Finished*********

The story about sister-brother love is so good that I wanted to save it for a few days. I finished reading it in one go. Author, you have to work hard to update. From now on, I will send you every love message [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

I have read a fifth of it, and the writing, logic, rhythm, etc. Are pretty good. I think it is the best among the kind of novels I have read. But there are still two doubts. When I read it, I always think of Li Er's "Cherrys on the Pomegranate Tree" and "Brother Yingwu", because the male protagonist in this book is just like the characters in Li Er's books - he is very good at talking, and all he speaks are scenes and wisecracks. Everyone in Li Er's books is very good at speaking slang, slang and official dialect. I think some words have transcended the characters. Personal cognition is more like the author imposing his own cognition on the character and wanting the character to say such things, so the male protagonist of this article is also in the same situation. The male protagonist keeps making witty remarks when talking to others, and occasionally jumps out of the conversation to talk directly to the fairy family. However, this is an online article, and it is normal to use memes in order to attract readers when writing, so there are quite a lot of memes in the male protagonist's words. This leads to the second question. The use of memes in online articles is not a problem, but the question is how to use memes. Are you using memes when narrating from a God's perspective or are you using memes directly in the dialogues of characters. The two are different. Most of the one-fifths I watched are characters using memes in their dialogues, but the characters' dialogues play a major role in advancing the plot, so frequent use of memes actually hinders plot development and character creation to a certain extent. I think the only way to solve these two doubts is to explain why the characters say these things by describing the characters' lives and personalities in the narrative. Of course, this is an online article, so you don't need to ask so much. It's just my personal subjective feeling. Of course, the scoring is also based on my personal subjective standards. If I see an explanation later on why the male protagonist said these words, I will change the rating.

Very good, why is the rating so low?

The author who pushed hard knowledge secretly followed me for 5 months in order to describe Su Mian's image.

This book is the most suitable to my taste. It was written with the bottom line of review. But can the author update it quickly [crying]

It's very interesting, and I really like the plot. I've never seen a subject like this before. If the author continues to write, it will definitely become popular. It's already been recommended. It's very interesting. I love reading it. More to come! ! !

Quite sweet, not bad

Very pretty, very sweet

What a sweet book, so beautiful~

So pretty, so pretty

Non-human machine, super beautiful [Adoration]

It's really good. [Learned]

It's quite interesting, but because this book is about strong women and weak men, you might not get used to it at first, but you'll get used to it after a few more chapters.

I like this book. It was written from the angle I like. Please read more.

If you like watching siblings love each other, you can check it out. It's sweet. No, I'll take insulin.

My blood pressure is high after watching this. It's so sweet. I can really [eat melon] [Like] Score it, it looks really good [grieved]

Five stars five stars five stars

Come on, work hard to update [smile][smile][smile][smile]

I am reading and watching the author update [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Wonderful, so wonderful

Hao Chi loves to eat not stone

A very nice book

Really very beautiful

Very good-looking, women love men Author, you are so cruel, you don't even publish any extras

I'm here to fulfill my promise, as I said again, remember to update [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

Five stars are here, don't lie to others.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but it's just not enough.

It looks good, but I feel like the pace could be faster. I really want to beat it.

The speed of the car is very fast, and the male protagonist is so charming that he looks like me. If I could stab him, he would have a great life.

It's a good sister-brother relationship. I was fed by reading a novel [crying]