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The writing style has improved compared to before. Except for some unnecessary content, it is much more complete than before. It would be better to improve the character design. It is best to delete some irrelevant plot backgrounds and add some content about how Yuri found these two people.

It's pretty good among the few MO fans, and the plot is very clear in the first volume. I just feel that the age of the protagonist is too young. It could be increased to eight years old. When my younger brother was four years old, he was still being led around on a pedal bike.

Very imaginative, but I wonder if he will come up with new weapons

What do you mean I'm not the author? It was hard to find one that was still being updated. At the beginning, I devoured more than fifty pages, and the book only has more than three hundred pages. I limit you to update it as soon as you finish the college entrance examination and replenish me at a rate of 10 times. If you owe me more than fifty pages, write more than five hundred chapters to replenish it. (Actually, the author who is joking, go for the college entrance examination👏 (dog head🐶) and I want to be a group favorite and don't like to be cut with a knife.)

Personal suggestions for the following behavior, don't criticize if you don't like it: I feel that this book has too little description of the protagonist, because basically the people who can read Mental Omega fan fiction are people who have played the original version. There are too many descriptions of the original version, which seems a bit boring. I feel that I can write some original plots centered on the protagonist, and then generally follow the original story development.

It must be five stars. The author must give affirmation for replying and updating. In the future, I hope to update ten times a day [smirk][snicker][smirk]

How many times have you persisted? It's so precious.

It's a rare and good-looking movie, but Lao Mo appears too little and it feels a bit too young. I hope the author can do more. It's not enough.

Can you tell me about this book?

I hope the author will not be like the last book again

It's great to read a sweet novel, but the plot of Chapter 44 told me that there are no more humans. It can be read as some cool articles. If you want to ask me why I reduced one star, then I have to mention 600 people to defend against the non-stop attack of nearly 70,000 people by two combined fleets. Regarding the above comments, I can only say that military science no longer exists.

What a shame, I hope to see it end smoothly

The new book is gone. Is there any replacement? I really want to continue reading Lao Mo's story.

The writing is so good. There are very few people who can write Mental Omega fan works so vividly. I hope the author can stick to it.