HP Legendary Mage Is Making Waves in the Magic World

Is anyone watching? [Cry][cry][cry]

This book satisfies the fantasy of a thin impression of the nobility in the Harry Potter world. I used to feel that the aristocracy in Harry Potter was not rich enough. Now this book just fills the fantasy of the aristocracy. I must keep writing.

Well, how should I put it? The first third is super interesting, whether it's Tom's dominance over Slytherin or his emotional pull with Abu. However, after I started writing and watching the movie, it was obvious that the plot had a fault line, and it suddenly became a bit narrow from being very grand. I hope that the two Fubu will push and pull each other in their interests, and the plot and emotions will advance at the same time. However, it is obvious that the plot was suddenly exiled later, and there is almost no description of the situation. Later, the trip to China was also fragmented, perhaps because of his love for growing flowers. This emotional map mapped on Tom made his colors too soft and OOC. The plot and the whole were quite fragmented. Including the relationship with Abu later on was a bit sudden, too sweet. I think there should be a struggle between the two of them to reach the other side of true love (just like the previous love line, which is constantly testing, like a tango). I want to see how they control the current situation, drive the knights to divide the world, and fight back and forth between ggad and ggad. The ending is also a bit messy. . . The story itself should be grand. . . The first third of the movie really kept my eyes glued to my heart. Alas, I really hope I can see those undercurrents in the extras or watching the movie, alas. . . . . . . There is also a display of strength, yes, strength, the display of strength should be in all aspects. Rubbing my face, I actually felt a little tormented afterward. . . . . . Maybe it's because the front is so beautiful and amazing. . . . . . I thought there would be a more majestic world and a bigger stage, and Tom would be the perfect conductor on this stage. Not willing to give in. . . . . . .

It's beautiful, I never thought it would be beautiful. I haven't read too many interviews, and I've always thought that Tom doesn't need to be saved after reading a lot of fan fiction, but this article made me change my mind. There is a way of writing Qidianwen, that is, it has a lot of imagination and a larger development pattern. Moreover, this book has a large format for both ggad and Tom, and is no longer limited to children's literature. Awesome [like] It feels like I was reading Hogwarts on the tip of my tongue. That book had Soviet content, and it brought Soviet researchers to the wizarding world, and then studied the coexistence between wizards and Muggles. Even if you deviate from the original work and expand your imagination, it will still be super beautiful! ! !

I only read the main text and did not read the side story [Eating Melon]. This novel has nothing to do with the title. It is a love story between Tom and Abu. I thought the writing was very good at the beginning of the book, but after falling in love, I became a love brain, which was too OOC. The love part was a bit ordinary, but the career part was weakened, especially when I went to China later. I felt that the setting of the Chinese part was pretty good, but Tom was written too softly, as if he was a different person.

I must give it five stars for the truth coming out in Chapter 207 Other fanfics were either stopped in advance or retaliated privately. Only the one that really touched my heart. All I want is to make the truth public. If Sirius really has a clear conscience, he'd better be able to withstand the judgment of the public.

This book is very good, I like it very much. I'm waiting for updates every day, and I beg the author for updates! ̋(๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ This is one of the best Yubutu fanfics in my opinion.

Super pretty! The author writes very well! It's just a bit lacking, so please give it a try!

I like watching movies, especially when there are so many movies to watch. It's very satisfying.

It's great to watch and fun to watch.

I really like the plot written by the author in big letters [blowing kiss] [sending heart] [sending heart] The cp between Abraxas and Tom is so good [please ask for more updates] [please ask for more updates] [learned] [send hearts]

Dad, I want to be crazy about you, you are really beautiful

My wife's writing is very good, I like it very much [adoration][adoration]

Too little, it's normal for no one to see it. The traffic volume increased when it exceeded 100,000 words.

Super awesome written in big letters ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤ Come on Very well written. Come on.

It's very interesting to watch. Although the trip to China part was a bit embarrassing, the flaws are not hidden. I'm also looking forward to the next development of the film.

Super well written! ! ! Must give a five-star [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's pretty good, I'm too lazy to comment [I learned it]

Nice! Looking forward to Tommy and Abu!

It's just that there are few words and it looks good.

The plot writing is quite good.

Love the movie theater to death

Very fragrant rice. Tasty.

It's very beautiful, but why are there so few people?

I haven't read the latest chapter yet, so I have a question: Has Lao Fu succeeded in resurrecting Abu? [I'm about to cry]

It's very beautiful, and the writing is also good. I tried it, but it's still hard for me to accept the CP of Fubu. Goodbye, author, come on.

It looks good, I like it, I hope it will be updated more frequently. After watching it every day, the waiting time is too long.

Super beautiful. I really like it (✪▽✪)

It's so beautiful. The teacher must have come from God! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Especially beautiful, main CPs Abu and Tom, and GGAD