Seizing the House************

Not bad. I just read a lot of novels. Obviously one world is the most important. It is the long river of fate and the long river of time and space. It doesn't seem to be in your book. The long river of destiny records and binds all living beings in the world. As long as they don't transcend Da Luo. They can never truly be at ease.

I have some suggestions 1. The author can be a spokesman for the way of heaven, like in the prehistoric times. 2. I think monks inhale the aura of heaven and earth, which means they have karma and karma for heaven and earth. When they break through certain realms, they must pay off the karma. After the monks die, the aura returns to heaven and earth. 3. Travelers and children of the world, this type is still a bit new. Oh, yes, there is one more thing. I feel that the world is breaking through a bit quickly. Breakthroughs in other worlds would take at least hundreds, thousands, or even tens of thousands of years. In this world, it feels like breaking through casually is like drinking water. I hope the author can limit it.

The protagonist traveling through the Heaven Transformation Path is not emotionless. He has a second grade, but it is still watchable. There are a few big bad points but not small bad ones, but it does not affect the viewing. This novel is better than other Tendo-ryu novels, and it gave me a different experience. It doesn't have a nanny, it doesn't have a Madonna, it doesn't appear in front of others, and the world view is relatively large. If it wasn't unfinished, it would probably get about 8.7 Points [Like]

Worth a look! Overall it feels okay! Why does such a beautiful book have no traffic?

It's good-looking, one of the few good articles of the same type [like], just don't end up being bad [laughing and crying]

It's okay, but didn't I say before that there would be a thunder disaster if I broke through to the fifth level? Why did I not break through?