Kingdom of Light Online Game: Only I Know the Full Plot

(Up and down) Purple•Legend (Level 15)/8.5 Points+ Sense of substitution B, plug-in B, setting S, writing style A, rhythm A, imagination B, character design B, main line B, logic A. Extra points: none Personal feelings: Innovative Otwen, the overall feeling of Otwen is correct, the logic is self-consistent, the details are up to standard, and it is creative (+1 level). Looking at the subsequent increase in ratings, I have seen a similar article, but it was about Dragon Ball, and it ended in a rush. I forgot what it was called. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation Criteria·Seventh Edition (1) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (2) Recommendation grade evaluation process: ① Score according to the following (3), (4), and (5), and use (6) to make corrections. ② Calculate the total score according to (1). ③Refer to the level of the work, use additional deduction points to make corrections, and finally arrive at the evaluation. (3-1) Logic self-consistency: plug-in C, setting C, character C (3-2) Overall feeling: sense of substitution C, plug-in C, rhythm C (4-1) Difficulty bonus: Rhythm A, Imagination A, Main Line B (4-2) Details meet the standard: Writing A, Brainstorming B, Logic A (5-1) Theme bonus: Writing S, Rhythm S, Imagination S (5-2) Rigorous logic: writing style S, character design S, logic S (6) Creative bonus... 2. Evaluation of online articles (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (3) Plug-in: cheat settings (4) Setting: World background, training system... (5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (6) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (8) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (9) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 3. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shang Xia (high-quality online articles, up to standard in all aspects, bonus or rigorous logic according to the writing theme) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple • Legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Above-average (excellent online writing, writing difficulty bonus or details meet the standard, one of them meets the standard) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Next in the middle (high-standard online writing, logical self-consistency + overall feeling, all up to standard) - ① Four-star green • Advanced (level 2) / 7.0 Points +; ② Four-star green - • Advanced (level 0) / 7.0 Points (6) Middle to lower two (standard online text, logically self-consistent or overall feeling, one of them meets the standard) - ① Four-star white + standard (-1 level) / 6.5 Points; ② Three-star white + standard (-2 level) / 6.0 Points; (7) Middle and lower three (defective web articles) - ① Three-star gray + • Low level (-3 level) / 5.5 Points; ② Three-star gray • Low level (-4 level) / 5.0 Points; ③ Three-star gray - • Qualified (-5 level) / 4.5 Points. (8) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three stars are unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three stars are poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One star is poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One star is extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (9) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (10) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (11) Inferior (female channel mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. 4. Evaluation template (1) Operation process: ① Take a screenshot, ② Recognize the picture, ③ Select the recognized location, ④ Copy to the clipboard, ⑤ Paste the comment. (2) Evaluation template (Bottom two) White + Standard (-1 level)/6.5 Points Sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings, writing, rhythm, imagination, characters, main line, logic. Additional deductions: Personal feelings: (3) Remarks ①The character limit for Tomato comments is 150 ②Copy (2) evaluation template, template characters 62/150 ——Evaluation of "Seventh Edition Revised", 1,700 words+

It's okay. I'm not used to seeing an original heroine. When I read a novel and saw an original heroine added inexplicably, I couldn't stand it. The writing is pretty good.

I think the author can add a form novel to Tiga (this can be written as a mysterious transformation caused by receiving a powerful light power in a certain copy), and then change Noah into two forms from a super galactic legend that appeared in Nexus (that is, winged Noah and wingless Noah), and then the BOOS in the scrapped case can also be added, such as Dark Lucifer. This can be written as a hidden copy of Noah's world, a mysterious mission triggered by a certain operation of the protagonist. (The reward is Lucifer's form) Then in the later stage, the protagonist can understand the nature of light and darkness and merge all his forms together to create his own body.

The author hopes that there won't be any stories in the future where you get a named Ultraman from TV and then get absorbed into it by the reborn ones and supporting characters similar to the protagonist in your article, and then turn against the protagonist in turn, because I personally feel that writing this kind of thing feels like slandering this type of character [face covering] Because when you wrote about the mission to save the D60 planet, wasn't there a person also named Beidou? And didn't I remember that I was rescued by Ye Feng? That's why I had this idea, I hope it doesn't happen, oh, please [almost crying] [covering face] Let's wait and see, if it doesn't work, I'll run away [face covering] Generally speaking, it's pretty good, but the new plot is a bit uncomfortable for me. For those who like to read book reviews first before reading the book, I can tell you that the outline and content of this book are very good. The main reason why I wrote this review is that the latest plot is mainly for my preferences. It is a bit wrong, just a bit uncomfortable. To put it simply, you can read the book first. The book is very good, at least among the new Ott stories that I pay attention to, it is still relatively good.

This book already has a time traveler (protagonist), a reborn person (should be darkened), and a dragon king (not exactly, it's better to say it this way) (currently he will not be on the opposite side of the protagonist) The heroines, Carmilla and Carmilla (currently and probably will not change in the future) It's a little bit poisonous, but most people should be able to accept it. The writing is very good (self-evaluation). It is recommended not to bury too many holes. It will take time to explain later and throw out new settings. Or explain it as soon as possible. The character control is currently very good, the main line is bright, and you can enter the pit vertically (self-evaluation)

It's interesting, isn't it? To be honest, if it wasn't too high-quality and too slow, this book would definitely be a must-read [Learned][Eating Melon] Regarding this matter, I will simply say a few words, as long as you understand it, this matter is the situation now, and everyone can see the specifics. Although everyone knows it, they still have to say a few words but the meaning is the same. Some people may not understand it very well, and they don't need to guess if they don't know. This kind of thing is rare. In short, I just want to say that everyone understands it, and I won't explain it to those who don't understand it. After all, you just know it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . There's nothing down there . . . . . . . . . Really nothing . . . . . . . . . Very good, very tenacious, okay? I admit that you are awesome. . . . . . . . Sorry, I only have a shadow in the human world. How can we live together but die differently? When will we know each other when we miss each other? It's embarrassing to be at this point in the night.

I think this book is very good-looking. First of all, it doesn't have any poisonous points or a harem. The protagonists are not overly capable in combat. There are just some small points, such as two high school students who saw the strength of SanDisk in the forum but still wanted to fight for it. (This is a shortcoming in my personal opinion) Secondly, there is no such thing as a realm. Ultraman is Ultraman. The protagonist is black and white, and he must avenge himself. The characters are portrayed in detail. There are just a few female villains. Totally a good book. Finally, let's talk about a big drawback: updates are too slow! ! ! Not enough! ! !

A refreshing novel that cleverly combines online game writing with Ultraman

People who like online games and Ultraman are silent after watching this. It's hard to comment on the new track. Come and see it for yourselves.

It's very good-looking. I just need more updates. I'm still waiting for the protagonist to become Trigga and go find Carmilla. The protagonist has a Tiga deity, so he must also have a Triga deity [laughing]

There are monster dungeons. The author can add a Leonix dungeon. Luoshui doesn't happen to have a monster fusion device. I can use the Diga dungeon to tame the golden dragon and silver dragon and combine it. I hope the author will consider it.

The subject matter of this book is good. It's just that the pace is fast and it may be a harem (this is also said by a small number of authors who asked about the harem), plus the issue of combat power. Except for the protagonist and one or two good guys in the early stage, all the men are relatively bad people, while none of the women in the advanced stage are bad. First, let me state my personal opinion and my objective understanding. This book is a good book. The subject matter is very good. So can human figures. But it is also the poisonous point of this book. Why do I say this? Because the combination of online games and Ultraman is not considered good. For example, a very strong saint could reach the universe. If you get it in the game, then you get his power in the game and in reality. This is the poisonous point and the attraction. For example, why did online games become a reality? Is there a big boss behind the scenes, or a certain creator god found it boring and adapted the game into reality. In the end, the protagonist stood in the same position as the final boss or was victorious, without killing the final boss. But both died. Ha, this is my guess. The above is purely fictitious. But this is my problem. Why did the game become reality? So is the author here? Forget it, let's not talk about it. How do you say that the important thing is the character image? The characters created by the author. From what I can see, there are two factions. The total role of the protagonist is small. I added a bit of a protagonist role, but I always felt that the supporting roles were not well portrayed, and I wanted to add more supporting roles. I want to say something, it is not the glory of one person, but the glory of the team. This should be what people who want more supporting roles think about (personal opinion) What? You ask me why I haven't gotten to the point with so many things? Because I am raising books. So my memory can't keep up. So I'm going to finish reading it today. All chapters. Forget it, I wrote so many words. It's really shameful to write about the key points! So when we talk about the author, I have a pretty good impression of him. The shortcomings will be corrected. Bad review. It's not about saying anything, it's about explaining. And draw evaluation. Do your best. Modesty has its shortcomings. I will change it too, I can't say it anymore. So author, I approve of your book. Star praise sent to you. [Like]

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If you choose Ultraman and want to defeat monsters, you will get all the good things.

It's good-looking, but it's a pity that the protagonist's combat power increased too quickly in the early stage.

Much better than other books of the same type, keep writing (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is nice, but the content is not rich enough. Players who are considered masters can actually be counted on one hand... Please update it soon! [Sending Hearts]

Very nice book

Ah~ I saw that it was gone at the critical moment

Very good, supportive, no big problem

Not bad, I didn't think about it, come on, author Ahem, imagine. Ultra Online Game for Everyone, Only the Protagonist Knows the Ultra Plot

Feeling pretty good

Even if the combat power is outrageous, it's okay

I thought I was pushing the dungeon based on my understanding of the plot, but the result was that I changed the name of the original protagonist to that of the protagonist and ran it again. Explosive Disco is equal to Composite Disco, Reinforced Disco and Air Disco are here.

It's okay, I just hope that Carmilla has some plot, and Carmilla should be accepted. After all, the ultra series is more or less focused on the few beautiful ones.

Average, with some shortcomings, but the overall look and feel is okay, and it's quite interesting to watch when you're bored.

I love watching it, and I hope this story can be passed on.

A pretty good book [get it]

Hahahahahaha

Five-star support