Cultivation: The Rise of the Yunwu Su Family

The first one I wrote was okay, but then it was always from another perspective. They were just supporting roles, and you were the protagonist. You didn't have to write several pictures in a row. I jumped at it as soon as I saw them. There is not much written about the internal development of the family, family building and family development. It's all a second perspective, looking at other people. There are not many pictures with the main character in it. In the end, it was almost all war. If you have no ideas, you can read other better novels. There is no need to make up the word count. It was very depressing for me to see. 🤦🤦🤦

A very good martial arts novel. The golden elixir foundation building and fighting techniques are all done with swords.

There have been people in the Zhao family who have been in the Golden Core stage for ten years, but they still can't destroy the Su family. Is there any background to resist, or are all parties involved? Is it possible that the protagonist is afraid that the protagonist will come back to take revenge after he reaches the Golden Core stage? Or something else? I didn't even read the rest

The protagonist has no sense of existence, and there are many language errors in the article, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read.

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Very good

The main line of the article is too unclear and the description is not important.

So-so, there is no main plot, it's all about verbal stories, and then the family members go out for training and meet the heroine of the protagonist, and then the heroine appears

Very exciting👍👍👍👍

It's okay, but the main line is not very clear.