[Easy] [Invincible] [Alternative cultivating immortals to escape from daily life]
Female high school student Murong Zhiyuan traveled to another world and became the Tushan Fox tribe. Due to a "disciple exchange" activity, she brought a "travel brochure" sent by the other party to visit the famous sect Yu Chan Mountain Zhugen Peak in Tonghu Lu Prefecture.
In this immortal mansion that has gone through so many years, she met her senior brother who was also a fellow time traveler.
But she found that her senior brother's painting style was not quite right.
My senior brother is good at wine, poetry, and poetry, and he is very good at capturing dragons and slaying monsters, but I have never seen him practice.
The thousand-year-old giant pine planted by the master was cut down by the senior brother and made into fishing rods, with the inscription "Never Air Force".
On the riverside, He Bo made trouble and forcibly married a commoner's daughter. The senior brother put on the bride's red wedding dress and got into the sedan chair to pretend to be the bride, giving Mr. He Bo a huge surprise.
Princess Jiaolong traveled across the river to find trouble, and was tricked by her senior brother into having a drinking contest with her. She drank wine under the table and broke her up on the spot.
Senior Brother Diaoerlang is not serious, but he sees the level of the mountain when he encounters a mountain.
Senior brother said he didn't die, who would believe it!
Reader comments
I feel that this book is about cultivating easily. The protagonist pretends to be 13, meets a beautiful girl and falls in love. It is quite relaxing to read at ordinary times. It does not upgrade deliberately, and it is not holding back when you are angry. It is just playing, and your strength increases while playing.
I hope the emotional line can be written better later. It is natural to write about supporting characters, but don't write about group portraits. Use supporting characters as compliments and stop there.
For female characters that have nothing to do with the protagonist, just write them down casually. Just like when you first knew that the female disciple liked the second disciple, mention it a little to let the readers know that they are a couple. The protagonist cannot be with that woman, lest someone complain about the cp and think that the girl is being given away. This is fine, and there is no need to write about their relationship in the future.
The reason why I say so much is because I feel that this book is really good. I really hope that there will be no surprises in the emotional aspect later. I just want to watch the protagonist practice cultivation easily and then fall in love.
Never end up with a female character who often appears in the protagonist's daily life and has a good relationship with someone else. Laozu [crying] [crying] [crying]
The writing is good. There are basically no problems with the writing style and content. Rather, some of the plots are quite excellent. But there is one thing. I feel that the protagonist seems to be cultivating the road of freedom, but in fact he is far away from the real freedom. The protagonist's freedom is Yao relies too much on external things. The freedom of relying on external things is ultimately difficult to be free. Real freedom is a transformation of the state of mind, a state where things and I are forgotten, and sadness and joy are not in the heart. The protagonist is still too emotional. I feel that it is not suitable for the way of freedom. The emphasis on love is too heavy. The result is that it is inevitable to be burdened by love. If something happens to the person you care about, the protagonist's state of mind will be easily disturbed. Of course, I don't want the protagonist to be a white-eyed wolf who doesn't care about the people around him. I just want to say that the protagonist's state of mind has never been calm. I want Said, if the protagonist really wants to be free, he should at least reach this state: even if something happens to someone around him, he can calmly accept it without any trouble, and then find ways to solve it. As for the final result, let it be, good or bad, and he will not feel happy or sad because of it. I think this state is closer to Xiaoyao. Of course, this state is not suitable for writing novels. It will make the protagonist's emotions too indifferent. Just imagine, even if the protagonist becomes a Taoist couple with others, he will not be happy about it, and even if the Taoist couple dies, he will not be sad about it. This is definitely not suitable for writing novels [face covering] But no matter what, I feel that the current protagonist is still too far away from Xiaoyao. What the protagonist behaves now is actually more like the Confucian way of following one's heart. Still acting under the constraints of rules and morals, with a strong sense of purpose, and a strong desire to achieve goals. Generally speaking, it is limited to the behavioral level, and there is a big gap from the spiritual level of happiness [Chigua] How the author wants to write Xiaoyao in the future, I think I still need to think more, after all, I directly chose this Taoist thought to pursue. I will wait and see how much you can write, the author. Anyway, so far I have not seen any novel that can really write Xiaoyao [Like]
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author
It's nice, but there's no one there.
Just three words, good! Good! Good!
It's really interesting. The senior brother who is essentially very reliable and well-controlled has to become a loser in order to cultivate immortality. It's really interesting to watch it for the first time.
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Interesting, interesting [cool]
Very interesting, good luck to the author
Actually, I dislike novels with two time travellers, but this one is very relaxing and comfortable to listen to.
It's very beautiful, why is there no one there?
It's delicious. My kids love it, but it's just not enough [smile][smile][smile]
The processing method is a bit too gentle. There is no fault in the article. It is very suitable for my taste. I will read it after reading 50 chapters. It is too little now.
Well, this is my first review. This book is very interesting, rich in background and content.
I feel that this book is about cultivating easily. The protagonist pretends to be 13, meets a beautiful girl and falls in love. It is quite relaxing to read at ordinary times. It does not upgrade deliberately, and it is not holding back when you are angry. It is just playing, and your strength increases while playing. I hope the emotional line can be written better later. It is natural to write about supporting characters, but don't write about group portraits. Use supporting characters as compliments and stop there. For female characters that have nothing to do with the protagonist, just write them down casually. Just like when you first knew that the female disciple liked the second disciple, mention it a little to let the readers know that they are a couple. The protagonist cannot be with that woman, lest someone complain about the cp and think that the girl is being given away. This is fine, and there is no need to write about their relationship in the future. The reason why I say so much is because I feel that this book is really good. I really hope that there will be no surprises in the emotional aspect later. I just want to watch the protagonist practice cultivation easily and then fall in love. Never end up with a female character who often appears in the protagonist's daily life and has a good relationship with someone else. Laozu [crying] [crying] [crying]
The writing is good. There are basically no problems with the writing style and content. Rather, some of the plots are quite excellent. But there is one thing. I feel that the protagonist seems to be cultivating the road of freedom, but in fact he is far away from the real freedom. The protagonist's freedom is Yao relies too much on external things. The freedom of relying on external things is ultimately difficult to be free. Real freedom is a transformation of the state of mind, a state where things and I are forgotten, and sadness and joy are not in the heart. The protagonist is still too emotional. I feel that it is not suitable for the way of freedom. The emphasis on love is too heavy. The result is that it is inevitable to be burdened by love. If something happens to the person you care about, the protagonist's state of mind will be easily disturbed. Of course, I don't want the protagonist to be a white-eyed wolf who doesn't care about the people around him. I just want to say that the protagonist's state of mind has never been calm. I want Said, if the protagonist really wants to be free, he should at least reach this state: even if something happens to someone around him, he can calmly accept it without any trouble, and then find ways to solve it. As for the final result, let it be, good or bad, and he will not feel happy or sad because of it. I think this state is closer to Xiaoyao. Of course, this state is not suitable for writing novels. It will make the protagonist's emotions too indifferent. Just imagine, even if the protagonist becomes a Taoist couple with others, he will not be happy about it, and even if the Taoist couple dies, he will not be sad about it. This is definitely not suitable for writing novels [face covering] But no matter what, I feel that the current protagonist is still too far away from Xiaoyao. What the protagonist behaves now is actually more like the Confucian way of following one's heart. Still acting under the constraints of rules and morals, with a strong sense of purpose, and a strong desire to achieve goals. Generally speaking, it is limited to the behavioral level, and there is a big gap from the spiritual level of happiness [Chigua] How the author wants to write Xiaoyao in the future, I think I still need to think more, after all, I directly chose this Taoist thought to pursue. I will wait and see how much you can write, the author. Anyway, so far I have not seen any novel that can really write Xiaoyao [Like]
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author
It's nice, but there's no one there.
Just three words, good! Good! Good!
It's really interesting. The senior brother who is essentially very reliable and well-controlled has to become a loser in order to cultivate immortality. It's really interesting to watch it for the first time.
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Interesting, interesting [cool]
Very interesting, good luck to the author
Actually, I dislike novels with two time travellers, but this one is very relaxing and comfortable to listen to.
It's very beautiful, why is there no one there?
It's delicious. My kids love it, but it's just not enough [smile][smile][smile]
The processing method is a bit too gentle. There is no fault in the article. It is very suitable for my taste. I will read it after reading 50 chapters. It is too little now.
Well, this is my first review. This book is very interesting, rich in background and content.