the protagonist (or did she just want to see the protagonist say it?). Xiaoqiao's maturity and naturalness mentioned earlier seemed a bit out of place. Deviations in writing style and narrative: lack of words and calm narration, but I can write some interesting words that reflect the theme and trigger insights. However, the author has read a lot of dramas and books (both now and in the past) Overall, it's a rare gem of a tomato (it attracted me anyway), but since it may be the first time for the author to write an article and he still has to go to work, I'll see if it can be more exciting in the future. There are also too many paragraphs, and it might be better to change the symbol for the inner words. When I read quickly, sometimes I really don't know which ones are said and which are not (for example, the symbol for the inner words is changed to ""?)

What to say about this book! Very to my liking. For someone like me who is not engaged in production, how can I not fantasize about it? On a dark and windy night, on the dark side of the world, fighting against the unknown is not for any great reason, it is just a struggle to make ends meet. It seems that you have a complete sense of mystery and uniqueness in front of everyone, as if you don't belong to this world, but after all, you have left an "anchor" in a strange world. In this world, only the "anchor" is enough. We have a tacit understanding with a few people that does not require words, and we talk about things that are unique to "us" that no one else understands or understand. Don't covet too much, just a few loved ones. Coveting for greatness, only coveting the most "perfect" and "complete" love. It fulfilled my fantasy of hanging silk when I was in school. Even when I read your book, I feel so immersed in it that I feel low self-esteem when I regain my consciousness. On the one hand, he thinks that Shen Lun's fantasy is wrong and unhelpful to him. One side is like a drug addict, eagerly waiting for the next chapter. The author's words, writing style, and conception make me feel admired and at the same time want to drown in this fantasy. Maybe when others see me, I am just suffering from hysteria, but the author begs you to update it! ! ! Even though the data is not ideal, I beg the author to update it! ! ! In my opinion, in my opinion, the author's writing is superb, I must stick to it! ! !

Okay, okay, only Xiao Chunan can write such a beautiful interaction.

Shennong It is an original battle love story. Although the main character has a P5 name, it actually has nothing to do with it. It is considered a semi-invincible style, with female competition and a Shura field. It seems to be a harem at the moment. The writing is quite excellent. As an original novel, the plot control is also okay. Although the rhythm of the latest chapter is not well grasped, in general, there are no poisonous points. If you want to read original articles or combat articles, you can read it. The battles have a bit of a curse-like feeling, and the heroine's character is also quite good. It is worth reading. Purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding, purple sweet potato pudding.

The first few chapters are very well written. The author is particularly good at describing some scenes with special tension in freeze-frames. It feels like reading a comic and has a very graphic feel. In this tense moment, the eerie atmosphere is particularly well described and impressive. At the end of Shizuru Kobashi's chapter, the plot started to go a little wrong: Shizuru Kobashi expressed his feelings to the male protagonist, and this character began to quickly become flat and routine. It can also be said that her image has been completed, and the focus of the follow-up is not on her. However, in fact, she cannot be avoided in the back, which makes the contrast between the image behind and the front too great. (In Chainsaw Man 1, after Fujimoto tells a person's story, he "executes" a character through the plot, neatly and neatly, allowing the character to stay in the most exciting place) Xiaoqiao's initiative to compete for the male protagonist kicked off the party struggle. Multiple female protagonists competed together, but the writing was too formulaic, and the ambiguous plot was too typical. People really can't help but believe whether the author is really what he said: Xuan is depressed. If you really want to read some Japanese love plots, the following chapters are suitable

The opening remarks didn't say throw away your brain, which already exceeded 70% to 80% of Tomato. In the following text, the male protagonist's IQ is online and his thinking is rational. It is rare that although there is a system, the system has no thoughts, and it will not suddenly release any tasks that cannot be completed and then cancel them. It has not become the embodiment of the author's thinking and received good reviews. The follow-up is unclear, but for now, it is a good book.

Love to watch. It combines the detective's daily life with ghostly elements, plus multiple emotional branches. Each main line and branch task is interspersed with emotional branches, making the heroine's feelings natural and natural. Looking forward to the day when the Crystal Palace is built!

The heroine is well written and each has distinct characteristics, but I feel like the author followed me for five years before writing it [shy]

The subject matter is something I really want to see, and the first plot is good. The text and pictures are very strong. Reading this novel gave me the feeling that I wanted to watch a movie. It's top quality.

There are no poisonous points at the moment. I feel that the theme of fate runs through the whole text. The dialogue between the characters has a natural and smooth feeling. It reflects the fate I mentioned earlier and directly connects the characters invisibly. If you can accept the harem, stream of consciousness, and light novel style, you can check it out.

The writing is very interesting. I haven't read much of it yet, but it can arouse people's interest. Some parts of the description or scene changes may make people feel dizzy, but it's actually not harmful. I really like light novels with this kind of feeling. Keep up the good work, the author

The Japanese light flavor is very much in line with the Tokyo supernatural genre, with suspenseful campus "love?" Elements. The plot is very interesting, and the characters are vivid and full, which can be found in past dramas. But for Tomato readers who are accustomed to reading cool articles, there is a certain threshold. The author's reading of Nikgaru's original work is absolutely amazing [laughing evilly] Otherwise, the writing style and the character's unclear lines would not be so full of flavor. I can only find Tokyo Exorcist in the same genre on Tomato. Although I personally have a better impression of the book "Physical Soul Removal without using your brain [laughing]". In fact, this book may have better results when it was published at the starting point. The writing and prose are 99% of Tomato's works, but it will only be read a lot and may be of interest to old bookworms [laughing]

It's good to read. I personally think that I have read a lot of books. This book by the author really shines for me. Some people think that the Jingliu chapter is a bit flawed, but I think that whether it is the author's writing style, the tribute plot, the novel world setting, or the grasp of the plot, it is better than 90% of Tomato's novels at the moment. There are not too many cookie-cutter routines, and there are no abrupt emotions. The performance in the Jingliu chapter is very much like a tool man? But as an ordinary person without special abilities and no supreme authority, how can he express himself in this crisis-ridden incident before all the answers are revealed? Anyway, I think the author is really better than countless so-called veteran authors. Personal opinion, please don't apply it to yourself

The most uncomfortable thing I have seen so far is that the people watching the Shura field are a bit tired. The last heroine joining the harem feels abrupt, like a sweet story about being in love with his girlfriend, and then a man appears and says he has an engagement, and then the protagonist It feels like the return of the Dragon King to seize the bride. The hero and villain in this article have an online IQ. The hero has high combat power and no ntr. The detective puzzle part is also ok. The author has great talent in describing certain aspects. Generally speaking, it is in the upper level of Tomato. I hope the author will work hard.

Very invincible, very good-looking, very youthful, harem-like, but not messy at all, and also has a very low-key and very persuasive plot. The author's writing style is also very good, 1/4 of Jiangnan, which is considered to be very top among Tomatoes. It is the kind that can get a contract at the starting point. The author also interacts frequently, not very hard-working and very hard-working. It is an absolute treasure, very top. If I don't lower my head, I'll have to type one less word [face covering]

The author has written this book quite well, such as the reasoning part, which is relatively difficult to write because it is an online text. If it is too simple, no one will read it, and if it is too difficult, no one will read it. The author has done a good job and has done a good job of it. Let me tell you again what I think of the failings of this book. In the parts of this book that I have seen, the error rate in symbols and other symbols is too high, and the reading experience has deteriorated. The method of promoting the development of the story is too failed. Two tasks to help troubled classmates are definitely good in anime, but this is a web novel. This method is really not as good as accidental discovery or the male protagonist rescuing the girls who accidentally fell into the netherworld. There is also an author who likes to write short compositions about Xiaoqiao. If this kind of writing is done well, it is called literary youth, but if it is not well written, it is called dead pretending. If it is less, it will have charm, but if it is too much, it will be tasteless. If the author wants to write it, he can open two extra chapters for fans. The above is my personal opinion, there are different opinions that can be pointed out I haven't read much yet. This is just my current opinion on the book. If there is any difference with my opinion in the future, please don't criticize me.

It is a really good novel. My rating is about 8.3-8.6. The only flaw, which may not even be considered a shortcoming, is that it is too classic, a classic Japanese novel about harem stock trading. . . I think the writing style is okay, I hope I don't die from it. PS If I remember correctly, this is the author's first novel. If it is true, the quality will be of this quality in the future, and even higher. Then I feel that the future is promising. I'd like to give it a try.

It surpasses 99% of Tomato's novels. The author knows what he is writing. There are foreshadowings, hints and plots. The writing style is also good. The most important thing is that there are no homogeneous characters and no plots where he vomits. This is very rare. The author is a bit mediocre, but his writing style is really good. This book becomes more and more interesting the more you read it. It ignores daily life and love and only talks about the main plot. It is also a rare masterpiece. It is much better than the various routines that only know how to slap people in the face, pretend to be pigs, eat tigers, and go crazy. But to be honest, according to the way the author writes it, I wouldn't be surprised if this book is blocked someday. It's so daring to write.

It has multiple female protagonists, a slow-burning, light novel style, very Japanese-style, and the arrangement will definitely make it more enjoyable. It also has a flavor of youth literature, with literary youth descriptions. A very retro novel (complex comic style from 3-4 years ago). I am not the audience. 4 Stars. Possible red flags: None. I was shocked to see that there were many other female protagonists who were really young and had daily regrets about their youth. This book is much better than other similar books, 5 stars.

I'll put it bluntly, it's a waste of money if no one reads this kind of good book. The pace is comfortable and neither urgent nor slow. The writing is fluent and there are many metaphors but not the Riddler. The characters are very distinct. When fighting monsters, the blood boils. The reasoning is interlocked. The daily love life is completely a Japanese light love comedy, but the three parts complement each other very harmoniously. It is an urban fantasy Japanese love comedy with multiple female protagonists.

It looks really good, please update it soon The ideas in the article are clear, the logic is smooth, and the plot is not cliche. The main reason is that the characters are very well created. I am looking forward to the author's next creations.

After reading more than 60 chapters, I don't know why, but I feel like a dragon? But it's well written, and the protagonist's personality is very in line with my taste. By the way, half of the writing is done, and the author is missing a piece of cake [laughter]

Quick update, and your title really needs to be changed. I almost didn't click in. I don't know if some of the previous chapters are not smooth to read because of the changes, but the plot makes up for this part. Five-star praise.

The writing style is a bit green, and it was obviously exposed in the early stages of the novel. However, the perception improved a lot later. It can be seen that the author is trying his best to write a good book. This is a very good advantage. I hope you will not forget your original intention and I wish you success.