Twelve Talismans from the Start, and I Found the 749 Bureau

The writing is still very good. It does not overwhelm the protagonist. The protagonist is decisive in killing without anger, but he is not inhumane. He kills those who deserve to be killed. The plot between the characters is also well written. It is not too brainless. There may be relatively few chapters at present, but it is enough to show the level. But overall, these 40-odd pictures are good, but one or two of the first few pictures introduce the ability in more detail. In human terms, it is a bit watery, but it is only a small flaw in the front, and it is gone in the back. In summary, it is quite well written. Ah, the author wrote too little! Update Kouya quickly! Let me see the bond between us!!! 😏

The power of thermal weapons has been deliberately lowered. It is infinitely close to Shandong's fist, which can kill a creature, but the bullet cannot break through the defense. A fireball has high temperature, explosive properties, and can also bless one's own strength. I also have one or two tons of power to kill monsters. In the end, this kind of monster can make a city live and die. The army should not be involved in this kind of creature. Armed police and special police are enough.

It's okay, but if you really want to choose one Super Dragon Ball, it's enough. After you make a wish with the Super Dragon Ball, you can collect it again. The wishes that the Super Dragon Ball can make are not simple.

Don't die! Author @boxing

Not a buddy? Isn't this an invincible article? Why is the protagonist so deflated? The star-level golden-horned behemoth can't explode into stars, so how can it fight the protagonist? Based on Dragon Ball's combat power settings, Vegeta can blow up the earth when he gathers his energy in the early stages! The 530,000 Frieza can gather his energy to destroy Namek, a planet 10 times larger than the Earth! But there seems to be no record of stellar-level experts destroying planets, right? It's just that the stellar class can travel to the universe at a minimum level! A mere golden-armored behemoth with a star level can take the lead on No. 18!

It's very nice. I thought it was just another stupid story. It's just that the introduction of the supporting characters is a bit long. However, the supporting characters are also very recognizable and have their own characteristics. This is the only shortcoming in my opinion. The other one is that there are too few. Please update quickly 😢😢😢😢😢

5 Stars, invincible writing, but the combat power is not broken, which is already good. Saiyans are the most difficult to write. Poor rhythm control will make people feel uncomfortable, and the combat power is too strong, which will make people feel boring. Moreover, the setting of the twelve talismans and dragon ball energy to strengthen the talisman rule power is also very novel. At the beginning, not all abilities were obtained. Currently, only Vegeta and the twelve talismans have the ability, and the presence of regular ability monsters is still very interesting.

Vegeta's power must end soon! Let's fast forward to the next stage. It's too short and only has about 200,000 words. Who can read it? Overall, the writing is pretty good, and as far as Tomato is concerned, it's already a pretty good novel.

I guess the writing level of a novice 20 years ago was like a dragon group.

This subject matter is great! It doesn't have to be like One Punch Man, where the protagonist is always offline and always comes to the rescue at critical moments. It can be like the movie "Zhuang Yu Hands Over the Inhibitor" at Station B. I hope that more roles of other supporting characters can be portrayed. The protagonist is the biggest supporter of the supporting characters, so that the plot will be full and the readability and interest will increase.