Immortal Drink Immortality

I only came into contact with the information about cultivating immortals after reading Chapter 45. Personally, I think we need to speed up the progress now that fast-paced cool writing is so popular. The writing is smooth and not laggy, and the narrative is clear and progressive. There are some flaws (about the background setting, sect time, time travel and martial arts training time, etc.) But it does not affect the reading. Come on, I hope it can be completed smoothly, at least until I can ascend to the spiritual world.

It looks good, and the pace in the early stage is fast, but it can be seen that the protagonist is only slightly stronger than others, and there are few latitudes to divide the strength. However, it is limited by the current small map. I hope that the subsequent development will have a complete training system and multi-dimensional strength analysis.

I watched the updated chapters carefully. The prologue was good and attractive, but the plot progress was slow. The description of warriors is too heavy, and the mystery of the protagonist cannot be effectively highlighted. There is a contradiction between Golden Finger and the setting. Since he is a mortal, why is the foreshadowing so serious? ! I hope the author can update steadily and keep up the good work [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Currently, the first two chapters are the most difficult to read in terms of plot, but the writing is getting better and better.

For the time being, it's still good. Smooth and straightforward description, characters, structure, generally reasonable

The pace of this book is quite good, and it is an improvement over the previous book in terms of look and feel and story rhythm.

It's pretty good-looking, the writing is smooth, and there's nothing frustrating about the plot. Come on

Xiancao——The logic of this book is clear and the protagonist progresses quickly. It is a rare breath of fresh air among tomato novels.

Very good-looking cultivator

Nice! Now that I have reached platinum level, will the author consider changing platforms? [Laughs]

The writing is clear and engaging, and the key points are not myths. It is a rare good book and I look forward to it. . .

I've read a lot of books on this app, but I can rarely finish them (only three or four). This book is okay.

Not bad, really good, come on, author!

Not bad, good, good book recommendation

Traditional martial arts style, good

The author writes well. Very exciting.

When will the sequel to Jingchen's film be completed? It will be perfect.

A good book, I was deeply attracted and wanted to read it all in one go What is the reason?

This book is actually good. I didn't expect the rating to be so low.

The style is relaxed, the writing may not be very detailed, and it is not toxic for the time being. The overall writing style is very light, and the protagonist does not show any mental retardation. Some of the supporting characters may have low IQs, but they are not very poisonous. It is still very comfortable to read as a light novel. The update is too slow, and the writing in some parts is rather mindless, but as a pseudo-invincible light novel, it is just right. Come on, update it. The rating should not be limited to this.

Although the details are rough, after reading Chapter 45, I feel that the overall story is pretty good and I look forward to the follow-up.

Each episode lasts for more than ten minutes and is great. Based on my current reading status, I can judge whether this book can be read or followed.

It's very good, the plot is smooth and not procrastinating, the killing is decisive and unparalleled, and the villain's IQ is also online so far.

I read the latest chapter (82) in one go. The pace is pretty good and the protagonist is about to start cultivating immortality. No, it's 93

It looks good and can be written well. I look forward to the follow-up.

Okay, suits my taste

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Feeling very good at the moment.

Beautiful, very beautiful.

Well written, keep up the good work