Crossing the Daliang: Why Was I Eliminated as Soon as I Started?

The author has done some research on the structure of this novel, and through the exile scenes in the first few chapters, the dramatic tension is directly heightened. Relaxed and engaging. The main reason is also due to the writing style, which can well integrate these things and transform them into one's own, like dancing ballet on a tightrope. If something goes wrong, the entire story will be greatly compromised. It is very sophisticated, and its portrayal of people is also profound. It is a masterpiece worth studying! ! I hope the author can keep up the good work.

The plot of the crown prince's dethronement caused by the witchcraft disaster is fierce, and the various forces appear in full force. The overt and secret struggles and turmoil in the court are vividly depicted. The setting of Army Soul Transmutation into Xiao Wuyang is novel and unique, injecting new vitality into the story. The protagonist Xiao Wuyang (Army) has a three-dimensional and rich image. As the prince, he was at the forefront of the palace struggle, and his helplessness and reluctance were touching. After his soul passed through, he brought the courage and wisdom of a modern soldier, creating a different kind of spark in the ancient world. There are also some areas for improvement in this work. In terms of plot rhythm, the rhythm of the palace struggle in the first half is grasped just right, but the connection between the modern war part and the ancient time travel is a little hasty, giving people a sense of rupture and affecting the smoothness of reading. In addition, the image creation of some supporting characters is relatively thin and seems a bit stiff when promoting the development of the plot.

Big cheers for the author

It's a good read. The last time I read this novel about an ancient square was "Crane Huating".

The sense of immersion is very strong and the description is very detailed. Thank you to the author!

Great imagination and high energy throughout! The rhythm is compact and not procrastinating, with twists and turns one after another, making it impossible to guess the subsequent development. The author's imagination is amazing, and the world he constructs is both novel and reasonable. It's so hearty to read that you can't stop at all!

The author's writing style is excellent. The thrills on the road to exile and the interaction between the male and female protagonists are very touching. The rhythm is relaxed and moderate. Sometimes it makes people sweat, and sometimes they are poked by the little tenderness between husband and wife. It is a completely immersive drama!

The writing is skillful, the concept is novel, the structure is rigorous, the plot is ups and downs, and fascinating. It is a very beautiful novel. It must be recommended with 5 stars!

Nice! Nice! Nice! Say important things three times. The writing is great, the details are perfectly described, and the characters are well created! Much faster and faster! Great! Recommend! [Like][Like][Like]

The writing is smooth and the plot is compact. The protagonist defies fate and changes his destiny all the way, with blood and warmth coexisting. It has both the grandeur of the world and the delicate emotions of the characters. Following the update so far, I look forward to the author's subsequent exciting development [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

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I don't know what happened. When I was reading Chapter 39, I met a blind bear. It was clearly Captain Li fighting the bear, but why did he become Jia San? Did the author copy it without changing the name? [Laughing]

The author is very good, the writing is solid, the plot is smooth, it is a very good novel, the setting is novel, the plot is compact, the plot is ups and downs, it is highly praised and recommended, the author keeps up the good work, it is good to read [Like]

Definitely the best writing in Tomato. I like this style very much. It has the feeling of flowing water. I hope the author will keep updating it! The whole story, both plot and character creation, is very smooth and natural, and the recycling of the foreshadowing at the end is really great.

Xiao Wuyang, a special soldier, traveled to Daliang and thought he was the winner in life. Unexpectedly, it was the beginning of the collapse of heaven. Seeing him change his destiny against the will of heaven, he made great progress all the way. The story is wonderful, the content is realistic and compact, and it is a novel worth recommending.

In his previous life, the spirit of a special soldier transformed into a prince, and he was exiled as soon as he opened his eyes. Let's watch him and his seven beauties emerge from the cocoon and become a butterfly in the face of adversity, return domineeringly, and reshape the world! 🌟

Good book, good book, worth reading! Really good

One of the best stories I have read in recent years and highly recommended to everyone who loves novels. The plot is not procrastinating, each link is very interesting, nice [like][like][like]

Both the title and the subject matter are very good, worth reading, a masterpiece [laughs]

I spent more than an hour reading it carefully. The author portrayed the protagonist's growth very delicately. The plot has ups and downs and is very exciting.

The author's writing is so good! ! ! The protagonist is also very smart and brave! ! ! The story is very well described! ! !

The writing is beautiful, the skills are solid, the characterization is delicate and vivid, great work, thumbs up!

It is no exaggeration to say that this is an extremely beautiful book. The story has reasonable twists and turns, the characters are full-bodied, and the scenery is lifelike. Following the readers, I seem to have traveled back to that era. The author's writing skills are profound without being ostentatious, and he took me step by step into Xiao Wuhuang's world. I highly recommend this book to my Tomato reading friends, it is definitely worth reading.

This is the first time I read a book of this type. The author handles the details very well. The plot is exciting and link by link. It makes people want to read on. It has been a long time since I have seen such a wonderful book. I give the author a big thumbs up 👍

It's good-looking. It tells the story of a charming dynasty. It's very interesting. The historical writing is outstanding. Whether it's the plot setting or the theme, it shows a high level of creation. The male channel's book is very good. The plot has ups and downs, the setting is novel, and the mind is online. It's a very good article, awesome.

The third wife, Zhuge Yue, and her father, Zhuge Wenda, were Confucian leaders and the president of Donglin Academy in Liangxi City. Work in style

It's really good to watch, I hope I'll never finish it.

This is a novel worth reading.

In the court, he is a humble prince, in the wilderness, he is a star in the world, loved and beautiful.

The writing is good and detailed. Good luck to the author.