[No system + time travel + abuse + daily life]
Mu Yunfan is a junior high school student living in a bustling city. During the breakup of his family, he gradually lost himself. However, he encountered a "strange light", gained the ability to travel through time and space, and began a wonderful "journey." Under the guidance of the "strange light", he "traveled" to the past and wanted to save this family on the verge of collapse. However, the situation became more complicated and changeable. Can he save his family? Oh, tomato convulsions.
Reader comments
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Many of the dream descriptions I write are things similar to utopias in my own mind. They may be a little delayed, but they can reflect the psychology of the characters.
The inspiration for this novel came from when I was making a short film, and I suddenly had a story frame in my heart. So I grabbed this inspiration, added what I saw and felt, and carefully crafted this frame into such a novel.
Tomatoes are not given, and the verification period is not even 100. I know that the 23 days of hard work have been in vain. I feel even more blocked. Next, I will submit another short story. If there is no improvement, I will switch platforms or stop being a writer.
The author's writing style is fresh and natural, eloquent and smooth, and it is fascinating to read. However, I hope that the male protagonist Mu Yunfan will not be so depressed [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
Very good work, five-star praise🌹🌹
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The plots in the first few chapters feel a bit depressing, but the reasons for divorce cannot be attributed to the "tools" you call them. Those are also living people, with their own thoughts, emotions, and joys. Divorce is just an excuse for not being in love, it is the only choice when one thinks that one has no other choice, and it is a cowardly act that leaves one's responsibilities behind.
I would like to make a suggestion. The first chapter of the time-travel article should clearly explain the time-travel matter. Instead of calling it "The Adventures of So-and-so", it should be called "Travel 60 Years, I Stop My Parents from Getting Married!" "This kind of title may be more attractive to readers. Then when you write, you can mix in some memories and tell the reader that the relationship between my parents is not good, so I want to go back and prevent them from getting married. [Thinking] Hope this helps you
The young protagonist of the novel accidentally traveled to the past to save his family, and a series of stories followed. The author's creative inspiration is relatively new, the psychological description of the characters is relatively detailed, and the family story is vivid and vivid. I look forward to more exciting follow-up!
The writing is like fire in the dark night, with thrilling beauty dormant between the words; the plot is like an ancient bronze mirror, which not only reflects the subtle folds of human nature, but also reflects the magnificent spectrum of the times. The foreshadowing of the grass snake's gray line eventually turned into a prairie fire, and after reading the book, the embers are still burning deep in the soul.
It's a very touching and emotional story, and you feel like you're involved in it.
The author's description of the plot is very detailed, and the story development is also very attractive. It can be written, written and written!
I support the author greatly. The plot is rich in content, the writing is exquisite, and the characters are vividly drawn. I hope to continue reading another book! [Top post]
It's a very interesting novel, the main character is heart-wrenching and lovable. Not bad
It's really good. Come and read it. The author's writing skills are so good that you can try to open a new book.
The writing is very good, very exciting, I like it very much, but it is too short and not enough to read [smile][smile]
It's very beautiful, the plot is compact, and the story is touching. The details are described in detail.
The characters are three-dimensional and a perfect book!
The writing is delicate and the emotions are sincere, but the beginning is a bit depressing.
Very contagious
Delicate writing, novel plot, high-quality book [Like][Like]
A very true story. The author's writing style is very delicate and the emotions are well captured. It's beautiful. [Like]
This article has a clear topic, a quick start, and smooth logic. The examples are appropriately chosen, the points are vividly explained, and the language is easy to understand, making it easy to read and contagious.
It's pretty good, and the story is quite engaging.
This is a very touching story, very interesting! Highly recommended!
It's a very good book. The little protagonist grows up step by step. The plot has ups and downs. The story is very compact. I will update it more every day. If it is not enough, I will keep up with it every day.
I am "Tomato Sister", and my mobile phone is out of battery. The novel is good, I will keep up with it! Like it if you see it~
The story is fantastic, a little emotionally depressing, and one can't help but feel a little distressed.
Should it be divided into segments? [Crying] I feel a little tired of my eyes, but the plot is okay.
My recent mental state has not been very good, which may have led to a strong depressive atmosphere throughout the entire article. Many of the dream descriptions I write are things similar to utopias in my own mind. They may be a little delayed, but they can reflect the psychology of the characters. The inspiration for this novel came from when I was making a short film, and I suddenly had a story frame in my heart. So I grabbed this inspiration, added what I saw and felt, and carefully crafted this frame into such a novel. Tomatoes are not given, and the verification period is not even 100. I know that the 23 days of hard work have been in vain. I feel even more blocked. Next, I will submit another short story. If there is no improvement, I will switch platforms or stop being a writer.
The author's writing style is fresh and natural, eloquent and smooth, and it is fascinating to read. However, I hope that the male protagonist Mu Yunfan will not be so depressed [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Very good work, five-star praise🌹🌹
The author's writing style is exquisite, the content is rich, and the plot has ups and downs [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] The characters are vividly depicted [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] There are not many words, and it has been completed. I recommend [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][flying kiss][flying Kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]
The plots in the first few chapters feel a bit depressing, but the reasons for divorce cannot be attributed to the "tools" you call them. Those are also living people, with their own thoughts, emotions, and joys. Divorce is just an excuse for not being in love, it is the only choice when one thinks that one has no other choice, and it is a cowardly act that leaves one's responsibilities behind. I would like to make a suggestion. The first chapter of the time-travel article should clearly explain the time-travel matter. Instead of calling it "The Adventures of So-and-so", it should be called "Travel 60 Years, I Stop My Parents from Getting Married!" "This kind of title may be more attractive to readers. Then when you write, you can mix in some memories and tell the reader that the relationship between my parents is not good, so I want to go back and prevent them from getting married. [Thinking] Hope this helps you
The young protagonist of the novel accidentally traveled to the past to save his family, and a series of stories followed. The author's creative inspiration is relatively new, the psychological description of the characters is relatively detailed, and the family story is vivid and vivid. I look forward to more exciting follow-up!
The writing is like fire in the dark night, with thrilling beauty dormant between the words; the plot is like an ancient bronze mirror, which not only reflects the subtle folds of human nature, but also reflects the magnificent spectrum of the times. The foreshadowing of the grass snake's gray line eventually turned into a prairie fire, and after reading the book, the embers are still burning deep in the soul.
It's a very touching and emotional story, and you feel like you're involved in it.
The author's description of the plot is very detailed, and the story development is also very attractive. It can be written, written and written!
I support the author greatly. The plot is rich in content, the writing is exquisite, and the characters are vividly drawn. I hope to continue reading another book! [Top post]
It's a very interesting novel, the main character is heart-wrenching and lovable. Not bad It's really good. Come and read it. The author's writing skills are so good that you can try to open a new book.
The writing is very good, very exciting, I like it very much, but it is too short and not enough to read [smile][smile]
It's very beautiful, the plot is compact, and the story is touching. The details are described in detail. The characters are three-dimensional and a perfect book!
The writing is delicate and the emotions are sincere, but the beginning is a bit depressing. Very contagious
Delicate writing, novel plot, high-quality book [Like][Like]
A very true story. The author's writing style is very delicate and the emotions are well captured. It's beautiful. [Like]
This article has a clear topic, a quick start, and smooth logic. The examples are appropriately chosen, the points are vividly explained, and the language is easy to understand, making it easy to read and contagious.
It's pretty good, and the story is quite engaging.
This is a very touching story, very interesting! Highly recommended!
It's a very good book. The little protagonist grows up step by step. The plot has ups and downs. The story is very compact. I will update it more every day. If it is not enough, I will keep up with it every day. I am "Tomato Sister", and my mobile phone is out of battery. The novel is good, I will keep up with it! Like it if you see it~
The story is fantastic, a little emotionally depressing, and one can't help but feel a little distressed.
Should it be divided into segments? [Crying] I feel a little tired of my eyes, but the plot is okay.