I, the King of Immortal Cultivation Scroll, Am I Wrong to Do Military Training in Heaven?

The subject matter is unique and novel, and the content is novel yet so "real". I am a loan repayer, and although I have only read a few dozen chapters so far, I am still very impressed overall. Just like the protagonist who just passed through the soul, there is a 1 million "basket" waiting in front, and this has been the case from the beginning to now. I think I have read quite a few novels, and I am very optimistic about this book. I leave a book review here. Although it is like a "newborn", not many people pay attention to it, but when I look back, I can see it on the list and leave a mark. When the protagonist finishes paying off the money and welcomes his own new world, I think I should also step up my steps to chase the clouds that belong to me. I also wish that all Taoist friends and loan repayers will meet good people and make good friends and not be trapped by the three loans and the five elements.

I like this book very much, and I am willing to give it full marks. However, I have a few suggestions that the author can refer to and write to make it more comfortable for readers. I personally think that the emotional line can be written a little more, especially with Bai Youwei's girlfriend who is a shy girl during the day and a cold sister at night. We still like to read it. , And since there is a system, can the strength be improved a little faster, it is too slow, can it be improved by having more adventures for the protagonist, so that the protagonist is always in infinite debt and looks aggrieved, there is no need to do this, and other things about the protagonist's family, if the author does not portray it well, there is no need to portray it.

The subject matter is very novel, the world view is magnificent, and the relationships between the characters are rich. It's so addictive that I can't stop reading it. I wonder if the author can write 100,000 words a day [Love]

The book is quite good, but there are too few. I finished it in one go. The character of the protagonist is similar to a book I read before. Looking at the world view laid out by the author, I can probably write four to five hundred chapters, so don't stop updating [smile]

Although the plot is old-fashioned, the plot is well controlled so far, that is, none of the parents or friends have the slightest doubt about the protagonist whose temperament has changed drastically, and they even know nothing about what happened to the protagonist, just like an NPC in a game.

The plot content is indeed novel and I predict it will be popular.

It's quite funny. I hope the author doesn't turn it into a harem novel.

It's time to show real skills [laughs]

This setting is really interesting

Good, good, good

The plot is good and the routines are okay

Looks good, details are in place

Okay, it's very social

Love to read, the writing is humorous

It's great. I'd love to read more. The main reason is that there are too few chapters right now, otherwise the rating would definitely be high.

The cybernetic cultivator category is okay! Among them, the flavors of Weird Fairy and I Really Didn't Want to Be Reborn are so obvious that it makes people look more dramatic!

It's quite interesting, the setting is very interesting, and it's amazing at first glance, but the overall framework is still that of urban immortality, with nothing new. It's good to read it as a cool article.

The subject matter is novel and combined with social hot topics

Good-looking, with a very novel physique, combining money and cultivating immortality, maybe there is nothing better than this in modern cultivating immortality,

The book is quite good, and the foreshadowing is well laid out. It can be seen that the author has a general plan for the whole book, and it is quite enjoyable to read.

Looks great, looking forward to the follow-up

I feel like the bag is going to be popular. Very interesting subject matter

Very novel, recommended Very well written and interesting

Very good, well written

It's really well written.

Okay, okay, but not enough.

Not bad, has a fresh feeling

Is there a second sequel?

Are there so few people watching it? It's really beautiful.

The plot in the early stages is well laid out, and it's a cool story but not mindless.