A Top Talent at Level 10, Invincible from the Start

Upper middle. The plot is not a traditional one. It is not "I" who is reborn, but "my" brother, which gives readers the feeling that "I" want to hug his thigh. (This template is not uncommon.) But "I" is stronger than the brother. This contrast attracts readers. As for the writing style, it looks like a novice at first glance. It is a bit laggy in some places, but it is not too toxic (in my personal opinion). The description of the environment is too little, which makes the sense of substitution not very good . The emotional drama between the heroine and the hero is average, but it's not too abrupt. Suggestions for the author (optional): First of all, there are too many typos. If you really want to write well, this problem must be improved (a big taboo in online game writing). After writing a chapter, you can try to look at your article from a reader's perspective and read more comments from readers. You can add some small details to the emotional scene. The details in the emotional scene determine success or failure. For example: the male and female protagonists hold hands. After passing the bustling crowd, the distance between them seems to be a little wider. She looks at his back, steps forward in three steps, and silently squeezes his hand.

Can't help but want to comment, it's a breath of fresh air. In the first chapter, the heroine Liu Ruyan comes to break up. What she portrays is not the ordinary Liu Ruyan, she is not following the trend of being in favor of a wealthy man, and there is no bloody plot. There is simply no material foundation, and the heroine feels that there is no future. Well, it is very similar to many men and women in reality who have to break up because of bride price or RV. The following content is actually very general. The protagonist can obtain a new highest level talent every ten levels, and this golden finger can be said to be the highest level. Then I didn't see much interaction between this book and the reborn brother. The two of them couldn't fight monsters together in different novice villages before reaching level 10, but it was very slow to level up. The first-level monsters did three or four points of damage, and the second-level monsters directly increased to 50 points of damage. Then in terms of plot, it's a brainless little guild. Classic

Let me tell a joke. Upgrading to level 1 gives you 4 points of free attributes. Then the protagonist spends more than 100 points but cannot defeat level 1 monsters [laughter]

Okay, it would be better to be more vigorous and resolute. After all, it's like saying nothing if you have the strength! Moreover, the protagonist's brother even told the protagonist about his rebirth. When the author wrote it, the protagonist had more trust in his brother! [Code to live][code to live][code to live] Five stars first!

It is very novel. It is no longer a traditional rebirth online game stream. It has a lot of unknown plots and I have a lot of expectations for the follow-up plots. It is not mindless and cool. It also has elements of cultivation and online elements that compare cultivation and magic.

The main character's predator talent has no restrictions. I don't want to constantly farm low-level monsters. I go to find high-level monsters. I only add a few attributes after upgrading. The attribute points gained by the talent are the big deal.

It is quite creative to plunder attribute point talents and use warriors to cut them one by one. The reason is that large warriors can easily defeat small warriors, and that's really the only way to achieve success.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, working hard unyieldingly, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel being refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can work hard I am a keyboard in the darkness and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet writing. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

It's so beautiful. Compared with the original rebirth online game, it has a different kind of two-dimensional beauty. Just like people, the protagonist and the rebirth go their separate ways but help each other and work hard for the future. This is rare in online games and rebirth. It's useless to say more. Just watch it [Like]

The day I received the goods was an unforgettable day. That day I received the clothes and immediately put them on and went out to the street to show off my handsome demeanor and handsome back. This attracted all the passers-by, including the gangster with the knife. They insisted on giving my clothes to him, but of course I refused! I must have tried my best to protect such a beautiful dress. In the end, I couldn't fight with three knives with both fists. I went to the hospital. When I woke up, I found that the dress was gone. My fists were still clenched. I vowed to buy another one in the future! ! Time always proves that our encounter is right and worthwhile. It's neither early nor late, it's the right time to meet. So I stopped and waited for the expectations this baby would give you. Time will not let you down. In this world, the only way to have love is to exchange sincerity for sincerity. Those sweet words, fame and wealth, and empty promises are no match for a profound affirmation. Simple and ordinary words can warm you throughout the winter. The corners of my mouth must be raised now, and deep dimples appear on my cheeks. Such a beautiful smile must have come to me unconsciously after receiving this baby. The store has been bookmarked ~ I hope everyone who sees this review will be happy every day and may good things come to you ~

This kind of life of watching and waiting for a day is really enough. Fuck

It's good to watch. Although the plot is very similar to game novels at the beginning, but how can I put it, it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power, nor is it brainless. Overall, the plot is very smooth, but it's a pity that it's a little lacking.

Not bad, very good-looking. Just look at my length and you'll know that I'm very honest [laughing]

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Emmm, how should I put it, originally I wanted to give it 5 stars. Overall, it's not a big problem to read, but it feels a bit too traditional, and I couldn't read it in the early stages. You can read the final opinion. In the end, I couldn't read it, so I gave it 4 stars.

This book is so good. The boss gave the protagonist information without any malice, but the protagonist didn't listen and just started fighting. The protagonist's IQ is too high, which is beyond the reach of us mortals. For details, just go to 206~207. Who can still continue reading after reading these two chapters? [Like] But should I say that the first 100 pictures are pretty good? This boss has no previous relationship with the protagonist, and neither of them knows each other.

I encountered this old bookworm in the middle of a book shortage. Instead of abandoning the book halfway, I actually saw the update reminder!

Brothers, let me ask, is this a romance novel based on an online game?

I fell into a poisonous pit, a very poisonous pit, and later people also tasted it

Although, the protagonist's brother is reborn, reveals information to the protagonist, and works as a nanny. The protagonist is hesitant and indecisive, and his talent is beyond the standard. He will get a talent every ten levels. First, he will get attribute points by killing, and then the pet will evolve infinitely, and then he will have a super vision, ignore the fog, and become invisible. The novice village obtained the inheritance of the true god (changed the profession), and then killed one of the twelve demon gods, and killed the eighty-level BOSS with a twenty-level body.

It's really nice to watch, with countless puzzles and clever fights.

Originally, it was slow to level up in the past. I was hoping for a good talent at level 10. But it turned out to be feeding pets. I still like the power to be mine. He's always making excuses. The more I look at it, the more strange it becomes.

It's a pretty good online game article. It doesn't seem to have any bad points at the moment. It just depends on whether there are any bad points when the game world and the real world are integrated.

Yes, compared to other game articles, the writing of data transactions is simple, but there are many dialogues. I hope there will be less nonsense later. It is still very interesting [like]

Yes, the setting is novel, but the number of words in the new book is too small, and the plot is partly watered down. Some plots, such as the part about internet celebrities, can be brushed off in one go. Give it a try and try it out. Maybe the results will be good. After all, not many people write about this setting. A book like Tomato's, which has more than 100 or 200,000 words, was discontinued in the early stage when there were few words and no one read it. Little did they know that it was precisely because of the few words that no one read it.

Come on, the theme is new, I don't know why I can continue watching it. Are you serious about writing more than 60 chapters of fighting with grass?

Really, the administrator has been reviewing Chapter 4 for 15 minutes and it's still not ready. I'm still waiting to see.

It seems ok, let's take a look first, please update as soon as possible! ! ! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's good to read, but the new book is too short. I hope the author will add a hundred chapters a day.

Prophet + Cheating + Nanny. The pace is still slow, and the breaks are fun. Of course, there are more or less unlucky opponents.