Comprehensive Comic: Give All Worlds a Little Shock of Iron Collapse

After watching a lot of movies, this one is okay, but I still don't want the author to be too rigid in the main plot and activities, and occasionally turn his attention to the side plots. From the launch of 1.0 To 2.0, I have been controlling my "To the Dim Star" for more than half a year. The Everwinter Ridge is wrapped up by the old nobles. The ex-great guardian Cyril who was kidnapped, the little girl who bid farewell to her friends and turned into a demon in the White Dew mission, the nanny with a bad memory and the boss who had long regarded her as a family member, the Vidyadhara and his poetry-writing robot who have been reincarnated countless times but can accurately fall in love with the same immortal species... Writing this way would indeed be inconsistent with the title of the book, but the more peaceful daily life and the elements hidden in it, the more people can really feel the shock brought by the concept of "science fiction": a simple business trip collapsed due to the miracle of fertility, and two people who loved each other were separated by hundreds of years; watching the constant loss of memory The lover who remembers is playing out the same drama in front of him until he completely loses the novelty; the monk who suppresses his bloodthirsty instinct and even tries to influence the killing robot; the hunter who is a puppet of the war and chooses to resist the war after experiencing a peaceful life, but dies alone in his hometown because of suspicion and betrayal

It's a rare good book. To be honest, the requirements for good movie-watching are not very high. There is no need for succession and structure. Writing is needed, but the requirements are not high. As long as the audience's character is well written, it will be considered excellent. Unfortunately, there are very few such movies. The author has only fulfilled a few seemingly basic requirements in this book that few moviegoers can meet, and it is already considered excellent. At least as a reader of moviegoers' novels on the four major novel platforms, I think this book is a superior moviegoer. I don't know if I have eaten too much shit and lowered my requirements. Anyway, this book is indeed a good moviegoer. I hope the author will stick to this description mode of describing the characters' reactions in detail, including discussions with the characters, and not follow other movie viewers who write their reactions in the form of barrages. I don't even want to read that kind of barrages (it's better to read the comments on station B) If the author wants to keep readers fresh, he or she must gradually add more audiences to the work as the process progresses. However, it is better to have less than too much, and it must be something the author truly understands. As long as the characters can be written well, it will be fine. Finally, I hope that the author will keep writing. I consider myself an old bookworm. I have read countless books, but it is rare for me to take the initiative to pay attention to the author. I will remind you every day or even send a message. Even the works of those great masters are not that important to me (well, they are not inferior to me in this regard. I am so interested mainly because I am afraid that this book will be lost after reading it). Maybe it is because things are rare and expensive. It is really difficult to find a decent book in this cesspool of film viewing. I don't know how Tomato makes money writing books. I heard that there is no extra money for urging people to write more books, but it does add money for sending a phone call to send a free gift. The author couldn't hold it anymore, so he shouted at the end of the chapter and asked everyone to spend more than ten seconds every day watching a video and giving a small gift. Don't be a eunuch or make the writing worse.

Finally, there is a movie-watching volume that can describe the characters' reactions in detail. I have thoroughly watched the original plot. Everyone has played the game, so there is really no need to retell it. There are also many funny scenes. It is a great movie-watching volume.

Although it is a classic movie-watching stream, the interpretation by imitating the characters is quite good. It is much better than some novels that just copy plots, videos, and tell dirty jokes. I won't say who it is.

Come on, author, I've read a lot of books in the genre of movie watching. (This one is just the beginning, but it feels very interesting [laughs crookedly]) It feels like it's actually quite difficult to write, especially the more anime and games it includes, the harder it is to write. Regardless of whether the characters' reactions are consistent with the original work, or the subsequent impact of watching the movie on different worlds.

In fact, it is not easy to write this kind of movie-watching type, because it is easy to have OOC situations. This book is good. Fortunately, the characters in the movie are basically not OOC.

It's a very good book. It basically doesn't have the serious OOC problem of normal movie viewing. However, there are problems that are basically the same as the plot, but there are too many "complaints" from characters in other worlds... I haven't seen the back part, so I don't know if it will be consistent. I will decide whether to read it based on my personal interests.

The characters are basically real, but some of the characters' speeches are in line with the characters, but are a bit unnatural, which affects the perception of the book and leads to many book lovers who don't know the settings of these characters to quit. However, there is indeed no OOC situation.

Five points. I like reading with in-depth and plot analysis. For example, the description of the appearance is a bit cliché, but the flaws are not hidden. The writing is very good, and you can see the author's love for Bengtie. Many of the plots have been deeply thought out, and he can defeat 99% of people. The characters in other works also have a good image control, and the process from pride to humility after many cognitive breakthroughs is also good. The character's strengths and weaknesses are very three-dimensional, at least better than many flat characters that deliberately emphasize the character's strengths and weaknesses.

It's okay. It's mainly about letting other worlds experience Beng Tie's world view, connecting many worlds. Many people are lamenting the power of the Star God and the advancement of technology. However, the specific character images are relatively rigid. One or two people are usually selected for dialogue. Although the background of the characters is discussed as much as possible and the characters' personalities are adhered to, there are many similar dialogues later. The author may try to briefly summarize the original plot. Then use more pen and ink to collide with the characters' thoughts. And the portrayal of the image will make the characters more three-dimensional and the plot will have more highlights. It's pretty good among fan fiction, as the author connects multiple worlds. And try to restore the original characters as much as possible, without too obvious OOC, but they are mainly Japanese comics, and some other types of works are less involved. The author's writing style is still good, except for the plot. In fact, some of the things that can be really seen are the dialogues and reactions of characters in other worlds, but these are fragmented. There are not many descriptions, and there are relatively few characterizations. In the later stage, a template is formed, which is a repetitive plot routine. In the later period, the writing style gradually became difficult to control the connotation of the characters, and the subsequent character descriptions began to deviate from the original character settings. In fact, this kind of movie viewing style does not require very high writing skills. It does not require too many plot settings, nor does it require a long-term plot plan and outline. You can even write whatever comes to mind, but this tests the author's understanding of the characters. In the later period, the writing style was a bit random, and the fragmented fragments began to be difficult to cohere and support emotional arousal, and it was difficult to resonate. Especially version 3.0, There is obviously a lot to write about here, but the author seems to be a fan of fan dramas, mostly TV dramas and Japanese comics. The world view of these themes cannot produce more profound thinking and discussion. At most, it can only be some casual chats and dialogues between two people. Even this template has been applied too much in the later period, and it has become a bit boring.

The writing is good, the language skills are deep, and the rationality and handling of the plot connection are also very good. If you want to read it, you can jump directly to the section about beating Sunday. The revised version is the part of the book that most highlights the author's strength.

Yes, but the character description is too male-oriented, it would be better to be more normal

The author has watched a lot of anime, and this alone deserves five stars. The most important thing is Battle of Two Cities, which I love the most. More Blades and League of Legends characters

It's a good novel. You can skip it or read it directly. There are dialogues with characters other than Bengtie interspersed in the middle. It's very interesting, and you won't feel disconnected if you skip it. If you don't want to read spoilers about the missions in the game, you can skip it. I'm waiting for the Ompharos chapter and Sunday's part. Good luck, author [I've learned it]

It gives full play to the unique advantages of the movie viewing system. Although it is slightly lacking in details, the writing is generally full and the writing style is unique. It can be seen that the author is also trying his best to make up for the missing parts. I hope this book will continue to be updated.

After reading Tomato for so long, this is the first time I give a rating to a novel, because this novel is too suitable for my taste. In other movie-watching novels, movie-watchers have no awe of the power of Star Iron, but this novel will exude power and make movie-watchers fear and awe. So spicy! It's just not enough to see if the author can add more. Fast forward to Huangquan's "Plunder". I want to see this mouth! ! !

Great, it's the best movie I've ever watched. Personally, I only know about the plot of Beng Tie. The author's description of the plot in this book is detailed and meticulous, and the number of words is not limited. When watching the movie, there will be transitions that fit Beng Tie's world view, such as "Sleepless Night", which really makes the movie blend into the world view (although some character PVs It has little to do with the plot, and I think it can be deleted as appropriate, but the overall reading experience will not be affected). For me, it is very immersive to read. Ignore those who say that the plot description is too short. Immersion is very important. To only write about the audience's reaction is simply to fill in the audience's reaction with the whole process, leaving only a bunch of "shocked", "touched" and "defense-breaking". In the end, it seems empty and boring. Anyway, cheers up [Like] [Like]

It's not bad. The character's personality basically matches the reaction and is quite lively and interesting. Another point is that there will not be a comprehensive comic world that is stronger than Beng Tie. It guarantees that Star God's character is better than Star Iron's. Please, please simplify the plot, write it roughly, don't write it in too much detail. Write the main plot in detail, and simplify the minor ones.

It looks good, and it feels like I have sorted out the main plot of Beng Tie again. There were some things I didn't understand about the plot at the time, but now I understand it after reading this. It is really interesting. Some people may think it is too long, but I feel that this kind of retelling the main plot analysis bit by bit allows me to understand Beng Tie's story better. I hope the author can keep writing. [Think]

I have read more than 400 chapters so far, looking forward to Ompharos! ! Maybe it's because I haven't read many Tianmu stories. I think the number of original plots arranged by the author is okay. I don't think there are too many (). One chapter has at least three or four paragraphs about the feelings of other IPs. The interesting parts and the reactions of other people I want to see are all written. The omitted part of the plot is just right, because it will be boring to read if it is more detailed. The animation characters I know are all well maintained, and there is basically no OOC.

Good-looking and good-looking. If you only read this book for pleasure, it will definitely not be a loss if you read it once. Even if the update is discontinued later, it will not be a loss. However, I hope you will not discontinue the update.

I have finally come to comment after reading it for so long. It is really beautiful and detailed. I have finally written the second part of Pinoconi. I want to read about the Holy Grail War. Can you write about the Holy Grail War first and then Omphalus? I would rather write about the Holy Grail War first, hahaha. The author writes 4,000 words a day, but I still feel like I can't get enough. The movie-watching body that is so detailed that I have been collecting it all the time

I have written many different simulated universes, such as the Universal Locust Plague and the Imperial War, and now I am writing about the Unknowable Realm. Although the Unknowable Realm is not very interesting, I personally feel that the plot in it is the best among these simulated universes. Those who watch movies usually have various main plots, interesting game activities, etc., Such as Scott and various simulated universes. It's a pity that so few people write about such an interesting subplot. This book has basically been written. The only pity is that the branch plot of Fox Zhai Zhiyi and Qingque Diyu Group was not written. The writing style is also good.

When I first read it, there were not many chapters, so I kept it for a long time. I thought I was done with it, but I didn't expect it was still going on. This novel is considered to be of good quality in Star Iron Fan Review. Although some small details were not taken care of, it is innocuous. Overall, it is very good [Blow Kiss]

Not bad. The writing is good. Well, there are too many things to write, which makes the main plot slow. The end of Pinoconi must be at least 60 chapters. If you haven't read it yet, you can wait for a week or two.

There is no big problem with the OOC character design, but there is always a situation when watching, (how do you know, how did you infer this answer through the information you saw), more or less. What I mean is that I still hope that the author will not often give the characters watching the movie a God's perspective [face covering]

The writing is quite good, especially the description of the characters, and the world view, or universe view, is very good. The only flaw is that there are too few character pvs. I hope that more character pvs can be written, and there will be no random cps. I personally hope that it is all about friendship. Except for the very obvious cp, everything else is perfect. I hope Ompharos will be released soon! ! ! Looking forward to them seeing Xiaobai's appearance!

This book is really amazing. Not only is the writing rich, the world and characters are numerous, but each character is also vividly described. I haven't read such an amazing work in a long time.

It's very nice and interesting. However, there are relatively few character pvs, but there are event plots and side plots, and the characters are relatively full, which is also quite good. If you mainly want to see character pvs and other evaluations, then don't expect too much, because there are quite few, and most of them are main plots.

This book is very nice [like] [like], the author has read a lot, and I am surprised by the many animations that are linked together, and most of them are not so OOC. The author, please give it a try ✊✊, I look forward to the arrival of the Ompharos plot, and the shock of a real hero [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]