Beginning from the Fox Demon to Dominate the World of Immortality

The pace of the book is relatively fast in the early stages, and you can probably tell that the protagonist's level is basically rising by leaps and bounds, and will gradually become normal after entering the golden elixir. When I first started writing this book, I didn't even have an outline because I had little experience, so I started writing it directly. I originally had a fun mentality, but around 20,000 words, the update reminder suddenly came on, and I thought that since there are people reading it, why don't I write it seriously and give it a try. Later, I started to make up the outline and settings. However, since the overall rhythm of the previous content has been determined, there is no way to make major changes. I can only slightly adjust the parts that were too abrupt at the beginning to make the whole thing look a little more reasonable. Since the author is really a novice and cannot control the rhythm of emotional dramas (he cannot write emotional dramas), and based on the principle of not just passing it by, the two heroines can be regarded as... Love at first sight? Then Xiao Hei's setting is to improve Tu Shanyue's cultivation level, and there are some small hidden lines, which are mainly for plot promotion and will not give too much ink. Finally, if there is anything that is not well written, you can point it out. The author will carefully read every comment and message.

Come on, author. Starting from the first 10,000 words, it can be seen that the author's writing style is very jerky. Let's talk about the biggest shortcoming first: the development of the characters is not particularly good. But the subject matter is very new, I hope I can continue writing it. I hope the author can keep updating and the plot not be too radical. Sexually-translated articles can easily be locked up in a dark room. I have seen more than a dozen sexual reposts about small black rooms. Once in a while is enough, too much can easily lead to a dark room. Finally, I hope Xiao Hei will get a nuclear bomb soon.

Well written, [adoration][adoration][adoration]. I read more than 100 chapters in three days. This is the first time I write such a long comment. It only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. The subject matter is relatively new, which is more to my liking. The later stages of the book didn't collapse too quickly, and it's still very interesting. The author has an outline, and overall it's okay. Even though it's painful to watch, the early stages were relatively easy and should look better. But later on, Tu Shanyue's combat power felt a bit low. Although it was a bit sweet, it was just uncomfortable to watch. Especially later on, Tu Shanyue was always being pressed and beaten, always running, and just felt aggrieved. Especially this resurrection plot. It's just a bit sadistic. Now I just feel that less people like it, but it will become a bit boring later on. The author had better get over this part of the resurrection as soon as possible and make it a little bit more exciting. I feel like the sky is falling when I see that it takes 7 materials and it takes so long, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable to watch. After seeing about 30 pictures, there was basically nothing exciting about it, it wasn't that attractive anymore, and the identity of the time traveler felt very abrupt.

I thought it was a fox demon story, but I didn't expect it to be a fox demon story [face covering]

The story is about a hundred changes, the writing is excellent, and there are almost no descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. The fox girl's experience in cultivating immortals, the book's way of heaven has been strengthened, the story of life and death is full of small swords, and the battle scenes are well described. Overall, it is worth a read.

The plot is super attractive. Come on, the author supports you!

It's from the previous book. It's not enough to read. Chapter 135 of the previous book was read in one and a half days.

It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.

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Alas, author, since you are so pitiful, I will support you with five stars. (You said this book is only read by 10 people. If you include me, it should be 11, right?)

The plot was a bit too sudden in the later stages, but overall it was still very good😃