When the World Falls Apart, My Wishes Become Reality

The writing is good, there is no plot of cerebral palsy, no inexplicable female supporting character, no female master, no ambiguous female classmates, no childhood sweethearts, and no plot of intentional sexual intercourse. It is not comparable to the kind of novels about girls who die of big watermelons or peaches. It is like watching the cartoons of the early years, such as Hurricane Fighter and The Divine Soldier. This is the feeling. It is hot-blooded and very refreshing. It is not enough. After watching it for so long, first of all, it feels very comfortable to watch, there are no pornographic descriptions, and it is mostly about family affection. If there are some ambiguous descriptions in the early stage of the writing, it is understandable that I don't want to read it; after all, I have also seen some male videos without female protagonists, in which the protagonist and other female characters are ambiguous. But this one is different. The early descriptions only tended to be in the word group "concave", but they disappeared later. If you say that your behavior is not like that of a boy, I would like to ask, must he be a boy by swearing, smoking, fighting, and drinking? What's the point? The writing is so delicate that it makes people feel wordy. But I don't feel it. I think it's well written and it varies from person to person. Don't miss this book because it's too long-winded. It's really rare among Tomatoes. The main plot is never a monotonous love story or a person's salvation story – it's a story of unity and humanity. The "verbosity" of this book builds this world and makes me feel that it is real. This is the charm of words. There is a reason for being verbose. Everyone in the article is a good person, except for those who were born.

It's really super good-looking! The writing is OK! The setting is OK! The protagonist is affectionate and has friends! Of course there are no parents... It's not a traditional cool novel. The character of the protagonist is really gentle. Why do some people call him a sissy? Not all men are like in reality, they curse and speak obscenely. It's not easy to meet someone who has normal outlook on life and is relatively careful and gentle, but you guys spread rumors that he is a sissy. I really beg some people, have you met such a boy in real life? In the novel, you also scold such a boy, isn't it because you can't do this? Respect women, respect everyone, be gentle and careful. The other characters are also brilliantly created and the setting is beautiful. I feel like this book can be a god.

The subject matter is good, and the writing style is very discouraging at least in the first five chapters. Some of the content can be said to be very delicate, but it is so delicate that it makes people uncomfortable. The style of the article feels very soft, which is contrary to the current mainstream (maybe because I don't read this kind of thing very much). There are good and bad. Anyway, I feel very uncomfortable when I read it. Moreover, the character, words and deeds of the protagonist are very consistent with the performance of an ordinary person, and they are consistent to the point of being disgusting (the protagonist these days has no desire to read at all). Generally speaking, the article gives people a slow and soft feeling, and the picture has a dark gray filter feel. Personally, I don't like this style, so I can give it about 3.5 Stars (unfortunately, I can't, I'll give you half a star more as encouragement)

It's very beautiful, the emotional descriptions are very delicate, the naming of abilities and skills is just right in the literary sense (I like this very much), and the descriptions related to awakening and use are also very descriptive. They have to be described with feeling, not simply throwing a fireball or something. The description of the magical atmosphere is particularly good - in short, it is very fashionable!! And seeing that now, there is enough ink about each character. It is not a novel that just writes about the protagonist. There are enough good-looking characters to enjoy. The description of the skills and rituals in "Ladder" really made me read it again and again. It was very interesting and I read it back and forth several times... Oh, it's so beautiful.

The writing is 10 points beautiful. It was just the beginning that I didn't understand who the protagonist was. But you will understand after reading a few chapters. It is indeed a group portrait, and it seems that the writing style is a bit demanding, but the author's writing is indeed good. Then I still have a few doubts. Did the protagonist's parents die normally or something? I'm a bit out of ideas and I feel like it will be useful later. Maybe I was just guessing, but the formula is pretty classic, that is, some "Adventists" want to be the villains, and some conservatives don't support it. But there is nothing wrong with what the author wrote. It's still ok. And the most important point. Can there be no heroine? Also, I need to update quickly 😘

Good book, has potential. The following contains spoilers, please feel free to enter. It has many advantages, such as the writing style is delicate, the writing logic is smooth, and the plot is reasonable. What is particularly outstanding is that the introduction of each ability is very thoughtful and consistent with the character's personality. The author is very good at controlling emotions, very natural and not awkward, and has the potential to become a great writer. However, the rhythm of the plot is a bit rough, but you can see the ups and downs. I think this is very good. Every great author has come this way step by step. Of course, there are some small flaws, such as the author's lack of life experience, so some cannon fodder is too superficial. For example, it is impossible to use such crude means in the above struggle, especially in the face of frequent underworld situations that require capable people. The checks and balances are often contained through invisible means, such as blocking resources, without openly tearing up. The descriptions in the article often make me jump to those family fights, fighting the young to get old, which is a bit incompatible with the style of this article. In fact, I think that in terms of enriching the details of life, you can watch police station documentaries and so on to enrich the details, such as transcripts and daily interrogations (I recommend Guarding Jiefangxi). Of course, it depends on how the author unfolds it. If it progresses quickly, there is no need to add these. I can see that the author looks like a newcomer, so I am very worried about the world view and plot direction, and I am worried that I will be interrupted in the future, so I hope the author must have an outline!!! (Although some authors can indeed write a complete world without an outline, it is often difficult for new authors to do so) The plot has not developed particularly much yet, of course because the protagonist has not been upgraded yet. At present, the main villains are the Enders, which feels a bit monotonous. It stands to reason that there may not be a third-party organization that flies solo in China, but there must be a more liberal Awakening organization abroad. I hope that as the protagonist group upgrades, the world view will be bigger. As for the causes of evil, I hope the author can come up with a reasonable and novel explanation later. All in all, it's well written, and it's a rare stock with potential on Red Persimmon.

I have read the latest chapter, and I have also seen their questions in the book reviews. What I want to say is that the protagonist is not feminine. Shi Yu just doesn't make vulgar jokes like the protagonists in other male videos, and does not do some unbelievable behaviors in other novels. Is it feminine? I don't understand it. Another thing, I always say that I can't see who the protagonist is. This is probably my own reading problem. I don't understand why I'm commenting without reading a few chapters. Just be patient and read on. And the author also made it very clear in the introduction. This book is a group portrait, and other people should also have their own highlights. I think the characters are very three-dimensional, distinctive and not flimsy. The worldview, background, and abilities are all attractive. Reading this book gave me the feeling that where there is genius, there is resistance. The more geniuses there are, the greater the resistance, which is like the checks and balances mechanism of the world. All in all, this book is to my liking, it's very interesting, and it has no flaws so far.

It's really, really good-looking. It's not like an article written by a new author. It's completely above 9.5 Points and very innovative. The ability is not like most on the market, but it has its own thinking. It's very innovative and eye-catching. The author's characterization is also very interesting. The plot control is also very natural. The transitions and transitions are smooth. There is no trace of AI. The male protagonist is not that girly, right? What he said in the comment section is a bit too unbearable sos

It is a book that I like very much. I like the protagonist very much. Master Shi Yu is like a succubus 😘. When I read a book, I have very high requirements for the character of the protagonist. This is one of the few protagonists that I like very much. The character is very well created. Master Shiyu is gentle and kind, and very smart and capable (oh my god Shiyu). The friendship between the protagonists is also very touching. How about forming a team that lasts a lifetime? Let me mention a small flaw. The author's writing style is very good, but in some places it is too lyrical and too descriptive, resulting in a little less information in the content (the part about Xu Chenge's revenge), but overall it is still very good!

It's very detailed. The description is too cumbersome. It uses a lot of space to pile up gorgeous words, but no one will read it carefully. If you read too much, you will get bored. I hope the language can be simplified. Otherwise, according to the mechanism of Tomato, the author is suspected of having too many words. In fact, the writing is really good. Come on.