Quick Travel: Carp Leaps over the Dragon Gate

It's very beautiful. The little koi was taught very well by his brother and Longlong. The brother restrained the little carp, and he himself was restrained by the little carp. They are both smart and good children. The little carp is not afraid of trouble, nor does he "make trouble". He is very cute, has a lively personality, has a bad taste, is very good to his wife, and is very responsible. [Laughs] I really like the world of the prince. He vomits blood in their faces, and is scared just by seeing the little carp's face. It's really fun. Ao Yang loves to read picture books [Note] The bottom line is being pulled down little by little by Little Carp, and like an old father, he helps Little Carp find a wife [Note] She said she wouldn't help, but she found her again. Little Carp is very good, my brother is very good, and Longlong is also very good [Sending my heart] The author is very, very good, very active, I like the author the most!

I really like that the male protagonist has a decisive character. He doesn't procrastinate at all. He gets revenge very quickly. He will repay others if they are kind to him. He also has a high force value. It's really refreshing. I don't feel aggrieved at all. I really like how the male protagonist treats others because he doesn't care if you are a man, a woman, an old man or a child. I really like this. Another thing is that the male protagonist comes just right. I really like this. I don't like people who come late. I like that there is no fixed cp. Sometimes I need cp and sometimes I don't. The writing is just right. The plot is also good. The length of the plot is just right. It's not very short or very long. I like the lack of impatience. There are many things I like about it. So far, there are no surprises. But I have finished reading it. I hope you will update it more. I will watch it after liking a world (I really hate that kind of thing for the sake of face or other things. The other party is an old man, a child, a woman, so I have scruples. I really don't like this) I feel that the male protagonist is quite powerful. He is learning and enriching himself in each world. I thought this coming-of-age story was one of those that is very weak at the beginning and only gets stronger later. But it turns out that it is quite strong from the beginning. I almost didn't watch the first world because I like the first world because it is a period novel, so I watched it. Fortunately, I watched it otherwise I would have missed it.

I quite like it. The overall style is okay. The main reason is that each story is not long and can be read quickly. What I like the most is the Lotus Tower world, which is the best in the world. I feel that the embedding is quite reasonable. If Li Xiangyi's father was really alive, he would probably end up like this! I also like the first world, Shen Zhuo has such a charming personality, I hope there will be more stories about him in the future. I don't like the second world, and there are some other problems, but they're not big, but this is a good way to pass the time, and it's not toxic at all. And that shameful world makes me feel a little creepy, and I always feel that such a thing must happen in reality. The more the author writes, the more interesting it becomes, especially the later stories, which may seem cliché at first glance, but the content is very interesting, and some of them are very funny. It really makes my face hurt from laughing so often. That prince who is not taken seriously can be read as a single book. It's a pity that the author's writing is too short, and he only updates two chapters every day. I'm so anxious to catch up! However, I hope the author will never finish it. I love your writing style so much.

My favorite in the world is Huangmao Daddy! The little sweet bean squats, the walking three-headed rainbow fart making machine, the interaction with dad Wen Yue is so loving, and the childish words make me feel comfortable throughout the whole process of watching this world. This world alone is worthy of my five-star praise! ! I read the worlds from the back to the front, skipping some, and picked out the ones I was interested in first. However, I can clearly feel the author's progress. The more he writes, the better it becomes. Currently, I like the three worlds of Yellow-haired Dad, Chronicle Green Tea, and Lihua Cat the most. I have a deep impression on them. Recently, I have been slowly filling in the worlds that I have not seen before. I will continue to follow them. I will review them when they are finished~

I give the author five points. The protagonist is very cute and powerful. Although it's not the kind of plot where a boss slaughters a novice village, it's not particularly satisfying to take revenge or anything like that. It's just that some worlds really don't need to get married and have a lot of children, especially one world where he marries the woman who poisoned him before. That world just skips it when he sees it. This is a bit poisonous, but other things are not poisonous at all. The world of being a cat is beautiful, the world of Huangmao is beautiful, and the world of the little transparent prince is also beautiful. Really, there is really no need to get married in some worlds, especially to have a lot of children. It is not necessary, it is really not necessary. It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's basically equal. The author is also very willing to listen to opinions. He said before that the problem of marrying the protagonist too much has been improved a lot in the future. He really listens to advice. Moreover, the level of writing can be seen to the naked eye, and the following stories are all very well written. Sometimes I even go back and read a world again after finishing it. Moreover, this author's writing is not violent at all even if the story requires conflict, and it is also refreshing. It is very relaxing and interesting to read. Generally speaking, I used to give it seven or eight points, but now I can give it 12 points more than it deserves. It is an article that I can keep reading as long as I keep writing. It is very good-looking. It is really good-looking. In particular, the little monster from the countryside is the most interesting, surpassing the world of Huang Mao. The story behind it is also interesting. In short, it is a novel that can be read endlessly.

It's a very interesting book. The two moments when it turns into a kitten and a little hamster are very cute. I feel that every world is something that people will look forward to. Love to watch! Anger must be retaliated, and it is patriotic, which is very good. Please update more!

Make a footprint, it looks great! Several small worlds are easy to see and can be expanded into a full-length novel. "Offering Salted Fish to the Patriarch" is also a small chapter in the author's fast-travel novel. It was expanded because of its popularity, and the effect is quite good. Otherwise, can we also refer to it?

It's very good-looking, very good-looking, and the story in it is also very good. And I like Little Carp very much. The people in it are very normal, and they are almost normal. As for the little carp, he regards each plane as his life, and then spends it slowly, and then spends it peacefully, studies hard, and strives to improve. After all, he wants to become a dragon. Then now I have come to Ao Dad, who is born with the aura of a king, and his plane is also very beautiful, and I am currently chasing him.

What I like most about this book is that family, love, and friendship are all present together (you have to pick and eat most of the love by yourself 😂), and the protagonist is a koi, who has koi luck. It is very enjoyable to read and very happy. The collection is top-notch and does not leave any ink. Basically, you will fall in love with this book as soon as you meet it. It's a really fast story. There are several stories that are good to read even if they are long-form. The styles are not single. You can skip some parts of the stories that you don't like without affecting the reading. The descriptions of the characters are quite rich and each has its own characteristics. The pits dug in the front are filled in the back. It is very relaxing to read.

There are no complex psychological activities, no lingering temper, he is natural and at ease, revenge does not last overnight, he enjoys happiness every day, and he does not feel aggrieved after watching it. Very good

The overall style is relatively relaxed and pleasant, not bloody or irritating. The protagonist solves problems quickly and ruthlessly, and then lives a very good life. Crucian carp really takes good care of himself.

Among all the fast-wearing men's videos I've seen, it's by far the best looking [laughs]

Not bad, the author's imagination is very good, many small worlds can be read as separate short stories, not all clichés. I just hope that the story can be longer and have more details. I particularly like the protagonist, Little Carp, who has a super cute personality. It's rare to see a protagonist with such a distinct personality in Kuaishou. Anyway, I highly recommend it. Also, the author is really making progress visible to the naked eye, and the overall style is lighthearted, funny, and a little warm. I recommend it. My favorite worlds include the heir to a haunted house, the Huangmao father and his son, the underappreciated prince, the big devil who is frightened by the news, the wife of the generation who has room, and the son of a magic stick.

It's really good to read, and I personally like the story about the little monster the most. . . I hope the author will start a second part after a good rest, about the fast-travel life of Brother Yue, his old father, his apprentice, and his son.

It's really good to watch, and it doesn't have a very bloody or irritating plot or supporting characters. The protagonist has his own set of rules for how to behave in the world. He is not overly holy, nor is he overly selfish. He has a sense of proportion and looks very comfortable and healing.

It's a very good fast-travel novel. It's very enjoyable. The protagonist is strong and decisive, but also kind and righteous. In the face of enemies and enemies, the protagonist kills decisively. In the face of benefactors and relatives, the protagonist repays the kindness of dripping water and springs. The three views are very upright. The plot of the novel is very attractive, not clichéd, and counter-conventional. It is now finished. I haven't missed a chapter from the end to the end. I have read them all.

Finished with flowers ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺ The overall atmosphere is very lively, the protagonist and supporting characters are quite cute, and the writing also has its own style. I started catching up on updates in the middle, and then read each story. There are a few memorable ones, such as Little Yellow Hair Squatting. The happy ending at the end was very heartwarming, and Ao Daddy's extra episode was also very joyful. Looking forward to the author's new work~

Complete a beautiful and high-quality quick travel article. Each article is not long, and the short ones only have five or six chapters. Although the pace is fast, the logical writing and plot are very good. No fixed CP, career-oriented male protagonist, unconventional system. In fact, I prefer planes without CP, I am a career fan! The author's writing is really beautiful and very appealing to my taste🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

It's super cool~ The male protagonist is a carp spirit named Li Yue, and he is taken through time by his dragon father Ao Yang, who he recognizes halfway, and learns and grows up along the way~ During the journey to become a dragon, he also met his elder brother who taught him how to be a human being, his son who was a super genius, his friend who was a genius in alchemy, and his filial apprentice. After they parted ways in the small world, they met again at the top. Personally, I think it's very beautiful. I've always been thinking about it and having someone to accompany me as I grew up. There are very few top quality ones, and they come off the assembly line super quickly. When I'm short of books, I'll give it a second try~ and express my gratitude to the author

Looks good, looks good, looks good. The author of each story is very attentive. He even looks up relevant information after reading the author's replies. The author often responds to comments. Most of the stories are interesting and the image of the little carp is also very vivid. Maybe some of the previous stories are not that good, but the later ones are all very good, as the author's introduction says. You can keep it until the author's writing skills get better and better.

Above average. If you like outline articles, you can read it. The one star missing is due to the lack of details where details should be written, resulting in a very low level of satisfaction, as if only an outline was put up. Everything else is OK.

It's very interesting. My brother laid a good foundation for the little carp in the first story. He has grown up in every subsequent story. He likes Quanquan in the yellow-haired world (a very cute little friend who is good at blowing rainbow farts). The story of Lotus Tower is also very well written. I actually don't know. I have watched Lotus Tower, but after looking at that world and combining it with the comment section, Li Xiangyi's character comes to mind vividly on the page, as well as the underworld world... Ao's father's story... Are all written wonderfully. Everyone has their own characteristics, and they are not a cookie-cutter NPC. Little Carp lives a serious life in every world, highly recommended! Looking forward to the author's next book~

This article is very enjoyable, especially the real person storyteller, which is well matched. Overall there is nothing that I can't accept. My favorite is Little Monster, followed by Heir to the Haunted Mansion, Huang Mao, and The Magic Stick. The first part is good, but the ending is sloppy. Among the people the protagonist accepts in Small World, I like the little apprentice the most

It's super good-looking. The author's big imagination is really interesting. The protagonist is also vigorous and resolute, but has his own bottom line. I have read it more than three times. Sometimes I even think of the content and plot of this book from time to time. When I read it again, it is still very interesting. I highly recommend it! When will the author write another novel of the same type? I strongly request it, please please🥺

After reading them all, some of the stories written by the author are good and quite interesting. As an encouragement, I gave it five stars. In fact, from a personal perspective, the overall story should be four stars. The early game is average, the middle game is good, and the late game is boring. In the early stage, the author should have written in short quick-travel articles, missing the most attractive part of quick-travel. Fast time travel is a growth process, so it will be easier to write in the early stage. The process of a person from average to excellent is easy to construct, but the process of excellent to extremely excellent is difficult to describe. This is why most fast travel articles become boring and abandoned by the end. The same is true for this article. In the later stage, the golden finger was too big and there were no restrictions. It turned from a cool article to a mindless cool one, which was very boring. Fortunately, the author's control of some details and writing style are quite good, and the plot is funny, which makes the whole article interesting. Overall, the writing and character creation are good, but the plot structure becomes weak in the later stages. I hope the author will work harder in the next book.

The author's writing is pretty good. The male protagonist is a carp who failed to transform into a dragon. By chance, he and a golden dragon abandoned by his tribe traveled through various time and space to do missions to find a way to transform into a dragon. During the journey, Little Carp made many good friends and was adopted as a son by Jin Long. In the end, the male protagonist finally understood that all this was the design of heaven. Fortunately, he also transformed into a dragon, came to the new world with the golden dragon, reunited with his good friends, and invented a system to travel through the spiritual journey.

High-level male videos are quick to write, and there are no flaws or flaws. It's a pity that it's over Dad Ao, who lets himself go, is completely able to pass through the thread without knowing the context, which is also interesting. There are just two worlds, which is just right. If there are too many, it will be boring. There is also the world of Cui Yue before, when the world of Neptune was black on the whole network, I liked it very much. I feel that the author of this setting structure has written a separate article, and the data should be good. Finally, I have been following this article while changing it, and I was staggering through it. After the impression has faded, watch it again.

The story about Huang Mao and his son was good, and the story about Taoist priests catching ghosts was also good. I think it was interesting that the author wrote about the deep love between father and son. It was very funny. The author should try to write about this aspect. There are very few such subjects. If you write about it, I will definitely support you [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's so, so, so pretty! Chase it all in one go, watch it, watch it! The characters are very charming, and every short story is interesting. The more you write, the better! The characters in it are all very well created, whether it is the smart and tough protagonist Little Carp Spirit, the arrogant and defensive Ao Dad, the talented and inspiring son who is his father's support, the best friend of the alchemy genius, or the filial, cute and clever apprentice, they are all very charming!

It's quite interesting. I'm looking forward to the author's next book ⌯oᴗo⌯. The characters and plot are very good. The supporting characters in the story line are also very clear-headed, and the author did not deliberately cause trouble just to write some "contradictions".