Pokémon + time travel + non-invincible writing + darker flow + no system + rigorous logic but not outrageous
In an accident, a man who dreamed of becoming a Pokémon master traveled to the real Pokémon world.
Just why are these elves looking at me with ferocious faces and red eyes?
"Is this a Pokémon I know?"
"Don't come over here!"
As a Pokémon Master, I will definitely cure you.
Reader comments
The story is novel and interesting, and to me it is quite interesting. Well, when describing the battle, I hope it can be described in more specific details. For example, when using the shell breaking, it can be described in a little more detail, and then when the elf releases its skills, what are they? The part first emits a stream of energy, and then collects it somewhere. For example, when using an energy ball, the elf gathers energy from all around the body in front of the body. The green light spots merge together to form a prototype of a green ball, which slowly grows larger and finally is pushed out violently.
The story is novel and interesting, and to me it is quite interesting. Well, when describing the battle, I hope it can be described in more specific details. For example, when using the shell breaking, it can be described in a little more detail, and then when the elf releases its skills, what are they? The part first emits a stream of energy, and then collects it somewhere. For example, when using an energy ball, the elf gathers energy from all around the body in front of the body. The green light spots merge together to form a prototype of a green ball, which slowly grows larger and finally is pushed out violently.