HP: Viper Stoudemire, Defeated Online

Very nice. The heroine was awake and did not betray Snape. Instead, face them with a normal attitude toward others. I also like Penny's changes! Also, the plot where Snape couldn't see his own emotions and was always secretly fighting and unhappy was quite interesting. Our little school director is really good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

In the book, Xiao Si's temper was very bad at the beginning because the heroine interrupted his first encounter, which he had been preparing for for a long time. It can be said that they both hate each other. Later, the two of them interacted more and more, and they became classmates who were quarreling with each other. Only after Xiaosi realized his emotions, did he start to restrain himself and become considerate. The heroine is not born with a lack of emotions. She knows whoever treats her well. When Xiao Si is not acting weird, she is also normal. When someone you care about encounters something, he or she will become more emotional. This is normal. This is a normal emotion. She just never thinks about love to herself. So I woke up very late. It is just about the love of an ordinary person, not the story of the destined girl who wants to save the Sect from the very beginning.

It's well written, but it's a little lacking now. I'll comment in detail when the plot unfolds in the future. I have to say that I like the heroine's character now. Penny's character here is cuter than Lily, who is too black and white. The heroine also developed a wand that allows Brother Squib to use magic. I like it so much.

I like Petunia very much, I think she is cuter than Lily, and Snape is secretly jealous but can't figure out why he is angry, so I'd like to give him a thumbs up.

It's a really good book, and the heroine is really smart. And the image of Sijiao is also maintained perfectly, without feeling OOC at all. The poisonous mouth feels so right, this is it. It's really a very good book.

Yes, the writing in the early stages was not that exciting because of the need to connect with the world, but the settings in the later stages are amazing. This book still has a storyline with a female protagonist, and more divine settings are added in the later stages of the plot, but overall it is quite successful, there is not much of a romantic line, and there are not many frustrations later on. The ending was a bit rushed at the end. It was a pity that we didn't write more about the connections between the original characters and instead ended it with a battle of gods that didn't have a sense of substitution. Maybe it was because the setting here was a bit empty. Then we still found a lot of holes that were left unfilled, including the mention of Severus' pureblood awakening lineage at the beginning, which didn't touch on anything later. In fact, it didn't need to be written.

Super nice. Than a lot. All of them are good-looking, because most of them have written a lot of original content. If I want to read the original work, do I still need to read the fanfic? Sure enough, it's still nice to watch this kind of pro-age era, and it's super interesting.

The heroine is very clear-headed and rational, and she doesn't deliberately cling to her. Her characterization is very comprehensive, and there is no one character who is unreasonably bad.

I hope I can persevere. There are very few fanfics that can make me cry, but not none, but at least there isn't one that I can watch to the end🌚

The author's writing is very good, the writing style is okay, I like it, but Severus doesn't need redemption, never will. It's a little OOC, not much, I quite like it.

It's quite good to watch, and it gave Severus a different life. However, the emotional interaction with Severus was a bit less. I felt that it could describe some intimate interactions but it didn't go into depth. In the later stage, I may have wanted to wrap up the story quickly. The pace of the whole story was a bit fast and there were few details, and some places were not explained.

It looks good, but I can't give it full marks. I'm really afraid that one day it will suddenly be banned. More than 7 of the books I read have been banned.

Oh my god, I found a very beautiful treasure book,

I like the character design of the heroine, and she is slowly showing her strength. Don't stop updating, be sure to keep writing, bye🙏

It's beautiful right up to the end, the pace is good, it doesn't feel emotionally slow, and it feels like it should be this way. The only shortcoming is that after a period of interruption, it is very confusing and the feeling between the gods is not clear. But aside from this, it's still very interesting to watch. Yeah, it's finally the finale. The extra Severus' monologue is also very good. I finally finished it after staying up all night

Pretty good, worth pursuing

An unexpected surprise to see.

Not bad, not bad, but to be honest, Severus's attitude towards Al was really bad at the beginning. If he hadn't been pushed by me, I might have wanted to slap him.

Hehehehe, come on, the novel is very interesting~

There are so many unexpected angles, so beautiful! ! !

Oh~, I love baby Aier, I love Sifu, and of course I love the author Da Da [adoration] [blowing kiss]

Some scenes are too provocative It's a very good book. Why is it rated so low and so few people read it? What a pity.

I hope there will be less CP and more plot, but I have to praise Sri Lanka's venomous mouth, which is not OOC at all.

The author comes back soon, and the main character is a little too mature, so that's no big problem

The logical thinking is very clear and the heroine is also strong. I like it😘

I like to watch viper heroines instead of big virgins and cookie-cutter heartthrobs [cool]

Nice! Love does not account for much I really like the heroine! Read it all in one day! Cool! ! Wait for me to brush

Emotional transitions and so on are very natural, and the content of the book is also very popular with me. I think it's just that it's so good, I'd love to read more~

Excellent book

Good-looking, really good-looking