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The writing is quite good, the characters are created well, the rhythm of the plot is well grasped, and the emotional scenes are also well written. In addition, I am on the side of Sima. At present, the heroine feels that there is a high probability of tragedy. I hope the author does not write Sima to death first, and it would be good to leave a foreshadowing or influence on the key direction of the plot. Also, the battles and fighting scenes have not been fully shown yet, the author only described them. If you want to write a more detailed plot of the battle and the general situation of the army and the decision-making at the strategic level, it is recommended not to stick to the protagonist's modern strategic vision. You can refer to some ancient war military systems, organization and equipment, command systems, specific tactics and commands on site b. I believe that if it can be closer to historical facts and do more research, it will be quite good.

I think the emotional scenes so far are a bit toxic, but everything else is fine. The following are some of my suggestions, which I hope the author can read. 1. Increase productivity. Such as promoting the Quyuan plow and introducing new species from Vietnam (Champa rice is harvested three times a year), these are relatively simple and can be done. Only with the development of productive forces will the original manor economy disintegrate. When the manor economy disintegrates, the soil of the wealthy family will disappear. Just rely on physical elimination, and there will definitely be new gates. 2. Development of the Jiangnan area. Before the Anshi Rebellion, China's economic center had always been in the north, and the only highly developed areas were along the Yangtze River. Only by developing the south well can you have a stable rear. Otherwise, why would you make the northern expedition? 3. The implementation of the land equalization system and the military system. This has been tested by history. The Northern Zhou Dynasty destroyed the Northern Qi Dynasty, and the weak defeated the strong. The reason is that the equalization of land provides a more stable and high-quality source of soldiers. What's more, there is plenty of land in the undeveloped south, so why are we afraid that there will be no land for farming? 4. Merge prefectures and counties and streamline officials. Improve papermaking technology and promote movable type printing. Open courses and select talents. Three provinces and six divisions complete the central body shape. (After unification) 5. After completing the above points, you still have to look at the family's face. My, my, my, my dog's feet. If he dares to give you a look, then he is lovesick. You will have no problem with him if you do whatever you want. Finally, regarding the shaping of the heroine, no matter you are the emperor or a hero, there will definitely be more than one wife in the end. If you continue to do this as your heroine, if there are other girls in the future, compare again. Why should the heroine win? It is recommended that the image of the heroine be established through some things. For example, the queen of Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty also came from a high family. During the Xuanwu Gate period, he went to the army to personally comfort the soldiers. Her natal family member, the eldest grandson Wuji, is the number one hero of the Xuanwu Sect. This is the heroine, and she truly deserves her title. Otherwise, if you go to the back, what qualifications do you have to manage the backyard? Is it because of your big face? Of course, these are just some of my small opinions and suggestions. If you think you can, of course there is no problem in adopting them. If you think my nonsense makes you unhappy, please don't scold me. Thanks! I hope the author will get better and better, come on! [Sending Hearts]

Summary: A Tomato masterpiece (It's really good-looking, but maybe due to track restrictions, the results can't compare to those tomato books) 1. First of all, the protagonist was a warrior with faith before traveling through time. Let's just call him rebirth and become the most humble and humble beggar. Under the patrimonial system, one marries a daughter of a wealthy family whose class gap can be compared to two species. However, there are still problems with these wealthy daughters. This setting is a bit confusing. If you really want to marry a virtuous and virtuous person, there will be too many plots, and you will get tired of watching them. Difficult. It's quite nice. 2. The protagonist has a little golden finger, and his physical fitness is very ridiculous. It should almost be that the Overlord is still alive. This level is not too outrageous, because I don't really like watching it. Goldfinger is too strong a novel. Then relying on the military qualities of the previous life, he would basically kill indiscriminately in this troubled world. But he is currently helping his eldest brother conquer the world, and the two brothers have a good relationship. Where is his eldest brother? Because those who want to conquer the world must marry the princess. So at present, those political marriages are basically the protagonists. In the early stage, the big brother basically plays a role in promoting the plot. But this should also be a small foreshadowing. Because one of the heroines should be a princess. How does the author write it? 3. The author himself is also very strong, and the overall article reads very smoothly. However, I personally feel that the overall war strategy may be a bit too long. Too detailed. However, I feel that the author's writing is quite professional. It's just that this section is a bit more targeted, which may be better for book lovers such as war fans, but may be a bit dissuading for most readers. Because of the author's introduction and the title of his book, the readers it attracts should actually focus on the emotional plot of the heroine, such as the crematorium of chasing her husband. Of course it's best to have a good ending. It is the default premise that historical texts claim to be kings and contend for hegemony. Everyone will definitely know what it is when they click in.

The title of the book is ordinary, but the writing is very fluent. Some people commented that it is a female channel, but in my opinion, it is not because the author also wrote a book about Genshin Impact. At first glance, it was written by a man. The protagonist has a background in national defense, and the army he brings has modern characteristics, so it is very enjoyable to watch him arranging troops, like reading a military novel. Of course, I am not a military fan, but there are no flaws or poisonous points so far. If there is, it is the dream the male protagonist had when he was getting married. It was about his previous experience of liking someone. At present, I don't really like this character and I can't see his role, so I skipped the fourth and fifth chapters of Dream Writing without affecting the rest of the reading. In summary, tomatoes are considered to be good and non-toxic. At the starting point, they are about the level of ordinary good grass. If you don't want to see them, you can jump because they are mainly about fighting and supplemented by emotions, so you can eat them with confidence.

No, buddy, I was watching it yesterday, why was it killed today?

No, this book appeared on my recommendation list after less than 80 chapters. Why do I have this book? Therefore, I think the author should code my words very hard, at least to hundreds of thousands of words, right? Did you hear that? Update soon

After reading the first 30 chapters, I found it a little addictive. The male protagonist is well portrayed and fits my imagination of this kind of identity. Very refreshing, not bad The heroine is not lovable. Being of the aristocratic class, they eat the food of the family and live the life of the family. But he has no sense of family, does nothing well, is clumsy, and spills wine on the clothes of important guests. Can this be tolerated? His brother was right, he was nothing but skin. Maybe it's because of poor education? I still listen to partial beliefs and write so much. When I read the comments, it said it was a female channel? I don't think it's true. The emotional line is so polished and not as smooth as in other male-video novels. Moreover, the portrayal of the heroine is not good, she is not likable, and I would say she is not worthy of the hero at all. But a good book is indeed a good book, but if I really have to say that there is something poisonous about it, it would be the female protagonist.

Must be 5 stars, you can't eat it alone, you have to share it

Emotions are delicate. The protagonist's character has been developed! In fact, it would be interesting to add a little love between children and daughters in the story of "Struggle for Hegemony". The protagonist's character is sober in the world! Don't mess with technology! Pretty good! I will add a bookshelf to keep up with the updates!

It's quite good to read. This book is very unique. Those who like it will especially like it. However, it's a bit hard to accept if it doesn't match the radio wave. For example, the heroine's two-dimensional oral addiction is a bit poisonous to me. Overall, the flaws are not concealed. At least I will not give one star because I cannot accept the diversity of races. On the contrary, I will explore the psychological activities of the characters. The behavioral logic is very interesting to me, and the rhythm of the story is also good. The two lines are intertwined, and there is a degree of relaxation. The real good books are all pentagonal warriors. The kind that cuts off the emotional line, or is purely industrial saccharine is really meaningless. The upper limit is there. Come on, this book is a good practice. Find the right platform for the next book and fight to become a god.

Great book, why has it been removed from the shelves [almost crying]

Why has it been removed? I haven't finished reading it yet [smile]

There are not hundreds of thousands of people watching the 6.8 Rating [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Know why

The part where the veteran soldiers from the four major families fight was really funny, and it made up for all the drag points of the previous female videos. But having said that, the previous heroine's inner drama was quite good, a bit similar to a Japanese light novel. It makes people laugh when watching it.

The miserable lives of others have never been my concern

Where are the books? Damn it, refresh the book and it's gone? ? ?

I just finished reading it, why was it removed from the shelves? ? ?

Anchor anchor, why has it been removed from the shelves? Can you survive? [Cry][cry][cry]

I feel like the heroine is not well written, but the martial arts is really well written, and it's very touching. Although not very realistic

The writing is quite good, but the emotional scenes are a bit bad. I feel like Qin Gong might be better, with a clear exchange of interests. If you don't like it, don't remind me repeatedly.

It's nice to watch, but the emotional scenes are a bit too awkward. I hope the author can clarify it in the subsequent chapters or let the backyard settle down. I like the author's description of the battle very much. Just think of the protagonist as Xiang Yu [laughs] [laughs]

Very nice, but the name is not that good

Why did it suddenly disappear? What's the reason?

Great book, don't let the name fool you. Just a little less

Why take it off the shelves? This book is very beautiful

Why does this book only have a score of 5.2? The plot is so good.

Product The writing is good, I like this style of painting

The writing style is pretty good, it's a very good female-oriented novel, I'm going back and forth, I hope the author will keep up the good work

The first part is long-winded, and then the psychological description is a bit too much, like a female video, but the second part is indeed a masterpiece that exceeds the average level of Tomato.

Although the heroine is a bit poisonous, the battle scenes are well written [Thoughts]