Deliver*

It's pretty good. The plot is not boring at all. It brings back the feeling of reading first-person supernatural novels when I was in junior high school. It's not like the system flow and rules flow now. The shortcoming is that there are too few inner activities and expressions of the characters, which may also be related to the first person, but it is indeed too little described. Whether it is the male protagonist or the female protagonist, some of their actions and words are a bit strange and nonsensical. The plot is also a bit unfamiliar. Although there is horror, sensationalism, and laughter, it is all on the light side and cannot be immersed in. It would have been better to have a deeper description. For example, the part where the male protagonist ran away from home was a little underwritten. The interaction with the female protagonist at home is also straightforward. It would be better to enrich it. Overall, it's pretty good. Good luck to the author.

It has surpassed more than 90% of Tomato novels. It is very well written. I don't know why no one has read it.

It looks good, don't go into the dark room [laughs evilly]

An author who dares to write very well, and the scale is quite large. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is well described, and the story is also wonderfully written.

I lifted up my pants and said with a blushing face: "Pray half a bucket of water and practice while tied up every day!"

I haven't read such a high-quality book in a long time. The male protagonist was so happy to scold him [face covering]

It's been a long time since I've seen such an abstract and interesting supernatural novel. It's pretty good.

@ Is it Shuangjie?

In fact, I don't dare to give too many stars for fear of being blocked. It's very well written.

It's pretty good, and it's got a head start.

It's really good [learned]

I beg you to finish writing it

Did the author review it himself?

Indeed, I prefer this kind of abstract protagonist

The dialogue is quite interesting. Keep at it

Some are funny, some are scary, and some are passionate. Sometimes when I see tension, the author's brain circuit makes me confused, a bit like Stephen Chow's style of returning to the soul.

The book I found in the middle of the night is both sweet and scary. It is also of the highest quality. At least it is not illogical or poisonous.

It's beautiful, the author writes it very well

A very good funny article [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The heroine has an interesting and honorable personality

Well written. . . . Hahaha

Very well written, keep up the good work [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's so pretty, really.

It's okay, five-star praise

It's really pretty

Okay, okay, a bit interesting

Still pretty good.

It's very well written, why is no one reading it?

Why do you always post at 12pm [what]

Well written, to my liking