Lonely Rock: Notes

The protagonist of the novel gives people a gloomy temperament but does not express it. He can describe more of his personal expressions of certain things and people when he is alone. The picture is better, but it does not give people a sense of empathy. The author can add more details and environment descriptions. It's okay for the emotional line. You can write a special emotion in the details step by step. For example, the carefulness in being alone finally bursts out, giving people a sense of picture and sweetness. Generally speaking, the author has a lot of room for improvement. There are very few single-girl Ryo Yamada in lonely rock. Such a book will not make any money. I hope the author will work hard 😊 Last update! ! ! ! ! ! There is really no way, a certain author wants to review it, I, a person who is suave, has a jade tree in the wind, and is as gentle as a warm wind, must be satisfied [sending my heart] In the following chapters, the writing style feels better, the description of the environment, and the description of details heighten the sad atmosphere, giving the reader a melancholy experience. The sense of picture and the level of detail make readers can't help but imagine the picture. But there are too few updates. This is a flaw, but the flaws cannot be concealed. This is undoubtedly a work with a score of 9.0 Or above in my heart [Blow a kiss] I am honored to know this book and the author. I think people are connected by countless accidents, like parallel lines in mathematics. Because of the accidental inclination, we have an intersection on its future extension line [laughing] Thank you all, because there are many people who have helped me. I hope that like the protagonist of this book, you will be saved by others, whether now or in the future. Thanks again! ! [Blowing kiss]

It's so beautiful that I love watching it.

The characters have distinct personalities and characteristics that resonate with me. The character descriptions are detailed and not OOC, especially Hiroi. It can attract readers' emotions and create a strong sense of immersion. Readers can intuitively see the changes in the protagonist. The writing is delicate.

There are relatively few fan fictions written about Liang in 🍅. The protagonist in the author's works is very gentle. I hope I can keep writing. I will always keep it [love] Why is the group gone?

Very good, this is the best fanfic of Ryo I have ever seen [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] So happy The author started writing more and more. He was a little cautious at first, but he got better and better at the end.

Support every novel about coolness

There are really few cool writers. I must praise and support the author.

Looks great, very beautiful The author peeked at me for ten years and wrote the appearance of the protagonist [laughs]

The author must persevere

It's hard to find a cool book, so of course I need to give it my full support.

It's a very good novel, very healing, but a bit unreadable.

Not bad, I think it looks pretty [laughs] [admiration] [sends my heart]

The super invincible Thunder Tornado stuffed the ball and blasted the Thunder. It looked good, but it wasn't enough. It wasn't enough at all.

The writing is pretty good, it looks comfortable and brisk, but it's slower.

Points deducted: Almost all girls have a past with the male protagonist, like a harem, Since we decided to have only one female protagonist, we should write more cool stories. Why add so many other emotional lines to the protagonist?

It looks great, but it's too short!

Don't tell me, don't tell me, it's pretty good-looking

More updates? If not, I will change it to two stars [currently in progress]