Stealing Pen: Why Is the Mad Critic Gu Master Pretending to Be Good Again Today?

The absolutely formal system makes the rebirth of the protagonist Ruan Shuo an interesting adventure. Ashuo, the holy son of the Zhang family who moved south, is good at Gu, poison, and talismans. Butterfly Gu enters the center of the eyebrows to heal injuries and store the soul; blood nourishes the blood Gu to bear injuries and revive the soul. The yandere who achieved success in her previous life found the light in this life. The Zhang family has grown up and is still cold and powerful. It seems that they are worried about how to bring their insane clan members back to the right path... The main plot of this article has been upgraded, and the sub-plot cp: Cold and strong sense of responsibility, top combat power, ceiling attack × pretending to be a yandere, upgrade up (According to Doufu, the guy in the text is number 1. We look forward to Ashuo's counterattack)

Taihao watched it and [cryed] I really like the setting of the main character, it's crazy and heart-wrenching, the Sandman is so handsome, he's so charming when he dotes on the Gu insect... Oh my God, the baby is so cute too It's really not enough! I hope the author will not abandon the trap [currently working on the manuscript]

It's nice to watch. The male protagonist is so innocent. Think about the yandere and crazy comments in the later period. The contrast is so cute. Our Lord God, just follow it. It's not enough to watch. The male protagonist should also restore his original memory as soon as possible. Become stronger. It's so cool to think about two strong people. And from the beginning to the end, he is only for the little brother. Don't be a nanny (I think he will never do it based on the male protagonist's character).

It's nearly 70 chapters so far, which is quite interesting. The setting is two men, two Zhang family members, CP Zhang Qiling (attack), the male protagonist is actually a traitor because of the unfortunate past, so he pretends to be good and tries hard to control himself, after all, he still has to live his life. And according to the introduction, there will be a darkening later, hehe, I have been looking forward to it; and at the beginning of the plot, the Qixing Lu Palace will be unveiled, haha [shy] The character design is very suitable for the world of stolen pens, especially CP Zhang Qiling. After all, the old nine families, the Wang family, and the Zhang family are traitors. They repeatedly jump on the likes of An Ning and poke trouble at Wu Xie. If Brother Zhang's CP had a good personality, he would be suffocated to watch [Stare][Stare] The main content is two main lines, one is the life experience of the male protagonist, the mystery of the demise of the Miao descendants who moved south to the Zhang family, and the other is the beginning of the plot three years later in 2003. Finally, I haven't progressed to the second main plot yet. I don't know if it is Wu Xie's nanny story. It has been updated to the plot period. I will give a second review to help everyone get into the pit or avoid lightning. (The reader does not want to guide the writing. The author should write as he should. My dislike of Wu Xie is my own preference)

The setting is very novel and the content is rich. It is my favorite book so far. Every setting made by the author touches my heart. There are very few tomb robber fan stories that can make me insist on reading. This is one of them. The character of Shuoshuo Miaojiang Saint is so touching, especially the Zhang family who moved southward. , And the setting that Shuo Shuo provided the little brother with the red liquid that became the leader of the clan, is simply unique to Tomato. The suspense set up is very attractive and can maximize the reader's interest in reading. This book is simply so beautiful, it is the best tomb robber fanfic I have ever read. I am a very picky person. As long as there is a setting that I don't like, I will not be able to read it. As long as I am dissatisfied with or do not understand the plot, I will immediately abandon the book. If I encounter a novel that does not make sense, I will not even read it. Sometimes I encounter a novel that matches the setting, but the content is too boring and completely uninteresting. But this book is completely different. Not only does the setting suit my taste, but the content is not boring at all. It is even exciting and makes people forget to come back. Chinese people do not lie to Chinese people. This book is absolutely beautiful and worth the money. There is one shortcoming: the author is too slow. It would be great if he could write fifty chapters a day. Sisters who like to read tomb robbing fan fiction, hurry up and join the trap, you won't lose money by investing in it. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)(˵¯͒¯͒˵)(˵¯͒¯͒˵)(˵¯͒¯͒˵)(˵¯͒¯͒˵)

"Tomb Robbery" Miaojiang Shengzi, he is yandere and paranoid" opens up a unique world in the world of tomb robbing novels. The male protagonist Ruan Shuo slowly unlocks unknown mysteries through systematic time travel. He meets the younger brother through abduction and trafficking, and falls in love with Gu (Ruan Shuo's self-guided strategy). When the younger brother refuses, Hei is a yandere, but he discovers that he may be the original saint son. He slowly upgrades and develops his innocence and special liking for Xiaoguan brother (little brother). Judging from the plot structure, the author has a clever idea. It starts with a kidnapping encounter and a young brother, and uses a series of suspense to capture the reader's curiosity. As the story progresses, multiple narrative lines run parallel to each other. In the process of exploring the secrets of the ancient tomb, the life experience is unlocked. The world protagonist Wu Xie faces various deadly mechanisms and unknown creatures. As long as Wu Xie does not die, everything will be fine. Ruan Shuo started to seduce the younger brother in secret, and every link was intertwined, making people unable to stop. Every turn is unexpected and reasonable. The author's writing skills are amazing in creating scenes and atmosphere. Wu Xie➕The supporting character's perspective shows the gloomy tomb chamber, dangerous unknown creatures, diffuse fog, and flickering phosphorus fire. The mystery and terror of the ancient tomb are vividly rendered. The perspective of the male protagonist Ruan Shuo: He seduces the younger brother in his heart, seduces him, locks him up and only watches him. Reason: advances the story line to unlock the mystery, allows the younger brother to fulfill his responsibilities, remember his own memory, and keep Wu Xie's immortal world from falling. (The male protagonist Ruan Shuo is innocent in the early stage and yandere in the later stage) My writing style may be a bit inconsistent in my introduction, but I recommend it! It's just beautiful! Super pretty! Super recommended!

It's very interesting, and I've been following it for a long time. I stopped reading it for a while because I was in school. When I came back, I thought I wouldn't be able to stand it anymore and would give up on the novel. However, I still lived up to my love for Ruan Shuo and my support for Tofu, so I continued to read it. For a person who is only interested in writing for three minutes and often abandons writing, he has to really like and love it to stick to it. Sometimes I envy Ruan Shuo. At least he has someone who truly loves him and raises him well. I also hope that Ashuo will be happy and carefree every day in the future, doing what he likes and not being bound by the world. He in another world should also live well, and Tofu in the same world should also live well. Stay up less late and pay more attention to rest. Time can still wait. Although I will be late, I will definitely be there! [Blow a kiss][Send a heart] (Long overdue book review)

Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe (✿‿) Among all the stolen fanfics currently available, this one is one of the few that is normal and good-looking. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, but slowly grows up. Everyone knows this feeling. And the character of the protagonist is also very lovable. Hehe, I like it very much. It would be great if the author could update 30 chapters every day. The current rating is low, probably because fewer people are watching it. This book definitely deserves a bigger rating hehehe

I really recommend this book. It's the first time I've read Tomb Raiders and it's written about Gu Master or Shuang Nan. I really love the two heroes. From the introduction, it seems that it will develop into wallpaper ai (?) The male protagonist is Bai Qianhe + Mei Qiang. The protagonist's self-guided strategy. It seems that the younger brother likes the protagonist, but in fact, the protagonist likes the younger brother. Hehehe (being beaten) Okay, now is the time for serious plot analysis (pushing glasses) (not serious): Although I have not read the original work, but based on my many years of experience in reading Nantong Ah Bah Tomb Raider fan novels, the protagonist is definitely a 0 (being beaten) Ah Bah, and the protagonist will definitely be very powerful in the future (suspected to be nonsense). I feel that the development of the plot is not too fast in the first few chapters, but the development speed in the later chapters is actually okay. Tonic was embarrassed by the first few chapters and abandoned the article QAQ. In fact, it will get better after reading a few more chapters. As for the label of white cut and black in the introduction, it is not false propaganda, the protagonist is a super crazy person! (Drooling) Currently, the protagonist is still doing his own main mission. It is estimated that in a few dozen chapters, the protagonist will reach the ceiling of combat power hehe. The article says that the main plot of the original work will not start for another three years, which means that the protagonist can still become stronger. God, I am really looking forward to it (☆▽☆). It is said that the protagonist will become paranoid and yandere in the future (?), And now there are some signs of it hehe. Okay, next is the real serious analysis: I really haven't read the original work. I'm sorry. The analysis only represents my personal thoughts. There is no malice or malice. There may be some spoilers. I hope you understand. . . The protagonist's story begins with Tianbeng. The first few chapters are a bit awkward, but the rest of the story is well written. The system is an absolutely official system that a good person would never come back to in his eight lifetimes. It does not squeeze the host, there is no punishment for mission failure, and it does not force the host to do missions. Although it is not an omniscient system, it can instantly kill most of Tomato's systems that force the host/are not smart/just come out of the factory. The protagonist must avenge his revenge, and the crazy character design is very touching. The main characters currently appearing: (It's hard to tell without reading the original work, please point out if there are any mistakes) Chen Pi, Heixiazi, Zhang Qiling (amnesia version), Zhang Ruicheng (dead), Lin Zi (forgot the full name). The current plot trend: the protagonist comes through → the protagonist is kidnapped (get to know Zhang Qiling) → bought by Chen Pi (get to know the black blind man) → do system tasks to increase combat power → go to the tomb (get points) and do side tasks to improve combat power. The protagonist's previous life was quite miserable, and he can see through people's hearts. When I was a child, I was kidnapped by a trafficker and sold to a middle-aged couple. The middle-aged couple died again. A bunch of relatives came to divide the property and then disappeared. I had to work to earn tuition to go to college, and then I was hit by a car and died. . . It's so tragic that the protagonist's biological parents still don't recognize him. . . Okeke, it's over, it's question time! Q1: When does the last paragraph of the introduction appear? Q2: Author, can you update 200 chapters a day? Q3: What is the role of Linzi? Is it beneficial to the protagonist? Q4: Why did our protagonist wake up in that (forgot the name) tomb in the introduction? Q5: The system mentioned that the protagonist may destroy this small world, Zun Du Fake Du 0. O? Q6: I want to know the timeline. I'm a little dizzy while reading the QAQ. Okay, that's all my comments. Thank you to all the cuties who read it from beginning to end. [Blow kiss] Thank you for carefully reading my nearly 1k words of nonsense. Thank you for your patience. [Blow kiss] It really hurts my hand to type on the computer. Can you leave your likes and comments? Thank you! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

How did the author manage to make every aspect of the protagonist tickle my xp, it completely touched my heart❤️, the content is very interesting, and the storyline is very smooth, but it is missing a bit. I suggest that the author suddenly update Chapter 20 and it scares me to death [blowing kiss][shy]

It looks good, believe me. Our protagonist is a Miao man who split away from the Zhang family and lived in seclusion in the early years. He is a Gu Master and has a system. His system is very good and formal. He will not force tasks or electric shocks, and he is even cute. The protagonist can see different light groups in the tomb. Different light groups represent different levels of danger to ordinary people. Collect the light groups to get items, and you can also exchange items for points. It is super good-looking. Trust me, trust me. You will not lose money if you invest in the new book. The score of the new book is low and will increase in the future.

Don't miss it if you pass by. Regardless of the low ratings, the content is really big. Highly recommended [sending heartfelt thanks] Strongly recommended [like] It took more than two hours to read it. I highly recommend this novel ꈍ◡ꈍ First of all, I would like to explain that I am an 8-year-old bookworm, and I have reprinted it on many novel software. I am quite picky when it comes to reading [laughing]⌯'ㅅ'⌯ I have read most of the novels written by the female gender. Apart from dirty or harem novels, I have also read male videos. ᖰ˃ ⤙ ˂ᖳ I really like this novel so far and I hope everyone will do the same [Sending my heart] It's not easy to find a tomb robbing novel that focuses on voodoo. The content is also very exciting. I haven't seen the OOC plot. ദ്ദി˶˃ᵕ˂)✧ Finally, I didn't follow the protagonist rigidly to the tomb of his original place of origin (such as Qixing Lu Palace...), It was very creative [sending my heart] I really like Ah Shuo's appearance ദ്ദി˶ᵒᵕ˂)✧[Sending my heart], the white-haired control guy loves it to death ૮₍♡>𖥦< ₎ა And the pair of crystal-like eyes are mysterious, they are the violets blooming brightly after being stained with dew, they are the lavender swaying gently in the wind, they are the poison that is boiling in the wizard's pot, and they are serious and yet... Shining viciously like a snake, whether you are sad or desperate, purple eyes are the best [send heart] [send heart] [like] (a bit nonsense) ૮₍˃̵ᴗ˂̵₎ა I would like to give you a small suggestion. Can Ashuo's eye color not be hidden? ദ്ദി˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂)✧ (Of course it's just a suggestion) [Sending Hearts] Also, are there any alternatives for Ashuo's weapons? Can you give me some suggestions (flute? Or long pipe?) ⚈₃⚈꧞The last one is just a suggestion! ᖰ˃̵֊˂̵ᖳ Recommend everyone to take a look, there is currently no surprises, like it, like it, hope you don't give up, support and support ⌯ᐢᗜᐢ⌯ಣ

This is the first time I read a Tomb Raiders fanfic about Miao Jiang, it's really interesting! ! ! ! Update soon! ! When will we get to the plot of Qixing Lu Palace mentioned in the introduction? I am really looking forward to it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The protagonist has a clear distinction between good and evil, is decisive in killing, and loves the gods very much. For the sake of your own gods, you can allow yourself to be ambitious! Very possessive! Sometimes it's quite... Ahem! Handsome! All in all... It's pretty good~ ૮ต•̤ ༝ •̤ตა

From the perspective of characterization, the protagonist Ruan Shuo is undoubtedly a highlight of this book. As the holy son of the Miao Kingdom, he has the mysterious bloodline of the Zhang family who moved south, and he possesses magic powers such as poison, poison, and talismans. This setting adds a strong mysterious color to the story. And his yandere and paranoid character injects a different kind of charm into his character. When facing the dilemma and various forces in the tomb, Ruan Shuo is sometimes calm and wise, relying on superb skills to resolve the crisis; sometimes he shows desperate madness due to paranoia. This complex and multi-faceted character makes the character come to life on the page, allowing readers to be impressed by his abilities and curious about his personality changes while following his adventures. The other supporting characters in the book also have distinctive personalities. Whether they are members of the tomb-robbing team with their own special skills or villains with evil intentions, they all have their own stories and motivations, and together they build a rich and three-dimensional character group portrait.

A huge sense of humor, a yandere Miao boy × a forbearing and cold patriarch, a brand new plot, a brand new character, the key point is that the writing is very good, the latest is a very good tomb robbing fanfic, I love it [adoration][adoration][adoration]

I like Miao Jiangshou so much [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] The protagonist is still a white-haired and purple-pupiled Miao Jiang boy, I like him so much [admiration][admiration][admiration][admiration]

It's a good read, a very thoughtful one, the paranoid Miao boy, the brother who doesn't know his feelings, and the black blind man watching the show are just amazing. The whole story has a lot of self-conceptions, and I haven't read too many fanfics. The storyline is almost uncomfortable. In short, it is a good work. Come on, the author. Come on, I hope to add 3 chapters a day [shy]

Wow Kaka! The author's writing is also great! The setting of Gu Master is really delicious! White hair and purple eyes Hehehehe! ! ! Although it may be a bit weak in the early stage! It should be very strong in the later stage! ! ! Especially look at the introduction! ! The section of Qixing Lu Palace! Really looking forward to it! ! ! Can you tell me which chapter it is in? At least it gives me some spiritual sustenance! I really can't wait to see that part! ! !

I have read Chapter 67, and I will tell you about my experience. First of all, the characters are appropriate, and there is no big violation of the character image. The characters are distinct and individual, and the psychological activities of the protagonist are also very detailed. The main reason is that the protagonist has an IQ and will guard against others who are not stupid and sweet. The whole text is logical, and the character of the protagonist is also very strange. He is a Gu Master. The personal setting is also great. The plot is silent and great. However, I feel that the character of Black Sesame Rice Ball is not very obvious. Is it a yandere only in the later stages? I feel that it cannot be reflected now. All in all, it has great potential. It is being serialized now, so you can take a look first. The evaluation is for reference only, I wish you all a happy reading

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've read this kind of article. I'd like to cheer you up. Don't stop writing anymore. You have to have a beginning and an end.

It feels so well written in big letters! Although it is not finished, the result will definitely be unexpected! Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Ouch! Ouch! Ouch! I'm a bit lacking in language!

An important point suddenly occurred to me, is it HE? And Dada, please, I have read five or six fanfics written by pirates. Without exception, they have all been discontinued. Please, please don't discontinue updates. This setting is so interesting. I hope Dada will get better and better, and the books will get better and better. The writing is very good, five stars.

Super, super good-looking, the main character is fps, the plot is reversed, there are foreshadowings, the main character has a specific story, even the NPCs have their own ideas and dare to do them

I really like it. I really like the crazy beauties who raise gu. I am still a white-haired person. This book is just writing to my heart. Www. I like it so much.

It looks good. I like the protagonist's character very much. I'm attracted to it. It's up to chapter 56 now. I'm looking forward to the following plots. The author would like to give you a lot of encouragement and update. Don't work too hard but don't rest all the time. Write as much as you can. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I'm not good at speaking Chinese, but it looks good anyway, and Ruan Bao is really pure. I look forward to becoming a paranoid and crazy critic in the future [sending my heart]

This book is the only one I found on Little Tomato that is a perfect combination of stolen writing and Gu Master. The author's writing style is superb! Her protagonists are beautiful and powerful. Ruan Shuo, the high priest, and the little brother are all good [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [adoration] [adoration] [flying kisses] [adoration] [flying kisses] [adoration] [flying kisses] [adoration] [adoration] [flying kisses] [adoration] [flying kisses] [adoration] [flying kisses] [adoration] [flying kisses] [adoration] [air kisses] [adoration] [air kisses] [adoration]

The writing is pretty good, and Ruan Shuo's character design is super evocative ε(*･ω･)_/ﾟ:･☆, and it was very good-looking until the appearance of innocence. I don't like people who are too idealistic, especially people who are naive in known dangerous situations, so I can't stand it anymore (⋟⋞). It's hard to understand why someone who has shown the tendency to harm others should be rescued. I think if you have the ability, you can do whatever you want, but if you don't have the ability, it's not you who is being dragged down by rescuing others, but your teammates <(._.)>, Who harms others and yourself. Although I don't like the innocent character design, others like it very much. If you don't mind, feel free to read it. The author's writing is very good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's quite good-looking, with fluent writing, subtle plot, rich characters, and plenty of original content and details. There are many descriptions of the protagonist's appearance. He is a beautiful young man, so please don't disturb me if you don't mind. The protagonist has a cold personality and lacks love, so the emotional line may seem abrupt to some people, but in fact, people with relevant experience should be able to understand it. It is not recommended for people who have immature views, people who have super positive views, and people who have always lived a happy life. Note for demining: The protagonist is really yandere! Really yandere! Really yandere! Many people always praised the protagonist as a little cake when they knew he was a yandere in the early stage. The atmosphere in the commentary was particularly good, and then there was a lot of scolding when it turned dark in Chapter 115. There is no analysis of the psychological journey. The main character wants to be transformed into a little cake. It feels so good to be blackened. She really starts to go crazy and breaks her guard. These people click in just to see the thorny little wife [laughs]. The character of the protagonist has been laid out very clearly in the early stage, that is, extreme, indifferent, lonely, lack of love, and paranoia. Those who couldn't accept it and those who had only seen the cute little wife dressed in a yandere skin quickly left. I was so excited when I saw the blackening. As soon as I entered the commentary, all the gentlemen appeared out of nowhere [smile] Chapter 115 and the subsequent paragraphs were cautiously read, which was very off-putting. I see many people who don't understand the protagonist's love brain, because the protagonist has always been in a lonely, alert and bruised state. When encountering a beam of perfect light, he will definitely hold on to it. The protagonist can only be regarded as a love brain when facing Zhang Qiling in a normal state. When stimulated, it is called "a drowning person grabbing the straw on the shore at all costs." Why didn't the protagonist give up on Zhang Qiling? Because "I could have endured the darkness if I had never seen the light." Zhang is the protagonist's emotional sustenance object. Without Zhang, the protagonist would still be sharp, cold, ruthless, and ruthless, even crazy when he should be. The only situation in which the protagonist may be different is that he is picked up by the high priest at the beginning. At that time, the high priest will be the object of the protagonist's paranoia. Another thing: A group of people broke the guard and said that the protagonist was a madman. It was so funny. Did you know it after more than a hundred chapters? What did you do early?