Please Give Me Rain and All Your Wishes Will Come True

It's really super good-looking! The writing is OK! The setting is OK! The protagonist is affectionate and has friends! Of course there are no parents... It's not a traditional cool novel. The character of the protagonist is really gentle. Why do some people call him a sissy? Not all men are like in reality, they curse and speak obscenely. It's not easy to meet someone who has normal outlook on life and is relatively careful and gentle, but you guys spread rumors that he is a sissy. I really beg some people, have you met such a boy in real life? In the novel, you also scold such a boy, isn't it because you can't do this? Respect women, respect everyone, be gentle and careful. The other characters are also brilliantly created and the setting is beautiful. I feel like this book can be a god.

The writing is good, there is no plot of cerebral palsy, no inexplicable female supporting character, no female master, no ambiguous female classmates, no childhood sweethearts, and no plot of intentional sexual intercourse. It is not comparable to the kind of novels about girls who die of big watermelons or peaches. It is like watching the cartoons of the early years, such as Hurricane Fighter and The Divine Soldier. This is the feeling. It is hot-blooded and very refreshing. It is not enough. After watching it for so long, first of all, it feels very comfortable to watch, there are no pornographic descriptions, and it is mostly about family affection. If there are some ambiguous descriptions in the early stage of the writing, it is understandable that I don't want to read it; after all, I have also seen some male videos without female protagonists, in which the protagonist and other female characters are ambiguous. But this one is different. The early descriptions only tended to be in the word group "concave", but they disappeared later. If you say that your behavior is not like that of a boy, I would like to ask, must he be a boy by swearing, smoking, fighting, and drinking? What's the point? The writing is so delicate that it makes people feel wordy. But I don't feel it. I think it's well written and it varies from person to person. Don't miss this book because it's too long-winded. It's really rare among Tomatoes. The main plot is never a monotonous love story or a person's salvation story – it's a story of unity and humanity. The "verbosity" of this book builds this world and makes me feel that it is real. This is the charm of words. There is a reason for being verbose. Everyone in the article is a good person, except for those who were born.

The subject matter is good, and the writing style is very discouraging at least in the first five chapters. Some of the content can be said to be very delicate, but it is so delicate that it makes people uncomfortable. The style of the article feels very soft, which is contrary to the current mainstream (maybe because I don't read this kind of thing very much). There are good and bad. Anyway, I feel very uncomfortable when I read it. Moreover, the character, words and deeds of the protagonist are very consistent with the performance of an ordinary person, and they are consistent to the point of being disgusting (the protagonist these days has no desire to read at all). Generally speaking, the article gives people a slow and soft feeling, and the picture has a dark gray filter feel. Personally, I don't like this style, so I can give it about 3.5 Stars (unfortunately, I can't, I'll give you half a star more as encouragement)

It's very beautiful, the emotional descriptions are very delicate, the naming of abilities and skills is just right in the literary sense (I like this very much), and the descriptions related to awakening and use are also very descriptive. They have to be described with feeling, not simply throwing a fireball or something. The description of the magical atmosphere is particularly good - in short, it is very fashionable! ! And seeing that now, there is enough ink about each character. It is not a novel that just writes about the protagonist. There are enough good-looking characters to enjoy. The description of the skills and rituals in "Ladder" really made me read it again and again. It was very interesting and I read it back and forth several times... Oh, it's so beautiful.

The writing is 10 points beautiful. It was just the beginning that I didn't understand who the protagonist was. But you will understand after reading a few chapters. It is indeed a group portrait, and it seems that the writing style is a bit demanding, but the author's writing is indeed good. Then I still have a few doubts. Did the protagonist's parents die normally or something? I'm a bit out of ideas and I feel like it will be useful later. Maybe I was just guessing, but the formula is pretty classic, that is, some "Adventists" want to be the villains, and some conservatives don't support it. But there is nothing wrong with what the author wrote. It's still ok. And the most important point. Can there be no heroine? Also, I need to update quickly [blowing kiss]

Good book, has potential. The following contains spoilers, please feel free to enter. It has many advantages, such as the writing style is delicate, the writing logic is smooth, and the plot is reasonable. What is particularly outstanding is that the introduction of each ability is very thoughtful and consistent with the character's personality. The author is very good at controlling emotions, very natural and not awkward, and has the potential to become a great writer. However, the rhythm of the plot is a bit rough, but you can see the ups and downs. I think this is very good. Every great author has come this way step by step. Of course, there are some small flaws, such as the author's lack of life experience, so some cannon fodder is too superficial. For example, it is impossible to use such crude means in the above struggle, especially in the face of frequent underworld situations that require capable people. The checks and balances are often contained through invisible means, such as blocking resources, without openly tearing up. The descriptions in the article often make me jump to those family fights, fighting the young to get old, which is a bit incompatible with the style of this article. In fact, I think that in terms of enriching the details of life, you can watch police station documentaries and so on to enrich the details, such as transcripts and daily interrogations (I recommend Guarding Jiefangxi). Of course, it depends on how the author unfolds it. If it progresses quickly, there is no need to add these. I can see that the author looks like a newcomer, so I am very worried about the world view and plot direction, and I am worried that I will be interrupted in the future, so I hope the author must have an outline! ! ! (Although some authors can indeed write a complete world without an outline, it is often difficult for new authors to do so) The plot has not developed particularly much yet, of course because the protagonist has not been upgraded yet. At present, the main villains are the Enders, which feels a bit monotonous. It stands to reason that there may not be a third-party organization that flies solo in China, but there must be a more liberal Awakening organization abroad. I hope that as the protagonist group upgrades, the world view will be bigger. As for the causes of evil, I hope the author can come up with a reasonable and novel explanation later. All in all, it's well written, and it's a rare stock with potential on Red Persimmon.

It's really, really good-looking. It's not like an article written by a new author. It's completely above 9.5 Points and very innovative. The ability is not like most on the market, but it has its own thinking. It's very innovative and eye-catching. The author's characterization is also very interesting. The plot control is also very natural. The transitions and transitions are smooth. There is no trace of AI. The male protagonist is not that girly, right? What he said in the comment section is a bit too unbearable sos

I have read the latest chapter, and I have also seen their questions in the book reviews. What I want to say is that the protagonist is not feminine. Shi Yu just doesn't make vulgar jokes like the protagonists in other male videos, and does not do some unbelievable behaviors in other novels. Is it feminine? I don't understand it. Another thing, I always say that I can't see who the protagonist is. This is probably my own reading problem. I don't understand why I'm commenting without reading a few chapters. Just be patient and read on. And the author also made it very clear in the introduction. This book is a group portrait, and other people should also have their own highlights. I think the characters are very three-dimensional, distinctive and not flimsy. The worldview, background, and abilities are all attractive. Reading this book gave me the feeling that where there is genius, there is resistance. The more geniuses there are, the greater the resistance, which is like the checks and balances mechanism of the world. All in all, this book is to my liking, it's very interesting, and it has no flaws so far.

It's very detailed. The description is too cumbersome. It uses a lot of space to pile up gorgeous words, but no one will read it carefully. If you read too much, you will get bored. I hope the language can be simplified. Otherwise, according to the mechanism of Tomato, the author is suspected of having too many words. In fact, the writing is really good. Come on.

It's a very good book. I couldn't sleep last night and wanted to find a novel to read. When I read the title, I thought it was a cool novel, but I didn't expect it to be about youth and growth. I really like this kind of novel. It's a story about people meeting together "by chance" under the guidance of fate, and then taking risks and growing up together. I also like the setting of the protagonist. Although he was "cowardly" and "hesitant" at the beginning, because of this, when he follows his inner choice later, he becomes more real and vivid. Everyone has their own story and is the protagonist in their own world. Great cheers for the author, I hope there will be more exciting stories in the future.

It is a book that I like very much. I like the protagonist very much. Master Shi Yu is like a succubus [blowing kiss]. When I read a book, I have very high requirements for the character of the protagonist. This is one of the few protagonists that I like very much. The character is very well created. Master Shiyu is gentle and kind, and very smart and capable (oh my god Shiyu). The friendship between the protagonists is also very touching. How about forming a team that lasts a lifetime? Let me mention a small flaw. The author's writing style is very good, but in some places it is too lyrical and too descriptive, resulting in a little less information in the content (the part about Xu Chenge's revenge), but overall it is still very good!

It's beautiful. Whether it's the relationship between the characters or the journey of personal growth, the author has done it very well. There's nothing to say about the character creation. It's been a long time since I unconsciously included it in a novel. The plot is interlocking and the rhythm is very comfortable. The language is unparalleled in the entire Internet. This kind of sentence can make me think about how the author wrote more than a dozen sentences in one day. I will really be moved by the author's pure and passionate words. The esoteric style, the setting of rituals and stairs also really impressed me, especially the introduction at the end of the chapter. It just made me drown in the author's words. Author I will always follow you

So far, the writing is so comfortable. The protagonist and supporting characters each have their own personalities and charms. The group portrait plot is very exciting. The way each supporting character appears is very memorable, just like watching anime. I can keep up with this level until the end. It turns out that the author said that you are very good at writing. It is true [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Currently watching 106, I feel too tired. I just finished fighting one villain and met another one not long after. There is no buffer time, the time is too tight, the emotions are incited too often, and there are too many plots of the knife, which makes it numb. Each supporting character is written in too much detail, and a passer-by also wrote a lot of detailed background and psychological descriptions. It is very tiring to read, and there is too little ink for the protagonist. All the supporting characters are divided into nearly one-half of the perspective, and the description of the protagonist group is divided into one-third. There is very little ink left for Shi Yu. Instead of It can be said that this article is a group portrait that prefers multiple perspectives. The main perspective of the group portrait is basically on the protagonist, but the perspective of this article is mostly on other characters. The tone of the plot is also depressing. There is a bit of a relaxing part in the early stage, but it becomes more depressing as it goes on. Overall, the more you read, the more tired you feel. () The setting is novel and the writing is delicate, but it makes me tired of watching it.

It's pretty good, the writing is pretty good, the only drawback is that it's too slow to warm up. I haven't seen much, it's a bit more daily life, there is no exciting plot that makes people shine, the protagonist is the same as the companion, so the group portrait should be regarded as a pseudo-group portrait, right? The writing focuses too much on describing other characters, and some people may not like it, like me. After thinking about it, there is no climax, and the description of the protagonist is too pedestrian. I must have been watching it for about an hour, and the protagonist has not yet started to have sex... It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. I hope the writing can focus on describing the protagonist. What's the point of always describing the second male lead? Create a misunderstanding? If you are ambiguous, don't blame others for knocking you. Summary: This is a good article on Tomato (focus on the golden three chapters on other platforms). The writing is good, but most people can't adapt to it. I hope the author can improve it (actually, it doesn't need to be changed, it may be because my taste is unique) but! ! ! I gave it five stars, please don't criticize me! :( Well, I watched it for four hours, but I feel like I have no impression. Do you know the author? Please focus on describing the protagonist! If you don't focus on it, wouldn't your setting become a poisonous point? (Open high and go low) No one will like it

The author writes very well, I recommend everyone to read it. I particularly like the setting of the worldview. The author's writing style is also very good and he pays great attention to details. But it's a bit really weird. Some of the male characters are a bit feminine. At first, I thought the male protagonist was a girl, and the liar in the team. The little actions and speech habits of these two people were really awkward, and I was like, "Ha, um, la." Wouldn't it be better if they were set as girls from the beginning? Then there are useless and boring dialogues that sometimes appear, which make me want to skip watching.

I have finished reading the fourth volume and am writing a serious book review. I think the real rating of this book is much higher than 8.8. I think it can be rated as 9.5. First of all, the setting of this book is very eye-catching, with talents, inheritors, and ladders; this seemingly simple but very complicated setting allows the author's imagination to be unleashed, and what the author actually wrote did not disappoint me. The various and endless abilities make the combat performance very good, and it will not give people a turn-based feeling of watching two villains, you hit me and I hit you. The second is the writing style and characterization. I saw some people in book reviews saying that the writing style is too literary and artistic and a bit exaggerated, but I think this is exactly the advantage of this book. Some people just like the emotions depicted in this kind of delicate writing style, just like the apocalypse forecast in the starting point. Although I personally think that the writing style of this book is slightly worse than the apocalypse forecast, it is still a rare source of food for people like me who hit the strike zone.

It's very interesting. This book has no cp. The writing style is very descriptive and delicate. You can see the author's level. I rarely see a book like this here. Moreover, this book not only focuses on the description of the protagonist, but its group portraits are a great advantage of this book. The images of each character are very full and really like stars, showing us this grand world step by step, and the brilliance of human nature is well displayed! I personally highly recommend it. You can take a look at a few pictures to see if it suits your taste.

Generally speaking, it is a very novel idea, and it looks good so far. The only problem is that the characters appear too quickly, and there is not enough foreshadowing. The new characters who have appeared have not experienced even one incident, as if they were regarded by the author as old characters, and then started to add new characters fiercely. When people watch, they often think "Who is this?" "Who is this?" [Thinking]

I finished reading Chapter 313 in two or three days. It is really a super good book. You must be patient. Everyone, the following part is really good and very good. It reminded me of those nights when I stayed up all night watching Lord of Mysteries. This kind of esoteric writing style fascinates me, and the combination of various abilities. The combination and imagination really amazed me. It reminded me of the excitement and freshness when I watched Lord of Mysteries for the first time. I loved it so much. As for the problem of the protagonist being unknown (the author mentioned it as a group portrait), I wanted to read this book, but I was afraid that it would kill me, so I quickly gave it a five-star rating. I was super afraid of what would happen next. There are knives, but it doesn't seem to be unacceptable. Let's talk about the part where the protagonist joins the officialdom. It is simply the opportunity for me to fall in love with the protagonist. (I don't mean to pull him down.) It's like the half-threatening and half-moral kidnapping style of the God Killer next door. I like this better, (because this makes me I don't have a good impression of God-Slaying and I always feel that there is a thorn in my side.) In the end, I just hope that this book will not be on the shit list (recommendation list). I don't want the "little devils" to lower the rating of this book (#`n´), but I still hope that more friends who like this style of writing will discover this book (≧ｗ≦)

It's great, five stars! The first few chapters seemed unremarkable at first, but after reading it: each has its own unique and prosperous ability system, profound group-level character creation and background rendering, methodical plot advancement, coupled with the author's excellent writing style and the quality of subsequent updates that are always online. . . The combination of the above attracts me deeply, come on~ [blowing kiss] In addition, regarding the data in this book, I would like to make a small suggestion. If the author has time, he can polish the first few chapters and introductions, and try to make the first layer of "funnel" for filtering traffic larger [Sending Hearts]

The writing is really good. I love all the characters who appear. The only one that makes me feel a little uncomfortable is Fang Miaomiao. I always can't like her. Maybe it's because of the way she portrayed her character when she appeared. I don't understand her behavior~

I really like Shi Yu! Σ＞―(灬⁺д⁺灬)♡―――＞ He looks polite, gentle and good-tempered on the outside, but he has ruthless judgment and words, unhesitating actions and reactions... And a character that is different from ordinary people. High intelligence, reasoning, rigorous logic and control of the overall situation! ❤️(｡￫V￩｡)❤️ What "I can listen to your family of origin, your pain, and the secrets hidden in your heart, but after that... Forget it, I feel so tired just thinking about it, stay away from me." Or "Is your story important? Come on, let's not talk about it because I'm not interested in you at all right now. So, please die in peace. " It's so cool! ! ! Σ＞―(灬⁺д⁺灬)♡―――＞

The author is great, the system setting and writing style are very good, and the description in some places can be said to be delicate. Superpower is not a simple definition but an ambiguous feeling that I can't fully understand. The introduction is the superpower! !

For those who plan to read the book but have not yet read it, there is no heroine or ambiguity in this book. Some villains are born purely but are basically kicked to the curb within one volume. There are knives, abstractions and sugar, and group portraits. The text is very delicate and the writing is very good. It is suitable to be read in one sitting. It's a style of writing that I like very much. After reading this book, I tried to understand the esoteric religion, and then I was kicked to death on the roadside by long and difficult sentences. It's sad. I really like the interaction between the threesome, and I also look forward to the day when the roommates can reunite again. Maybe there will be some big event later, and then all the newcomers will reunite again! Let's have a hearty battle! By that time, everyone should have grown up to be reliable people. Please give me another review The writing really has that mysterious flavor. I always feel that my writing is not too scary. I'm kidding you, I was scared to death. When I saw the underworld in the hospital, it was already very late. But I felt that if I didn't see this thing solved at the end, I wouldn't have a good night's sleep tonight. That baby was really disgusting. . Personally, I really like the narration-like words at the end of the chapter. Secondly, I really enjoyed the cb of the threesome, and Shi Yu did it easily. I'm sorry that I can't let go of the protagonist. If you are looking forward to the close-up of snow peas, don't give up on this book! I feel that if the whole book is written, it will be a very delicious masterpiece! I also recommend that you read it patiently and slowly savor the taste when there are no books to read in the book shortage. I was not very patient when I first started reading it, so I read it intermittently. But after reading it, I fell in love with it. I haven't read the few books that I have recently updated, so I just kept it. I have been reading this one, and I finally tied it tonight. I have actually read these 30 hours for several days in a row. There are some very interesting jokes in the book, but you know what to write and what not to write, don't you? (Make a villain's evil laugh) Be careful when eating purple eggs, Shi Yu is still trying to grow taller! I look forward to seeing people jumping up and hitting their knees in the future (?) That's it for this book review. I'll review more when I see something interesting.

The writing is really good, the writing style is also very good, and it is also a very new sequence, but these sequences occur in various professions in life, and each profession has a different focus. Just like playing DNF, one character has several forms, which is very interesting. In fact, every character is also very good. The classic trio of Han He, Shi Yu, and Xiao Haozi, and the inexplicable relationship between Han He and Shi Yu made me a little happy (even though I am a man). The author's writing is very good. I really enjoyed reading it and have recommended it to my good friends. I saw the summary at the end of the latest chapter, and then opened the comments, and found that there were some negative comments. I took a closer look and found that they were all about the delicate description of the characters' emotions and whether the protagonists are gay? I think feelings are inherently delicate, and they are not something that can be expressed easily in just a few sentences. I think Lao Dou's writing of the opposite will make people more immersed in it. Secondly, the protagonist group is gay. At the beginning, they experienced a period of life hanging by a thread. Things, the three of them also established a life-and-death relationship. At this time, Shi Yu was in a bad mood, not just because he was thinking more, but I think this is also what a normal person would have. And Han He had experienced these things first and his personality was very calm. He was like a Cornerstone, he will feel calm when he is around, and Haozi has a really good attitude, but he is not as good as he shows. He will also have troubles, but his troubles come from worrying about his parents, fear of dragging his friends, etc. But Haozi is indeed from Little Sun, so when Shi Yu has many thoughts, Han He and Haozi comfort him based on their own personalities. I am not a linear thinker. My thinking is very jumpy. What I think of and what I say may not be very logical. I was very emotional when I saw the summary of the scroll, which I said was already one million words long. It took a long, long time since I started updating it with more than 200,000 words to reach one million words now (it's really a big circle that JOJO has joined). I have also seen a lot of growth. Everyone is indeed growing along with the plot, and I feel like watching my own children grow up (bushi). I hope that I will update more in the future. I don't want to be a eunuch. You know, Dad, I followed you when you had 200,000 words. I don't want anything. I just want you to update every day.

Just read dozens of chapters, so delicious! ! To describe the author's writing style, it feels like clouds, breeze, light rain, and there are warm and light lights in the house. It's a very comfortable experience. It can be seen from the character characteristics and plot arrangement that the author has his own ideas. There are actually hundreds of chapters left to read, so cool~

My little Feng Feng, Klass is awesome, okay, does the author know how good he is in writing? My depressed child is no longer OD after reading it, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters at school. I just want to read 200 articles of Klass, Klass is awesome every day. Doubao helped me make a plan for the author to update 200 chapters. The snow peas are awesome, OS finally let me eat good ones, I must give it a thumbs up and support it. Our main cast is also awesome. Sister Liu is powerful, tall and mighty, Brother Bai is indomitable and resourceful, Sister He is both civil and military and graceful, Shi Yu, my god Shi Yu, Xiao Han's cold face is so cute, the young CEO with a beard is pure and energetic, and the Huo man is so scary that he screams like a ghost. Do you dare to suddenly release hundreds of chapters of Dutch Pea one day? It scares me to death [Sending my heart]

The author's writing is really delicate. Although I have only read thirty chapters, it always gave me the feeling that I wanted to read it. Especially the scenes between Hu Hao and my mother made me cry to death. The author must work hard and keep writing. I haven't seen a book that I want to read so much in a long time.

It's very good. It makes people's eyes bright after reading it. If you keep writing it, you will definitely become popular. I also saw it on the stream today. I want to give you some suggestions. The description and name of the protagonist feel a bit feminine. At first, I thought it was a girl. Including the exchange with Han, it feels like it is developing into two male protagonists, so it is best to change it. After all, it is a male channel. The title of the book does not feel very attractive. I suggest changing it, otherwise it will look like a novel. Some suggestions for book titles: "Ladder to Heaven", "Two Paths to Apocalypse: I Cause and effect builds the divine order"

I read it slowly, but I think the writing style of this novel is very attractive, quite mysterious, and very touching. I don't feel like some people in the comment area feel. I think the main character is quite good. Maybe it's because I eat a lot of things. After reading a cool article, it's like cutting leeks at the end, and the fun is lost. I'm quite looking forward to the content of this book. I particularly like the author's description of "coincidence". The foundation is very solid, although it's a bit off-putting to Han and the protagonist [Explore]