[Comprehensive Comics] Let's Start Genshin Impact Together

The content of this book is quite novel, the writing is fluent, the logic is reasonable, and there are no problems. At present, each character has not appeared in the OOC mentioned by the author in the introduction, and it can also write the familiar character and feeling of the character. There is no abrupt place, especially for Fischer, the words of Fischer's second grade are not perfunctory, but are written in full, which is really surprising. The confusion and psychology of ordinary people can be seen in the protagonist of this book, and there is no discomfort in the perception. But here are some suggestions: 1. Try not to include those invincible characters in Japanese comics. For example, once Kusuo Saiki came out, the character of Abyss was somewhat reduced. Personally, I feel that it is not conducive to future development. 2. Qiqi seldom speaks long sentences. Qiqi usually speaks in short sentences.

The main filming location is with the three giants of comprehensive comics. The writing is generally good. The OOC parts are probably caused by AI. There are not many and it does not affect the reading experience, so it is not a big problem. But I have some doubts. After reviewing Wenye, I have no idea how the timeline and world view are handled. The Wenye timeline is before or after World War II. Ming Ke is after Japan's bubble economy, but Ke Xue The timeline is too long so it can accommodate other comics other than his time. However, there is currently no explanation of the timeline, let alone how Conan's name will be dealt with after the comics. Then there is another worldview problem that all comics will cause. It is not clear how to deal with the cultural regression. After ignoring the bugs caused by these worldview conflicts, the overall situation is okay. I would like to give the author a suggestion. You can consider revising the AI part to make it more natural (to be honest, I feel that you are using expansion just to make up the word count, but I have done this before and I am not qualified to say that you are). AI expansion can easily lead to inexplicable descriptions. Then, you can consider Jin Fei. A platform like Tomato that promotes brainless coolness is not suitable for the development of plot growth.

It's pretty good. It would feel better if the protagonist didn't participate in the plot behind the scenes.

Come on! The author writes very well

It's very beautiful. If you keep updating it, it will definitely become popular in the future! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very good, the setting is also very novel, but the character's combat power is somewhat weakened

It looks great and the characters blend in very naturally.

The subject matter is relatively new and worth reading