The Real Daughter Is Back, Mr. Lu, You Are Turning Around Again

I finished reading the update in the early morning. I haven't read a novel in a long time. I didn't expect that it would be my favorite. I'm so happy. [Shy] 1. The conflicts in the novel come one after another, the story connection is natural and smooth, one link is linked to the other, the story is strong, and the connection between chapters is tight without any interruption. The only thing I think is a little flat, maybe because the conflict is too superficial, just for the sake of creating conflict. Or it may be that each conflict is not intense enough, and there is no sense of tension and oppression that can make readers' hearts beat faster and their emotions rise and fall. Or it is a conflict that involves changing the soup without changing the medicine, and the final solution is a single way. 2. Yan Lili: I like this little girl very much. She is so cute. She is more vivid and three-dimensional. She is so cute. Shen Qingqiu: The emotional portrayal is not surprising, but the story between him and Shen Qingyan is interesting. At first, his love for his sister was pure and deep, but in the end... (Not revealed), that kind of love and hate, and the inner struggle made him become three-dimensional and real. It captured my heart right away and made me look forward to the direction of his plot. Lu Yanci: 1. I can distinguish him from others. He has a certain three-dimensionality, but is a little empty. Some of his actions in the article actually made me feel uncomfortable. For example, the original plot embarrasses the strong man. Let's not talk about the moral system, just speaking from the perspective of characterization, the behavior of the male protagonist makes his image a little disgusting to me, just because people are chasing him, trying to sleep with him, and looking stupid, it is all delusions about him. Therefore, I feel... His image is not high enough for me, and he cannot be ranked. 2. From the plot point of view, the male protagonist became obsessed with the female protagonist because of a one-night stand. He hated her so much before, but now he must be obsessed with her. Emotional development takes time to settle, and this kind of plot seems to be forcibly advanced. In terms of characterization, the male protagonist is only obsessed with one-night stand (and he started cooking very soberly when he encountered a delicate body). His behavior is superficial and lacks depth. After all, as mentioned in the early stage, Shen Lulu also fascinated him through this, which means that if Shen Lulu succeeds this time, he will also be obsessed with it. Like a puppet controlled by settings, or simply superficial, just a little bit more superficial, superficial in a single-minded way. Shen Qingyan: 1. It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into shaping the heroine. The heroine has a dazzling array of labels, and every one of them is eye-catching. But what I want to see is not a list of traits. The heroine has been given many shining points, and in theory she will be a charming character. But for now, she is like a container full of advantages. 2. The heroine calls other women "yellow-faced women", which is a very old and stereotyped way of characterization. This reinforces the idea of ​​judging people based on appearance and ageism. A charming heroine should have a more intelligent and in-depth way of dealing with "bad" female characters, instead of using such simple, crude and appearance-shaming words, which will make the plot development seem blunt and low-level. 3. When I first met the heroine, I thought she was mature, rational, sexy, and cunning. However, the heroine's blushing, heartbeat, and strong emotional reaction to the male protagonist whom she had not met a few times felt too rushed and lacked reasonable emotional foreshadowing. It was like forcibly creating a love line. The plot seemed stiff, and it also made me feel that the characters were separated. The above is my personal opinion. I don't mean I don't like it. I just think it can be better. I hope the author will write better and better in the future. And I found that this is the author's first novel. It feels very good to be able to write it like this. I will continue to follow up on it. (It just happened to be where I was looking forward to it, ahhhhhhhhhh.) Looking forward to looking forward to looking forward to it. [Please update]

It's chapter 80 now. The progress of the male and female protagonists is very slow, and the relationship between the heroine and the Shen family is very complicated. There is one chapter that feels like the heroine's eldest brother likes Shen Lulu? The identity of the heroine has not been revealed yet. Shen Lulu still has a lot of scenes. I would also like to ask what the person who traveled through time said, "The children of the Shen family have nowhere to rely on." What does it mean? My suggestion: When I read it, there were one or two chapters where the surnames of the people were spelled wrong. I hope you can be more careful and not leave too much suspense. If you leave so much, you will have to consider many factors when writing the plot later. It is very troublesome, but overall it is very good and the plot is good. I look forward to the follow-up.

Did you find a treasure? ? ? ! ! ! It's good-looking, I'm really looking forward to it, and suddenly I want to ask, can I have a model like my brother's in the future? I really like him. He doesn't appear much, but... Forget it, love is a feeling that can't be explained.

I hope Shen Qingqiu and Shen Qingyan can reconcile

This is really nice, nice

It looks good. The heroine is very smart and I like her personality. The hero expresses his love directly without pretending.

Tomato's first novel made me think a lot, scratched my heart and lungs, and gave me a strong desire to express myself.

It's really, really good to read. The author's writing style is very good. I've been following it all morning until the end. Good luck! ! ! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

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Beautiful, very beautiful

I like it, it would be nice if the love lines between the male and female protagonists were more reasonable [blowing kiss]

It would have been better if the author had finished writing in a larger size. It would be even more uncomfortable if I had to push him every day [crying] [crying]

It looks good. Please give the male and female protagonists more roles. I like the scenes between Shen Qingqiu and Yan Yan

It's not enough, not enough at all. It's super invincible and beautiful. The author is great. Come on and update. I love you [blowing kiss] [like]

What's the age difference between the male and female protagonists?

It's so beautiful. I've been watching it all night. Please update it soon! ! !

It's okay, it's okay, it's okay. I hope the male and female protagonists will progress faster and the plot will be more exciting.

Hahahahaha, very beautiful and disgusting, I hope it will be updated soon

Very good, the plot is very novel

Is the male protagonist a double clean? 🤔

Tomato has yet to have a novel that I keep up with, and this is the first one.

It looks good, but if it's not good enough, the author will update it soon! !