Dragon Clan: I'm on My Way to Creating a Perfect Destiny Line

Add Su Xiaoqiang as the heroine, please author.

How can I put it, this kind of Lu Mingfei who is serious, not funny, not a diaosi, basically has no other book better than this one except King's Landing. There are no embarrassing scenes, it is perfect, and it meets my requirements for reading dragon fanfics at the beginning. What is the Dragon Clan? It is the ignorance of youth; it is the regret of youth; it is those scenes that cannot be forgotten but cannot be changed. Regrets have become a thing of the past, but we still want to erase them, so this book is undoubtedly the best choice. I haven't seen Zhan Shen, but it doesn't matter. What's important is the character's personality and Jiang Nan's familiar and friendly writing style. "Birthday cake is the tombstone of youth" and "grand escape in the sunshine". It's obvious that the author still has a lot of room for improvement in this aspect. In terms of character design, Fingel's image of a defeated dog is not detailed enough, but other than that, it's pretty perfect. Furthermore, the writing does not have the flavor of Jiangnan. This is a noteworthy point. You can go and read the old days of King's Landing. The final ending seems to be written by Jiangnan, which is also worth imitating and learning from. Finally, there is the problem of word count. The author's articles are typically short and concise, not lasting, and not satisfying. Maybe we can try some Liuwei Dihuang Pills? [Laughing evilly] Okay, that's it for the review, the last one To all the lives that hold fire high in the dark night

All I can say is that the writing is very delicate, and then I wonder if he wants to open a harem.

I haven't seen God-Zlayer, and the storyline has always used God-Zlayer's ability. I haven't seen Dragon Clan. The difference in combat power between the two plots is too big, but will the abilities be combined in the future? I hope to write about the protagonist's speech and spirit performance.

Nice looking, love watching, I just don't know if it's a harem [Like]

I hope the author can improve his writing style! So far there is nothing wrong with the plot.

I felt that I read it quite well, and there were no obvious poisonous points. But if this trend is written, there may be multiple female protagonists. I want to see Lu Hui's pure love carefully entered.

It's pretty good, at least it's on the top of the list among dragon fans.

It's a very good book. It's my first time to write a book review. It's the first time I've reviewed it. It's better than many other fics I've read before.

Not bad, I came here for Lu Hui

Forget it, just don't give away Wangxu and a few iconic Shenxu.

I advise you to update it carefully, otherwise I really don't know what to do. It's so damn good. It's the only one I asked to comment on in Chapter 10. The Dragon Clan is not a tragedy, Eriyi is mine

Not bad, new theme, I'm looking forward to it [Sending Hearts]

I've read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics, this one is pretty good [I learned it]

This is the second Lu Su fanfic I've read, and the writing is pretty good. When the score comes up, press it down to avoid losing it.

A little less, not bad

Well, well, I like this

It's beautiful, it's great, it's great

Do you think that if the protagonist didn't have the word spirit that can check the fate line, would all those people die?

Very good for dragon fans!!!

It's pretty, cool, but not conventional.

Isn't this great? Why the rating is not good

I've never seen Lu Su before, it's quite novel and very beautiful [Like]

It's so beautiful, why is the rating so low?

This article is coherent

Haokan, come on, the author

Very interesting novel

Needless to say, five stars.

It's really good. I'll put it bluntly.

Not bad, just a bit short