Stolen Pen: Jiang Han Turns into Yan Yun

What's nice is that it's too short, and the protagonist shouldn't be too kind or too soft, and be led around by the nose. Even if you like the protagonist group, you should have your own independent characteristics. It's one thing to hug someone, but you have to have an attitude of equal dealing with the other party. I feel that most of the protagonists in the novels have a feeling of putting themselves in a lower position. The protagonists are obviously not weak, but they have no aggression or attitude at all, and are basically endlessly indulgent. I can convince myself that the book next door is an unconscious arrogance of non-human beings, just like humans indulge in cats and dogs scratching their hands. But the protagonist of this book is a real human being, a time traveler, alive, and there is no unconscious part of non-human beings. And even if they are non-humans, except for special evil gods, Cthulhu, mythical species, etc., Most of them still have an intuitive and instinctive will to survive. If a serious threat to personal safety is encountered, they will react to it, instead of just laughing it off like the protagonist.

Pursuing from under one person, I feel that the protagonists of the two stories have one thing in common - their fingers are too leaky, and they seem to... Not care about every message, item, or anything else? There is a feeling of first understanding human nature. I was obviously an adult before I traveled in, and I also know that I have traveled through time. While I am talking about realizing that the other world is real, I feel like I am playing a game. A kind of arrogance of the fourth natural disaster? Or love for your favorite virtual character? Everything is said and delivered, and it is better for one person. The protagonist generally does not suffer any grievances. He is also friends with the main mission and has a wide range of good relationships. But as for the stolen pen... Emmmmm... It is hard to describe in one sentence. The heroine has the ability, financial resources, and all kinds of natural and earthly treasures, panaceas, and weird things, but... She has a very low profile? Why? It's like the heroine is cheating. She licked her as soon as she heard it was from the Zhang family. She looked very worthless. She helped the Zhang family in every way and didn't care about the Zhang family's offense and disrespect. Why does the heroine still have to be angry when she is so powerful? Just because the heroine is awesome, why do you still love Zhang Qiling so much? And as for the heroine's counterattack or the author's counterattack, he only knows that "the patriarch is marrying into the family"? From my point of view, among minor punishments, mental torture is far inferior to physical torture, so I don't think that information about the future team leader's marriage will cause real harm to Zhang Zhang, but it will just make us in front of the screen happy. As far as the current development of the novel is concerned, both protagonists are quite charitable. It is like a self-designed OC who likes being under one person and stealing pens. He enters a different world to make up for his regrets. His love makes the characters flesh out and become the protagonists we see. So I hope I hope he\she can be more plump, and she does not exist for the sake of perfection. After all, the regret of the story is also a part of it. This is my idea. I haven't posted a long review for a long time. I hope my wife can write better and better. I will support it with four stars (*´ｽ)

The author's writing is superb. The heroine has a soul of her own, free and easy. It is still a group portrait article, and you can feel the author's care for each character from the text. My biggest wish is: Rolls, don't stop updating! ! !

It's so interesting, the daily life of the protagonist and Xiao Zhang. The protagonist is a thunder listener (prophecy). Every day he mentions the spirit of the bride-in-law and the lack of a boss. At the beginning, the Zhang family asked: Which person is the spirit? What a shame! The Zhang family in the back: Don't bother to arrange the patriarch of my family hahahahahaha. Because of blowing and listening.

The writing is good, the plot is interesting, I hope there is no censorship

Invincible is really good-looking, consistent with the original work and not too OOC. Finally, I got a normal fanfic of Pirates, and it's not too laggy. The winter melon is also very attractive. Moreover, it is very satisfying that the protagonist is not bullied very much. It is not frustrating to watch. He is strong and does not portray the original character as a naughty gangster like some books.

It's very interesting to read, and it suits my reading taste very well [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

It's Yanyun! It's so beautiful!

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

Boss, this article should only be found in heaven. It's rare to hear it in the human world. It's beautiful~~~

Looks good! Come on come on!

Very good, very attractive.

It's nice, but it's too short. It's a treasure book that I finally found. The author stopped updating it 3 days ago. What are you doing, author? Stop working on yourself and get up and type. There are many people waiting for food.

Are you really not going to write anymore? It's quite beautiful, what a pity. [Cry]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I love it so much, come more, come more, come more

Very pretty, I recommend it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Recommended very nice.

I like those Zhang family members who are called Sheng, because my surname is Zhang, and I am also called Sheng. My name is Zhang Shengmi.

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I can only say it looks good, looks good, looks good [blowing kiss]

Good, good, good, good, good, look good

I finally found a nice book written by Yan Yun

The book "Sixteen Tones of Yanyun" and "Tomb Robbery Notes" are linked together, and there is CP Bottle of Evil

Very nice! ! ! ! My evaluation is word of mouth!

It looks great. I love this setting.

Very beautiful, super friendly to Xie Tui [Sending Hearts] The author is Xie Tui

It's very interesting. I hope the author can update five chapters a day. [Think]