Don't Laugh at Him for Being a Shady Guy, He's Been Hiding His Knife for Tens of Thousands of Years

Reading recommendation 2 stars: The protagonist is a male mother. The author writes many times in the book that there are knives here and there, which makes it uncomfortable to read😣. The author wants to write about the cautious character of the protagonist, but the description in the game is relatively blunt. The caution later described from the perspective of the player gave me a feeling of compensation😖. 5-Star recommendation for listening to books: Who is still thinking after listening to books? The book contains a lot of memes and a lot of originals, so you won't feel bored or embarrassed. It's just that when you listen to the book, you will feel like you want to burn it but can't, but overall it's still very good. Summary recommendation: 4 stars [like] [like] [like] The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't comment (✿＞◡❛)Thank you

Unlike other authors who completely copy the game plot and abandon the plot to start a new line, the author can be said to have written more exciting "game content", and there are not too many inexplicable custom settings. I would like to call it Beng Tie's masterpiece. This moment! It's the time to become a god! Power!!

It looks good, but I personally feel that the arrangement of the development team at the beginning of Yaliluo's plot is a bit inappropriate. The protagonist Dan Heng's choice of one of two plot advancement methods will make the subsequent plot of the game lack of foreshadowing. At the same time, Dan Heng faces insufficient preparation in the early stage and directly goes to Xianzhou to develop his own protagonist. The irrationality caused by the line, I personally feel that if it is to highlight the protagonist, in the plot of the member selection, no matter what the choice is, the final protagonist and Dan Heng will start Yaliluo's pioneering journey together. After all, the train crew's secret code is a hidden line related to the characters of Yun Shang Wu Xiao.

Now that I have seen Luofu, there are advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the plot that the protagonist follows is very clever and not invincible. He is well portrayed and has a strong personality. If this character really existed in the game, I would probably recommend it. The original characters have no OOC except for some inappropriate descriptions at the beginning, and the interactions are very loving. The player plot, the strength of the protagonist, etc. Are all written in detail, and the knife on the protagonist is not a brainless knife. I am commenting now because I saw the protagonist and Jing Yuan exchanging information in a chess game, which is a metaphor for the Luofu form. This part is very exciting. The shortcoming is the description of male videos mentioned at the beginning. Facts have proved that this lightning protection is very necessary. As a woman, I was almost poisoned when I first watched it, but I gradually became able to accept it as I watched it later. It gave me a feeling similar to Angel in Garters. ? The protagonist is not having an affair with any women, so if you insist on saying so, then it counts as one? To disgust the protagonist? But it's just a single arrow. In fact, I don't quite understand why Aha is so interested in the protagonist. I hope the author can explain it. Of course, if I didn't read it carefully or there is an explanation later, I will apologize here. The main female anchors do not have archways and are generous. In fact, most of them are crazy about the characters () or it may be because they have less exposure to this type of anchors. So far, overall, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages, and it deserves this five-star rating. I'll take a look later and hope the author will keep it up. I've just watched the end of Xianzhou. Overall, it's still pretty good so far. It's a bit sadistic and a bit fun. I plan to keep it until Pinoconi finishes writing. Editor 2: Hahaha, I knew I couldn't keep it up (wry smile), it's already tied 🥲 Generally speaking, the better it gets in the later stages, the author's original plot is very good, I highly recommend it, and there aren't many descriptions of male videos. You can watch it as long as you're not so sensitive. Come on, I'm looking forward to Ompharos later, but I hope it doesn't end in Ompharos, okay?

It was a good read. It felt natural to get along with the train crew, and the jokes were not awkward or overdone. It made me feel like I first saw this game when the server was first launched. Come on, author.

It's over. I really like Ling Zhou after watching it. He's a reliable adult. I want to see him continue to develop with the train crew. But I can also understand that Ompharos is really difficult to write. To be honest, I feel that the plot of MiHoYo is completely broken. It is really reluctant to continue to include Ling Zhou. I am also very grateful to the author for the last time. Finally, Lingzhou was given an open ending. Although logically speaking, dying in Pinoconi is the perfect ending, but how could we not be partial to the protagonist after chasing him all the way? He will still have a future, he can continue to develop, and he may continue to reincarnate and have new stories. This is the best ending, Lingzhou, see you tomorrow.

The author's writing is very good, and the character creation is also very good, but the number of words is a bit short in the update. I beg you, please, if you can have more words next time. The child doesn't have enough to eat

🥲The writing is very good, and the interweaving between the plot of Star Iron and the audience in the parallel world is also great. The combination promotes the progress of the story without repetition and delay. The setting is also interesting, and the jokes are moderate enough not to be embarrassing. Written with great care!

Very, very well written! If I hadn't suddenly remembered that this was a male video, I would have thought it was written by a female author (no derogatory meaning) It doesn't matter if you don't play a game, it won't delay your reading at all. Maybe it's because it's a male-video novel. There are so many words in it that I don't even know what they mean (referring to real-life Internet hot words, not those in games) ≡ω≡ But we just went back for this novel, okay?⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾ The author's writing is very good, and the foreshadowing is well laid out (although he accidentally revealed it to us overtly and covertly). The protagonist is the type that I like very much. He has a close relationship with the stars/dome, but does not make people feel ambiguous. (Still feeling about myself) ¯_( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)_/¯ There is no OOC (in my eyes), it is very realistic and full of life. The plot added by the author himself is also very common sense. At least after I read the novel and went through the plot, I felt good about it. I only made slight modifications to the outline, but there is not much difference. (Except for Lingzhou's solo plot: such as Yaliluo-VI) ♡(ӦｖVEN｡) It's just that the ending is a bit sloppy, I feel like it could have been more exciting. I originally read the author's previous message and thought that after this book was finished, there might be a second book about Ompharos, but unfortunately, the author's other book has nothing to do with this one. I really feel that there are many connections between the protagonist and Bai E, I really want to see it (yes, you heard me right, I am making a wish, although it is impossible) Moreover, many things written in the novel also appear in reality, such as: What is the probability of getting 100 tickets or 1,600 stars? Bengtie happened to be there when I traveled back this year, which was quite strange, mainly because I didn't know if it had existed before. Let me put it bluntly, the characters created by the author are really great. After I go home, I really hope to have such a character by my side to accompany me through the universe. Now when I go through the plot of Luofu and Pinoconi, I always feel a sense of déjà vu, as if I have someone by my side. [I'll always be by your side] (Really, I should have read the plot of the game first before watching it. It's easy to get into it after watching it's so amazing! (┳◇┳)) All in all, all in all, this book is wonderful and well worth reading. (Forgive me for my poor Chinese (..))

It's great, I recommend it. The protagonist really feels like an old father, which makes me feel so sad😭😭😭The sense of fate is huge! ! ! I felt a little nervous at the beginning. The plot has been changed a lot. Everyone has brains and independent thoughts, which is very rare (99% rare... I think you can watch it if you don't play games, because except for the general route, the plot of the original game has basically changed a lot.

The author's writing style is very good. I hope the author will not give up. I will keep chasing the update until the day it is finished♪ If I encounter a black man, I will go through fire and water for the author without hesitation♪

This book really manages to sew the characters into it without any sense of disobedience. It adds the plot of Lingzhou to the original plot. It's so fun. The skill design is also well-informed. It can be seen that the author is a rabbit head who really knows how to calculate data [laughs evilly] [like] I must give it a good review. Except for being elbowed by the crane from time to time, it is in line with my expectations.

Nice! So far, the updates are diligent Logical and smooth It's good to bury the foreshadowing Give people motivation to continue reading The writing is okay, the description is ok Overall very funny and fun If you look at the introduction, you will know that there is a big sword at the back. Wrapped I really like reading this kind of writing. If it's well written, it's a big hit. If it's not well written, it's Dazang. He wrote it well, it's a pretty good book. In my personal opinion, it looks good It is recommended to go see It must have been funny in the early stages. Because it hasn't been released yet

It's a very good fanfic. I happened to fall into the trap of Bengtie when I was reading the early stage. After reading the plot myself and comparing it with this book, I can clearly see that I have my own ingenuity in plot changes. It is reasonable and combined with the intensity of substitution makes it even more enjoyable. The updates are always on time. I have been anxiously waiting for updates at 7 o'clock several times. It can be seen that the author is describing a Bengtie with Lingzhou with love (some details are very immersive and refreshing in this aspect). Thank you very much to the author for accompanying me all the way! The only regret is that I can't see the author's changed plot of Omphalos... It's really a shame! Because I happened to get into the trap around 3.1-3.2, After catching up with the plot update, I really felt that Weng's narrative rhythm made the whole plot very fragmented. I originally thought that I could see new understanding from the author, but unfortunately I also understand the author's difficulties very well. Thank you for your hard work for these hundreds of days on time TT Finally, I hope and wish that if the author is willing to write a new fanfic, he can bring you a different Omphalos!

Lingzhou is so handsome! The plot is very rhythmic and has a lot of feeling. I hope the author will stick with it! Lingzhou's reliable and playful character is really interesting. I hope the author can strike a good balance between reliability and cheerfulness. (Why did the star of the event ban our Lingzhou, woo woo woo) (But I really love the plot of Xianzhou. It is because it is funny and funny, and it is only when the knife is used that it directly touches the soul. What do you think, author?)

Support it, it's pretty cool. The heroine is a little disappointed to see that it is not available now. The plot is smooth and the setting is also very good, but the benefits are too exaggerated. The portrayal of the protagonist and Brunia is also great, and the deep-seated reasons and their growth are also written.

Not bad, not bad. I originally thought that writing a game would not be as good as directly traveling through time, but I didn't expect it to exceed expectations. The knife thing is actually pretty good. I didn't like Tai Lezi's writing at first, but this book didn't steal the spotlight from other characters, and my impression of it suddenly improved. The plot has not been significantly changed from the original text. It feels more like a book that supplements the setting. The characters are not too OOC, so it is enough [Like] You can read the first few chapters to test the waters before deciding whether to continue reading. (Right now, the latest chapter I've seen is about Pinoconi)

Yes, there are relatively few people who write about Bengtiekachi, but the writing style of the author is very good, really good. Every time he posts, I read it immediately, so you must stick to it. The character creation is very good. There is no character OOC at the moment. The story line follows the main plot. It is natural, but it is a little bit knife-edge, but it is a little less now. I have just finished Pinoconi (Chapter 513), but I suggest the author divide it into the next volume, Black Tower Space Station, Yalilo VI, Immortal Boat, Pinoconi... And so on. It will be easier for readers to find the next volume. After all, some people choose a certain place to read... For example, I specialize in eating fairy boats. The whole text is non-toxic. I update at least one chapter every day and 3 chapters in a good mood. It's pretty good. Finally, Lingzhou is so handsome! The book circle boss seems to have drawn a picture, is it good?

There are more than 600 chapters in the novel, but it actually only does one thing. Only one story was told, a story that was slightly changed from the original story. And this story created a very charming male protagonist. This character has almost no flaws and is very reliable. It's a good explanation of what "pulling the knife out of a teammate's body and inserting it into yourself" means. From the beginning to the end of this story, everything has a prologue and everything is foreshadowed. It can be seen that the author's outline is very good. The game perspective in it brings us closer to the protagonist, and the description of the female anchor arouses our emotions. Great story, great characters, great idiosyncrasies. It's a very good article.

Strong male protagonist. This character has almost no flaws and is very reliable. It's a good explanation of what "pulling the knife out of a teammate's body and inserting it into yourself" means. From the beginning to the end of this story, everything has a prologue and everything is foreshadowed. It can be seen that the author's outline is very good. The game perspective in it brings us closer to the protagonist, and the description of the female anchor's picture further arouses our emotions. Great story, great characters, great idiosyncrasies. It's a very good article.

It's not bad, but even though the introduction mentions the writing style of male porn, I obviously didn't make enough preparations. Maybe I haven't read male porn novels in this way before, but in the chapters I read, the plots are quite good, but the pink fists and other things are really a bit [face covering]. Every time I put it in, it will bring me back to reality, haha ​​(wry smile) It's also a very hard life.

The book is very good, but in terms of plot, I think we can give the protagonist a first death to give the players a gap period. At this time, I will definitely feel very uncomfortable, and then at a certain key point later, the protagonist will be resurrected in some way, and then return...

The plot of Yaliluo is pretty good, and I've seen other fans who rarely use words to describe Cocolia's mistakes. Her attitude toward the martyrs (Iron Guards) during the plot made me very uncomfortable. This book really takes her mistakes seriously.

The plot is moving and contagious, with a certain degree of original plot, and it also restores the original Iron Collapse plot well. [Like] The author has a deep understanding of the plot of Bengtie. He must have read the text, maybe several times. In addition, the author is too funny [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I found a few novels among a lot of meme [laughing] The author is very good at it, but he seems to know too much [laughing] A lot of the copywriting in the text messages makes people's eyes dark [laughing] Readers who are looking for a knife are in luck, the author is well versed in the art of tricking people into making a knife [laughter] The author writes very well, with an open ending and a lot of his own stuff. I look forward to the next one [laughing]

There are currently 118 chapters. I have basically finished reading the Beloberg chapter. I personally feel very good about it. Regarding the game plot, players will have different plots according to different options. This is a regret that I had during the game. In Beloberg, the Danheng line and the Lingzhou line are handled this way. If it is the same in the game, I can The star iron score can reach 9, and the most enjoyable thing is the Lingzhou line's handling of the outcome of Cocolia. I was very angry when playing, and the writing in the article was very to my liking (to prevent spoilers, I won't go into details). Then, the interaction between the anchor and the audience in the player world is pretty good, and I recognize the level of power generation. The best viewing experience of this book is to put it into the player's perspective. For example, if Bengtie arranged for Lingzhou to have a daily check-in of 60 pieces a day with some surprises, it would be an unparalleled gaming experience in the early stages of the game.

The author's character creation is very good and the writing style is also good. In addition, the author's original plot is also quite exciting. Although there is no major change, this small change is very good. It is not dangerously abrupt in the main line and does not have a sense of disharmony. In addition, although the author did not write the plot of Ompharos, he gave reasonable reasons. And I also feel that there is really nothing that can be changed in Ompharos. And I feel that there is not much care in writing the plot of Ompharos. Anyway, I understand the author very well. And I really think the author is pretty good. I think anyone who likes Honda can check it out.

The writing is very good, but I like to watch movies with multiple female protagonists. It is too difficult to have no female protagonist. It feels a pity not to write multiple female protagonists for this kind of safe character, but it is understandable. After all, it is easy to write an original novel, but there is no motivation to keep reading!

More soon, faster, I want to see the protagonist lose his vest, Pinoconi fights the underworld, and speeds through Onfalos [Adoration] I'm really looking forward to the knife, but I hope it's normal and doesn't get beaten to death by random minions. That would ruin the character (referring to the protagonist's strong character)😃 No dude, the last few chapters have been so messed up that I don't even want to read them😡

It's amazing, I feel like the characters are completely consistent, and it feels like the best Star Iron fanfic I've read in a while! ! !

Natural, smooth and logical, just like Tomato's usual fast pace