Comprehensive Comics: the Bad Luck Was Lifted, but They Collapsed

Looks great, if there is a chance to add some characters from the God-like system (Sneak Naiko!, Noragami, Kobayashi's Dragon Maid, Gabriel's Fall), or the subsequent protagonists can become indestructible and round and flawless through training (God of Marriage, Guardian Cat Girl Himari, Sabagi). In short, it embodies the spirit of the time traveler who cannot defeat Xiaoqiang, does not bow to fate, and entertains himself until death. He jumps repeatedly on the bottom line of life and death in the world consciousness, and finally has a happy ending where the world has no choice but to recognize his legal identity.

Touma also has a Fantasy Killer. The protagonist has nothing but misfortune every day [face covering] How about giving him some abilities and adding some supernatural powers? If that doesn't work, just use a Fantasy Killer.

Be nice to Yinglili, it hurts to see you

While watching, I suddenly remembered a sentence: The world is fake, but love is real!

It's 2:00pm! I watched it for three hours. Saw the latest chapter! In the early stage, I was very sad and painful, and I couldn't help but feel aggrieved and painful! But the sudden transformation later made me a little uncomfortable! The knife still has to be a bit of a knife! I feel like something is missing now! If you continue to write like this, I'm afraid that your writing will be exactly the same as those harem romances! Come on! Like this book very much. I never stay up late and I saw it at 2am today! And there's still something left to be desired! I also feel very sorry for Jia Tenghui

Pay tribute to the legendary endurance king Laolin, you will definitely survive to the finale even if death comes.

The plot is okay, but as for whether to add new anime or comics If the protagonist is not added, the number of chapters may be 100 or 200 less and the end may be over. However, because there are only a few anime characters, the plot is small and easy to write, and the rating will be higher (provided that the writing is good). If added, because there are more anime characters, there will be more plots, so for For novice authors, it may be difficult to write (I personally think that I am not the author after all), and the protagonist may be even more unlucky. After all, everyone does not come to see the protagonist being tortured. Because anime has many plots, there are more plots, with chapters of 300 or 400 or more. To put it simply, it is The quantity is large and the control is full. As for the rating, it can only depend on the author's writing style (the above is just my personal opinion!)

Very interesting setting, individual misfortune, release of violence, reliance on background. (My parents also described it very vividly) But I'm used to reading Shuangwen, and the feeling of powerlessness brought about by fate is too heavy. Then I only saw the author announcing the old ending, almost half of it? A little too heavy for me to eat. Therefore, I plan to write a novel (offline in my notebook) with a similar setting (individual misfortune), and hunt down the people who bring misfortune. Of course, they are not ordinary people (that would be too boring) Because I am not good at writing characters, I will write about a loner, with the main line of destroying bad luck and destiny.

It's a good thing, the emotions are rich, and the plot is perfect. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, but it was a bit uncomfortable to get close to the middle. I hope you won't abandon the book. I wish you all a happy reading and a happy life. I'm unlucky, each person has a Miami [shy][shy]

It's okay, but the protagonist is treated too badly by the world. You feel like there could be a side story where the protagonist kills the entire world alone. Kill them all, the whole world. It feels so good to think about it [laughs]

First of all, I approve of this book. After all, it is indeed well written, but the plot is too uncomfortable. Although I have not finished it yet, I feel that if the story process is too good, the ending may not be so perfect. Although the story will always have its imperfections, this does make it more perfect...

I feel like I can be more cruel later on, like adding Charlotte's setting, and then the protagonist gets some kind of super power to make others scapegoat, and then goes crazy and makes others feel pain [sneaky laugh]

I think the point of view is very novel, but in fact, from another perspective, the evil in the world should be aimed at the spirit, and it should be able to withstand and continue to live. The mental report, according to the panel, is at least three question marks. So if it is for a comprehensive comic, it should definitely be able to reach the level of awakening ability, so if it comes to lifting the bad luck in the future, I think it is enough on my own. It is best not to write a system or the like. I hope you can help the author.

If you want to read this book, you must have strong psychological endurance. Before the bad luck is lifted, the content is very depressing. The author's writing style is very good and can make people feel depressed and helpless. Secondly, even after the bad luck is lifted, there are still depressing plots [crying] and the author really wants to write a bad ending, so you need to be mentally prepared in advance.

It's very good. The characters are well portrayed with flesh and blood, the inner description is detailed, and the depressing atmosphere is rendered very well. However, there is no clear main line in the front, and it is always depressing. The progress is slow and the pace is not very good. Overall, it is not bad. Recommend [Like]

Dao, I don't want to give you a good review, but I see myself in him. Unlucky things happen to me several times every year. Although I am not as unlucky as him, it is still a bit miserable compared with others. I feel that the author followed me and wrote this book [Please review] (funny)

I had a sudden idea when I was fishing at work. I thought it would be very cool to write it based on the male protagonist's template and add an evolutionary trustworthy person. The male protagonist traveled to the comics and then the world consciousness was corrupted, causing the male protagonist to be unlucky. The former world consciousness gave the male protagonist the power to become Nexus before the power disappeared. Also, before fighting the monster boss, the male protagonist was given a breather. Monsters will only appear next to the protagonist of the comic. The male protagonist will be very unlucky when the protagonist is alive, but he has to transform to protect them. Then contact with them will definitely create feelings and barriers. Then when I couldn't beat the final boss, I turned off the lights like Brother Zhun. Awakened by the love of the one you love, then defeat the boss, and finally die in the arms of the one you love. It must be very sharp to write like this. It's a pity that I'm not good at writing and I'm lazy. Why don't you try the author's next book? [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's good to watch, but it's too harsh (especially the previous outline). I hope there will be a turning point in middle school (don't wait for high school). For example: despite being cursed by the world, I still integrated into the world (affecting the heroine). Don't be too sharp in the future [smile]

I have a guess here. Since it has been confirmed that the world will covets the protagonist's luck, is there any hypothesis that the protagonist's luck is very high, and the world will discovered that the protagonist's system is a novice, so it bribed the big light ball to turn the protagonist's legal time-travel into illegal time-travel, and then seized the system to prevent the system from discovering clues and taking the opportunity to seize the luck. By the time the home planet and system are aware of it, luck will be almost won. [Think]

From my point of view, I feel that this book is very well written. I can't help but curse a few words while reading it. However, from the perspective of this book, it is very well written and makes me feel very involved. After reading it, I feel very uncomfortable and want to cry. The writing is good, but the writing is too painful. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but forgive me because the author is too uncomfortable (currently I have read Chapter 54)

The writing is good, and the emotions and details are very deep. The whole book is very depressing, and everyone feels stressed. Suitable for readers who have strong emotional empathy and can tolerate depression. If you want to watch comprehensive comics, this is really not the place for you.

After reading the first few chapters, the protagonist is really... Very miserable. Bearing all the malice in the world, the protagonist is constantly beaten to death, and then a pair of parents who love him are arranged to make him struggle vertically and cycle through collapse and recovery. I want to die, but I can't (╯°Д°)╯ ┻━┻

The setting of the unlucky guy only has a time-limited freshness. But I don't deny the author's enthusiasm. There are certain compensation mechanisms, but they have the same limitations. There is no way to go back to the normal route with this plot line. The more ideological line is not accumulated enough. This kind of self-generated work has potential. But it is also difficult to determine the route. The lack of a route means that the reader will jump around at some stage, or head to a suitable destination. Just read it as a fine short story, the quality and enthusiasm are enough.

This subject matter is relatively new, and it is a relatively good book for those who like to read anime and fanfiction! The content description is also relatively good, and the image and personality of each character are relatively good. [Note] Unfortunately, it is a bit short. Compared with other books I have read, the portrayal of the protagonist is already very good.

It's so well written. I've read very few books like Tomato. The most famous one is The Lost City of Beasts, both of which have male protagonists who are quite miserable, but the only thing is that this male protagonist is even more tragic and incompetent. If I change the synopsis compared to the author, I would rather read the original synopsis.

This is the kind of book that makes people want to read it if they feel like it.

Nice! Love to see! Love watching! See more! You have to watch it to death!

Good luck, the setting is very novel and the plot is not too toxic. The author updates it very quickly.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen such a subject.

Happy ending, wow, the middle was too painful and skipped a few chapters. Happiness seems a bit hasty, but only through so much pain can we appreciate its preciousness.