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It's good-looking, and very creative, but I think something I don't like is that the heroine's status is obviously equal to that of the hero, but why does the heroine go to the hero to do something? If it is to eat those poisonous weeds, it is obvious that when you give an order, the hero will order someone to bring them over, why should the heroine eat it herself? Even if she went to eat it herself, she went to work as a guard next to the male protagonist, and she still obeyed him in everything. Even though they had the same status, she just knelt down when the male protagonist asked her to. She really didn't think about it at all. She was also one of the elders in the back mountain. Is she so obedient? The bad thing is that you clearly wrote that the status of the heroine is equal to that of the male protagonist. However, the way you wrote the article still shows that the man is on top and the woman is on the bottom. This is very bad. I hope it can be changed. If it is just to create opportunities to meet the male protagonist, then why doesn't the male protagonist go to meet the female protagonist, and why does the female protagonist have to run to meet the male protagonist? If it's about concealing one's identity, then I don't think the heroine has the feeling of concealing one's identity. It seems like she is the bodyguard beside the male protagonist, and she doesn't have the dignity of the elders in the back mountain? There is no so-called antagonism. I just can't stand it. Why don't you just say that the heroine is really a simple guard, but she has a status in the back mountain? If it hadn't been mentioned at the beginning that the heroine is the elder of the Feng Palace in the back mountain, I would have thought that she was just a guard based on her obedience. What I don't want is that the identities of the heroine and the male protagonist are obviously equal, so why change the heroine to this? If it is a simple meal ticket, then I don't think it is necessary. I hope the author can take a serious look at it. I think this idea is indeed very novel and the direction is very attractive. However, the status of the male and female protagonists seems to be equal, but in fact they are not. And why do you just want to be so obedient? She will kneel down when the male protagonist asks her to. Do you think she is really the male protagonist's bodyguard? (｀Δ´)! It is written in the article that she was pampered and pampered by the three elders in the back mountain. Although she often knelt, she did so on soft cushions and because the three elders were her elders. So why did the male protagonist do so? She is not the real bodyguard of the hero, so why should she listen to him? Ask him to kneel and she will kneel. She is an elder. In terms of identity as the male protagonist, she should be a little older than the male protagonist. Anyway, I think it is the author. You gave the heroine a good identity, but you did not tell the heroine how to use her. I hope you can read it carefully. This article is quite short. I hope there will be some improvements in the future.

This heroine is also a very special person. She kneels down whenever she says. She is really special.