One Person*************

It looks pretty good so far, but Feng Yaya feels like a flaw here. After all, normally other people shouldn't mess with the drawings, but they will be very angry no matter what. The protagonist just has no choice but to think that this is a flaw. I hope Feng Yaya's scenes can be reduced as much as possible.

It seems okay at the moment, but don't follow Feng Yaya's CP [awkward laughter]

Very well written, it's going viral

It's pretty cool, why is the rating so low?

So far it looks pretty good. The subject matter is novel and the content is relatively rigorous. On the basis of the original work, private settings have been added to seamlessly integrate the two plot lines. I hope to keep up the good work.