Anime Crossover: I Don't Want to Be Unlucky Anymore

Looks great, if there is a chance to add some characters from the God-like system (Sneak Naiko!, Noragami, Kobayashi's Dragon Maid, Gabriel's Fall), or the subsequent protagonists can become indestructible and round and flawless through training (God of Marriage, Guardian Cat Girl Himari, Sabagi). In short, it embodies the spirit of the time traveler who cannot defeat Xiaoqiang, does not bow to fate, and entertains himself until death. He jumps repeatedly on the bottom line of life and death in the world consciousness, and finally has a happy ending where the world has no choice but to recognize his legal identity.

Touma also has a Fantasy Killer. The protagonist has nothing but misfortune every day 🤦 How about giving him some abilities and adding some supernatural powers? If that doesn't work, just use a Fantasy Killer.

Be nice to Yinglili, it hurts to see you

It's a good thing, the emotions are rich, and the plot is perfect. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, but it was a bit uncomfortable to get close to the middle. I hope you won't abandon the book. I wish you all a happy reading and a happy life. I'm unlucky, each person has a Miami 😳😳

It's 2:00pm! I watched it for three hours. Saw the latest chapter! In the early stage, I was very sad and painful, and I couldn't help but feel aggrieved and painful! But the sudden transformation later made me a little uncomfortable! The knife still has to be a bit of a knife! I feel like something is missing now! If you continue to write like this, I'm afraid that your writing will be exactly the same as those harem romances! Come on! Like this book very much. I never stay up late and I saw it at 2am today! And there's still something left to be desired! I also feel very sorry for Jia Tenghui

While watching, I suddenly remembered a sentence: The world is fake, but love is real!

Very interesting setting, individual misfortune, release of violence, reliance on background. (My parents also described it very vividly) But I'm used to reading Shuangwen, and the feeling of powerlessness brought about by fate is too heavy. Then I only saw the author announcing the old ending, almost half of it? A little too heavy for me to eat. Therefore, I plan to write a novel (offline in my notebook) with a similar setting (individual misfortune), and hunt down the people who bring misfortune. Of course, they are not ordinary people (that would be too boring) Because I am not good at writing characters, I will write about a loner, with the main line of destroying bad luck and destiny.

Pay tribute to the legendary endurance king Laolin, you will definitely survive to the finale even if death comes.

The plot is okay, but as for whether to add new anime or comics If the protagonist is not added, the number of chapters may be 100 or 200 less and the end may be over. However, because there are only a few anime characters, the plot is small and easy to write, and the rating will be higher (provided that the writing is good). If added, because there are more anime characters, there will be more plots, so for For novice authors, it may be difficult to write (I personally think that I am not the author after all), and the protagonist may be even more unlucky. After all, everyone does not come to see the protagonist being tortured. Because anime has many plots, there are more plots, with chapters of 300 or 400 or more. To put it simply, it is The quantity is large and the control is full. As for the rating, it can only depend on the author's writing style (the above is just my personal opinion!)

First of all, I approve of this book. After all, it is indeed well written, but the plot is too uncomfortable. Although I have not finished it yet, I feel that if the story process is too good, the ending may not be so perfect. Although the story will always have its imperfections, this does make it more perfect...