Ipartment: My Traditional Girlfriend

It suits my personal taste quite well. I hope the original CP will not be ripped apart. Except for Zhang Wei and Zhuge Dali, this pairing is really awkward for me personally. Zhang Wei is more suitable with Jian Ning, who is doing archaeological work. (The above comments only represent my personal opinion, please don't criticize if you don't like it)

The writing (●v●)✍🏻 is good, the single female protagonist Xin Ling has a successful career, but the plot can be slightly optimized. For example, the plot of Zhang Wei missing the wedding👰🏻 can be optimized in the future. The image of Zi Qiao and Teacher Zeng was devastating [Chigua]

In fact, it has three stars at most, and the other one star is given to Xin Ling. The title of the book is "Love Apartment, Traditional Girlfriend", but except for the sense of presence when I didn't move to the love apartment, it is difficult to have a sense of presence after I moved there. Basically, it's just love apartment. In fact, half of it is a sweet story about the male and female protagonists, and then the other half of the plot is pretty good, or it's a bit more derivative. This kind of thing is very suitable for writing a variety movie. You don't need to be locked up in a love apartment. You can travel, try other industries, or sports. The author's plot is okay, but he only chose a chef and acupuncture. The book continues to be full of plot, and it can only be rated eight points at most.

In the original drama, Xin Ling will probably get sick and die somewhere after leaving the love apartment! No matter how it is written, Give Xinling a Home deserves five stars.

Very good, Xin Ling is beautiful

It's not bad. It has a single heroine, Xin Ling, and some original plots. The future is promising. There are not many love apartment fanfics now, and there are even fewer love apartment fanfics with the female protagonist Xin Ling. I have four fully-ordered love apartment fanfics with 1,000 chapters. The quality is actually pretty good up to 62 chapters. The future is promising. I hope the author can write Ai Wu Bie Qie [Salute] I have some suggestions, like the wedding brawl at the beginning of the plot, it is better to avoid funny links that do not affect the development of the subsequent plot as much as possible. It is best to rewrite it. Since the protagonist is already a friend of Wang Tiezhu, Tian Erniu, everything at the wedding should be arranged reasonably. Already arranged, if Lu Ziqiao and Chen Meijia are already good friends with Wang Tiezhu and Tian Erniu, they can be considered as friends to do the show effect. When my buddy got married and I was the best man, our best man and bridesmaid also worked together to give him two big dicks. It's nothing. It's okay for a stranger to do this and Lu Ziqiao's identity is pretending to be a paid priest. It's possible under normal logic to fall out and curse people on the spot. I read the comments on those chapters and many people think that it's not handled well. Lu Ziqiao and Chen Meijia broke up and quarreled. I think it's in line with the subsequent development of the two. I hope the author can sort out the subsequent plot, but it still depends on the author's own control. Come on~ [Working on the draft]

It is undeniable that the TV series "iPartment" accompanied me through a wonderful time, but it also left some regrets for many people. I just finished reading this novel, and I would like to say that this is probably the happy ending I expected in my mind when I read Love Apartment.

The novel is good, at least for me, it has surpassed more than 80% of the romance fan novels I have read. Other fans are either procrastinating, self-centered, or greasy, and all have obvious problems. Love Apartment is a TV series with multiple protagonists. If its fans erase this feature, there will really be nothing interesting to watch. In my opinion, the author's book is very well written, except for the early chapter dealing with the relationship between the protagonist and his wife, which caused some flaws. For example, the story of the two protagonists is interspersed in the plot, and the modifications to the original plot after the two protagonists are added. I originally wanted to give it four stars because of the early plot, but since it's been a long time since I found a romance fan novel that I can read smoothly, I gave it five stars to support the author.

It's good to watch, nothing is pretentious, it's quite comfortable to watch, and you won't get tired of it after watching it for a while. The time spent with Xin Ling was very comfortable, and the two began to support each other and grow up together. It was good, but the only bad thing was that Xin Ling's good traditions were not left behind.

It's very good-looking. I don't know why it has such a low score. It's much better than those that scored around 8.5 Points. Those novels feel like they just copied and pasted the script. The score for this novel should be around 8.5 Points at least.

Although it feels like it has some shortcomings and is a bit over-the-top at times, it is still quite good. After all, no one is a professional writer. There are very few novels that I can persist in reading. This is one of them. I would like to give you some support.

I haven't read to the end yet, when I read the book review and saw that Meijia and the protagonist were embracing each other, [smile] You, the author, are a rat tail juice, but I came in because the introduction said it was a single female protagonist.

It's pretty good-looking, but don't ruin the beauty. It's best for Meijia to be with Zi Qiao. The male protagonist doesn't need a second woman.

Come on, author, please update more authors. I don't know what others think, but I'm quite happy watching it anyway.

What you wrote earlier is quite good, but I read the title and comments at the back... What you wrote was to dismantle Qiao Jia and not give people a good ending... It was not handled well here, although I think Zi Qiao is suitable for Meijia... This must be the thought of most people in our love apartment, after all... The previous and fourth episodes have touched many people... Become an unsurpassed dream and classic in everyone's heart... I also hope that they are the best It can be done,... If we really want to break it up, there is nothing to break up Zeng Xiaoxian, Yifei and Ruolan. Of course, apart from Meijia, I think Yu Mo is also suitable for Zi Qiao. Although Zhang Wei and Yu Mo are similar [laughing and crying] [face covering], but... Qiao Jia's love, I don't want people to separate them. When I see this type of movie, I don't want to watch it and want to give a negative review, but... I see what you wrote before is good. After thinking about it, I give you a five-star praise.

It's okay, Xin Ling is the first time I've met the heroine. After all, there are too few novels about love apartments. I've only read one book with Yu Mo as the heroine, and that one was pretty good. But what the author wrote was a bit weird.

It's very interesting, there are extras but no [shy]

It tends to be a sweet story about daily love apartments.

The writing is quite good, but there is a bit too much cooking drama.

This is a rare love apartment novel. After moving to the love apartment, it becomes the same as most love apartment novels. However, the protagonist's family history is still worth reading.

Nice! Although I saw that they (Xian Fei) have reconciled again! I can't stand it anymore. But it does deserve 5 stars. (Personal opinion)

It looks good, cheers to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

Before reading, I decided to read the comments section. Sure enough, there were many things in the comments section that I thought were poisonous. I saw someone saying that the author broke up Meijia and Ziqiao, and I didn't want to read any more. This is no longer the love apartment in my mind. Although I haven't read a few chapters, I still give the author a five-star review. It is mainly to protect others who come after me [face covering]

Losing the desire to share is the beginning of the end

I am not a human machine, just two words, good-looking

Come on author Oli, there's nothing wrong with it

The book is pretty good, but this is not the traditional girlfriend I want.

I will be the first commenter. Come on, author. I can only silently click to remind you to update.

It's great that Xin Ling can find a good home.