This Is Not the Hogwarts I Want

The writing is indeed good, and the logic is there. I have a vision at the beginning (in this Hogwarts without a savior), and the image of transfiguration in the middle (Hogwarts on the tip of my tongue). The rest are pretty good. Come on, author.

It's a nice, clever and reasonable departure from Harry Potter and the separation of the trio. In addition, if I want to have something to do, I have to blow up the damn bloodline to determine the wizarding world for life.

It's a very special book. It's a dream come true when it comes to book. Lily and Sir are a couple, Harry's parents are still alive, and the headmaster is Tom. Although the original book has been broken into three parts, it is indeed very reasonable and consistent with the setting. The hat is a good hat. Generally speaking, it is based on Harry's magical world and extends his own world view. The special if line, I really hope the author can finish it. Although the current protagonist sometimes seems reckless, it can be said that he is an orthodox Gryffindor and a very aggressive young man. The protagonist feels that he dares to do it. He is creating his own miracle step by step. It is also a good thing to be motivated and dare to do it. Experience is accumulated through experience. The age of the previous life gives the protagonist a clear vision of the world and the direction of changing the world. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up story (also: 26.1.3 The first grade is not over yet (乐) It looks like a long novel that will start with a million words.

Simply divine. This book was beyond my expectation and surprisingly beautiful. The protagonist does not have any particularly powerful golden fingers, and he is not the kind that kills Ava with every move. He has his own growth process and formed his own small group with Hermione and Clark (original characters). The author perfectly presented the situation if Dumbledore had not broken with Grindelwald at that time, and also gave me some assumptions and thoughts about the situation. There is a huge difference between the plot of this book and the original work, which is reflected in the fact that Lily is not with James, but with Snape and has a daughter. James also gave birth to Harry after being with someone else. And for some reasons (not disclosed here), Voldemort became the principal of Hogwarts, and James and Lily did not die. Lily and Snape became Potions Professors at Hogwarts, and James became a Quidditch player. Since Dumbledore did not break with Grindelwald, the wizarding world was exposed to the Muggle world. And in the following time, GG and Ad transformed the rules and the Muggle world. This allowed the wizarding world and the Muggle world to form a clearer hierarchy, and classify them more carefully by blood. This makes the magical world in this book very different from the original book and the magical world in the male protagonist's impression, and the system of Hogwarts has also changed. I think this is where the title of the book, This Is Not the Hogwarts I Want, comes from. It is a perfect book and I think it is worth reading again and again in the future. If I hadn't published this book review too late, I would have just finished it. I hope that the author can continue to write about this book in the coming time and bring me and other book friends a better feeling. Ps: This comment is only my personal opinion. I would be honored if you decide to read this book after reading this comment.

It is indeed a bit average in the early stage, but judging from the subsequent plot. Really making progress The male protagonist is not a very calm character, but rather straightforward and funny. However, compared to other students at the same level, he is indeed more mature and stable. It can be seen that the male protagonist is indeed growing up. In terms of plot, the fighting content is a more prominent advantage, but in comparison, the daily aspects are more average. According to the previous description of "most wizards are monogamous", you can see When it comes out, it should be a single female protagonist, if the protagonist has CP As for the heroine, it's probably "Safulia". Their interaction in the first grade was far better than the others, and now they can even be said to be life-and-death friends.

The author's writing is great, super beautiful👍👍👍The logic and story are very good. Obviously, he thought about the whole route before starting to write. The protagonist's fighting part is particularly handsome. Except for the pretentious slap in the face at the beginning, everything else is well written. The story is novel and logical, and the writing is good. Bangle👍I think the protagonist's death is quite good, because obviously the environment in the article is more dangerous than the environment in the original work. If the protagonist doesn't die, what else is there to watch? Come on, author

Very creative, looks like he will take the path of revolution in the future But the protagonist's character is a bit reckless, although that's understandable. As long as he doesn't kill anyone at Hogwarts, it's okay to have a fight. However, that was too impulsive. I knew the protagonist's true temperament, but it was still a bit hard to bear. . . It's okay, good creativity really makes up for it I bet the heroine is that Astoria. I hope it will be a single heroine, I don't like harems (>_<)

It's a very creative idea, just like The Man in the High Castle in the Harry Potter area. It's really novel to be able to combine Harry Potter with fictional history.

Look at the world from a different perspective, an interesting reversal, and look forward to seeing more stories beyond the bloodline, the contradiction between advanced magic productivity and backward production relations, the irreparable environmental problems caused by misuse of magic, etc.

The writing is really good and very original. If all the foreshadowings can be taken back and the ending is perfect, it will definitely be a fairy tale. Also, can the author strengthen the golden finger of the protagonist, for example, he can use magic to use peak physical attacks, such as thunder and lightning? Just a lightning rod to attract thunder is not enough, but it can be like Naruto's Sasuke using Kirin.

Perfect, very good. I have only briefly read the original work, but the author is very good at being able to write it so smoothly. (Come on, is the emotional line in the original work a foreign style? It doesn't look very comfortable, but the rest is great)

My dream has come true. I really can't stand this. This is the best fanfic I've ever read.

It's very patient. It's a really nice fanfic. It's very attractive to slowly introduce life into the magical world without a system. Some logical problems are not hidden. My small suggestion is that the high-dodge protagonist is a little troublesome. It's better to use a reverse spell to create a soul-type rebound/block spell.

A very excellent HP fanfic. In this book, the author describes a completely different magical world. The article is very organized and fascinating. I personally feel very good [like][like][like]

Give yourself full marks. Encourage yourself [shy]

It's very interesting, not only the writing, but also the direction of the plot and the protagonist. When the world was young, the stars of mankind were shining brightly. I'm looking forward to the exciting scene in the world created by Grindelwald and Dumbledore when the song of Internacionaire is sung.

It's pretty good to watch, but the protagonist is not as decisive as other cool novels. It feels like a cross-brain between the left and right brains, but it's also close to reality and has a wonderful sense of beauty. The cross-fertilization of ideas is not a big problem (it's only in the early stages), and the overall shortcomings are not hidden.

The world view is very bold. I haven't seen the back yet. Riddler wouldn't have used the time-turner. I can't see clearly where Riddell is from the place I'm looking at now. I hope there are some ingenious designs, because the world is turned upside down like this. Riddler can't always be a villain with less personality and less charisma than in the original work (I'm sorry, it may be a subjective statement, but it's not without charisma. There must be some).

Looks good, has a good idea

Still very beautiful

Self-consistent logic and exciting content

I think we can arrange one later. The summons of Dumbledore from the normal world comes to this world.

A very excellent way of thinking, but it can actually be more "deviant". How should I put it? If the novelty takes up a large part of what you watch at the beginning, the subsequent details and turns should be polished.

It's a very good book. It's no longer like the ordinary Hogwarts. There are all kinds of cheats at the beginning and the magic is very powerful. I like it very much.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, the setting is very novel

There was more than one conflict. Where did six people and seven students come from? The first time was the stipend for admission, which jumped between fifteen gold galleons and twenty.

Changing the title of the book might help increase the popularity

Everyone has his own Hamlet in his heart

Please support me, the writing is pretty good.