
Breaking Through a Big Realm Every Year, Becoming Invincible at the Age of Ten!
每年突破一个大境界,十岁无敌!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 121k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
19Reads
60Chapters
2Listens
29.9kReads · all time





The plot is good, but there is a problem with the scene transition. It is easy to not know who is speaking, and the plot seems incoherent. I have never written a novel, but I think if you don't know how to scene transition, you can add a dividing line and add one or two sentences of explanation after the transition to let the reader know who is now and which scene. Of course, it is best to have a natural transition.
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I just want to ask what state the protagonist's sister is in? Can knock the protagonist unconscious with one punch