Graduated from the Courtyard and Became Xu Damao's Neighbor

(Upper and lower) Purple LV6, 30/50 points First impression 150%: sense of substitution 4, attraction 3 Basic settings 75%: plug-in 2, setting 3 Content 125%: Writing 4↓, Creativity 2 Structure 75%: Rhythm 3, Main Line 3 Details 75%: Character 3-1, Logic 3 Balance Penalty: None Highlights: slightly Poison point: slightly Feelings: No system + old scalper, fan of the main plot, the character of the protagonist is quite unpleasant, at the beginning there are two people helping the protagonist, and then the author is still playing with them, enemies and friends can't be distinguished, alas~, but the writing is really good, but the butt is crooked. Score calculation: 1.5×7+1.25×6+0.75×16=30 Points Difficulty score calculation (experimental): 34.1 ───────────────────

It's because I was too selfish. I gave my work quota to my cousin instead of my own sister.

I personally think it's pretty good. Maybe it's because I've read too many Siheyuan novels. I'm tired of the kind of passionate ones that involve pooping and pissing, or going to jail, being shot, and ascending to heaven. Now I like this kind of bland stuff.

It's okay, it's true that it's plain and simple, and it's not too violent. The male protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, but he can get by pretty well. The people in the courtyard did not exaggerate, but expanded based on their personalities. They were very positive and protective towards Qin Huairu, the poisonous widow. Her suffering only came from her son. The charm of the thirteenth aunt was boundless, and she was the white moonlight of many authors, hahaha.

The best of the courtyard houses! The rating is a bit low. The trivial and trivial things that ruin the story are very interesting, the descriptions of the characters and supporting roles are very graphic, the author's literary talent is very good, and he can show his skill in small details. Well worth a look. Of course, if you like to read about the protagonist's reckless adventures, this book may not be suitable. The biggest highlight of the book should be the supporting characters. Come on author, look forward to updates

The author of this book completely describes the propaganda officers as literary and artistic workers. The timid propaganda officers are vividly described by the author, which effectively avoids the propaganda work that propagandists need to carry out in the face of changes in national policies. It is extremely prescient!

8.9 Points. ✅The writing style is okay. Damao/Zhuzi's lines that sometimes make jokes are a stroke of genius, unbeatable and funny at the same time. ✅The male protagonist Song Xiaofeng traveled to the countryside with no system or golden fingers. He studied hard and was admitted to a technical secondary school, entered a steel rolling mill, lived in a courtyard, and began to fall in love with the courtyard. Single heroine, original Lin Wenjing, police officer. In the early stage, the male protagonist lived in the backyard. In order to prevent himself from being isolated and helpless, he preferred Da Mao. In the later period, Zhuzi married Wang Xiaomei, a capable and intelligent wife, and his behavior improved greatly. In the later period, the male protagonist became more focused on Zhuzi. ✅The starting node of the novel is earlier than the timeline of the TV series. Due to the addition of the male protagonist, the butterfly effect has changed the development path of many characters. Dongxu died due to lack of care of his mother and wife after hemiplegia, Huairu worked in the cafeteria, the Yi family adopted a daughter, Yuyu married the hero's brother, Zhuzhu married a runaway girl and had both children, Guangqi worked in a rolling mill and had a crush on Huairu, Damao Xiao'e got divorced, Damao married a daughter-in-law with a child... ❌In the early days, the family life and work progress were relatively warm and daily. Later fishing... Very cool culture ❌It's understandable that adopting a child is kind-hearted, but the Yi family and the Xu family both want to adopt, but it's quite incomprehensible that the male protagonist doesn't agree. After all, the Yi family and the Xu family have strong financial resources and will not have children in the future, so they will definitely be good to the children. ❌I didn't see the male protagonist's help to the family, although he occasionally described sending food and money (but the help to his two sisters and parents felt too little, maybe because the Song family had few scenes). ❌The male protagonist had a job quota and gave it to his cousin, and the cousin's family only expressed gratitude without seeing any real reward. I also don't understand the reason why I didn't give the place to my sister because I was afraid that my sister would have a job and wouldn't be able to take care of the children. If Sister Jie stays in the countryside, how much more care can the Song parents take? ? ? When he comes to the city, as the younger brother, can't the male protagonist take care of him? Now that they're in the city, the Song family's parents can no longer take care of their son-in-law's family? Now that I'm in the city, my sister's in-laws can't take care of the children anymore? ? ? ? According to the previous description, without the money from the male protagonist, the rural families would be too poor to eat. What would the Song family do to take care of their daughter and her family? Instead, the cousin wants to give him the job because he can't find a wife? Your own daughter is almost starving to death...

It's quite good. At least it's normal. It's the most normal novel I've read in Siheyuan.

I saw Chapter 237 and it was very well written. Maybe it's just one taste per person, but I personally think the rating is low. In addition to not reading the comments, the author always writes "husband", and the song "Serve the Country with Loyalty" is not suitable for the background of the era. Harpoon Feiyu earns tens of dollars a week... I think the writing is very good. I really like the plot and all the characters. The protagonist is not too bad. After time traveling, he is in good health and his five senses are clear. He can be considered a first-level fighting athlete, with two to three pillars of strength. No space, no system. Just a normal person who traveled through the past. There is no old man I know from fishing, and I don't have any relatives or backgrounds. The protagonist has a positive outlook on life and is responsible and dedicated at work. In terms of family, I am willing to endure hardships and be willing to sacrifice. Neighbors have tempers and emotional intelligence. If I could travel back in time, I definitely wouldn't be able to be like him. I personally think this book is much more interesting than those about unlimited supplies, about fishing and hunting, about flying to the sky and escaping from the earth, about stabbing people together, and about having a harem. And the most detailed thing is that my father-in-law is not a big leader, he has some background but not much. And even better is that although the protagonist is in the industrial sector, it is not a courtyard house story about rejuvenating the country through science and technology. There is no way a scientist would live in a courtyard house like No. 95! You are so awesome in Tianzun, how dare you bully someone who is researching machine tool missiles in the courtyard? Are the stories about martyrs even more ridiculous? Just after the Korean War, hang that sign on the door. If the room is occupied or bullied, let alone a few uncles, the so-called Director Wang can do it. If he doesn't get laid off, it will be considered that Director Wang has a hard backstage! Currently five points, thanks to the author.

To be honest, the rating of this book is too low. This book is well written and well-organized. The protagonist is brave and resourceful, and he is ordinary but also proud. It is much better than those cool articles that bring a sky-exploding system and slap people in the face all day long, which actually lowers the IQ of all mankind [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Blandness is the truth, right? See too much shit and pee. This book. It feels okay. You can say how good it is, but I can't say it, it's just mediocre.

The writing is pretty good. My occupation is a publicity officer, which is a relatively rare occupation in Siheyuan novels. The main character is a bit small, but it's okay. I hope it has a single female protagonist.

It's one of the few Siheyuan that I don't complain about. It doesn't kill this and that at every turn. The characters in it don't have a single personality either.

It's okay, no cheats, the overall logic is on point, and it's frivolous.

It's well written, not too violent. The plot is reasonable,

It's not bad, it just needs to be taken care of.

The book My Wife Is a Police Officer is very well written and I like it very much.

It's okay, I can read it when I'm short on books.

The writing is pretty good, although it's a bit irritating.

Well written, a masterpiece among the courtyard houses

Until I worked undercover in the cleaning team, there was no poisonous spot, and I could get five stars and a tiger head. Follow-up review, a more real courtyard house, a more hypocritical courtyard house

Very satisfied Very satisfied

I gave it 4 stars. The main character doesn't even have space.

The protagonist is in the Propaganda Department. Can you write more about work?

Give it a five-star rating. What's good about it is that it saves you from wasting time.

It's rare to have a time traveler with no system and no space. It's not easy to live well [face covering]

This is the Siheyuan novel I have read in the past few years. It is the first novel with carts in the yard. It turns out that they are all from Shazhu, the Yan family, and the Liu family went to the next yard to borrow carts. Today is the first time that I have a cart in my yard.

It's still a relatively good Siheyuan fanfic. The parents are cynical and are handled well. It's not particularly disturbing.

The most beautiful courtyard house, no superpowers, no system, full of life atmosphere

Yes, it is not as divisive as the system. It describes the shortcomings of the family in the courtyard house. Keep it up!