You Ninja, Look Down on Me as a Saiyan?

(Upper middle) Blue + • Excellent (Level 10) / 8.0 Points +, mark... Sense of substitution B, plug-in X, setting A, writing A, rhythm B, imagination B, character X, main line B, logic A↑S (expected). Extra points: none Personal feelings: The integration of Dragon Ball and Naruto is very good, and it can be regarded as a high-quality book. If the quality is maintained in the future, the score will be improved in the future. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Advanced (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle-lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ① Four-star green • Advanced (level 2) / 7.0 Points +; ② Four-star green - • Advanced (level 0) / 7.0 Points; ③ Four-star white + • Intermediate (-1 level) / 6. 5 Points; ④ Three-star white • Intermediate (-2 levels) / 6.0 Points; ⑤ Three-star gray + • Low-level (-3 levels) / 5.5 Points; ⑥ Three-star gray • Low-level (-4 levels) / 5.0 Points; ⑦ Three-star gray - • Qualified (-5 levels) / 4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words It feels like your writing is biased. You are treating Naruto as a traveler in the Dragon Ball world. What readers want to see is that ninjas used their ninjutsu to harass Vegeta, and in the end Vegeta was careless and committed suicide. Now you are doing the opposite, people in the ninja world commit suicide.

The subject matter is very good, but it would be better if there was less nonsense.

I have watched all the series of Dragon Ball. Fortunately, the viewing time is not too long. I should get rewards through the sky screen. From time to time, people from the Naruto world are transported to the world of Dragon Ball to practice. So far, I have seen a good arrangement. Jiu Xiaoxiao has a better life, Naruto's strength has improved, and the soul of Liu Dao's son has also been locked up in the Dragon Ball world and died laughing. Liu Dao always pays attention to the ninja world, wondering if his son will become abnormal if he is gone. After all, the entire ninja world can see the sky, so Otsutsuki should be able to see it, and so should the moon. Five stars first, let's talk later [blowing kiss] Naruto completely changed and turned into a young boy who could even say something sexy but had no skills. I wanted to write him in a silly style, in the same style as Kakarot. Unfortunately, I don't have that kind of feeling whether it's inner activities or normal life, it just feels like it's constantly changing.

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I feel like the subject matter is pretty good

Everyone must take a look at it more, Shi Yituo

It's very novel, and the writing is pretty good, but Dragon Ball's combat power collapsed very badly in the later stages, especially the plot of Dragon Ball Super. My suggestion is to abandon the plot of Dragon Ball Super and link GT. It would be better to use GT as the ending of Dragon Ball World. Super's combat power is too vague. Kame Sennin can participate in the Tournament of Power and Frieza trains. Three months surpassed Son Goku and Vegeta who had been training at Angel for a year. Gohan was able to transform into a Super 2 before getting married. Just because he got married, it was difficult to transform into a Super Saiyan. To put it bluntly, Dragon Ball Super and Dragon Ball Buu arcs are completely incompatible. You have to know that the end of the Buu arc is that Xiao Fang is already three years old. , And Sun Wukong said that he hopes Evil Buu can be a good person in the next life. King Yama agreed. Buu reincarnated and became Sun Wukong's apprentice. The last message was that Sun Wukong was lonely because he had no opponent. He wanted to train the reincarnated Buu to fight with it, but there are many masters in Dragon Ball Super, including Jiren. They can easily kill Buu, and there are also great priests and so on. The plot of Dragon Ball Super starts in a time period when Xiaofang was not born yet. With so many masters, how could he expect the reincarnation of a demon Puu? Therefore, there is no connection between the original plots of Dragon Ball Super and Dragon Ball. Instead, GT has a better connection.

It's my favorite theme. I like the enhanced version of Jin Yong's martial arts skills to be brought to Naruto, or Pokémon to be brought to the ninja world, or the sky screen live broadcast of Dragon Ball Battle plot and other themes in Naruto and other worlds. . It's a pity that there are very few, or it just becomes eunuch after writing dozens of chapters.

It looks good. The more you look at the back, the better it looks. Naruto's growth trajectory is obvious. Although there are some private goods, the description of the war atmosphere is quite good. It just needs to be fast-paced, fighting, and exciting!

It's well written, but you'd better suppress Dragon Ball's combat power. I really doubt it. Maybe the Vegetable Man will blow up the ninja world if he goes there.

The script is good. I'll give it a five-star rating first. If it doesn't look good, I'll change it later.

It's okay. Are people in the Naruto world so ignorant?

Now that I see it, I think it is still very interesting. Please keep it up.

It can be recommended well.

They all give me full marks. It's rare to see such a beautiful book [laughs]

Hahahaha, so beautiful. It's so mindless and beautiful. I like to watch this kind of mindless movie. Life is already tiring, so why bother reading novels? Come on. .

When will we see the destruction of Planet Vegeta? Then Frieza said that the purpose of this planet's existence is to show me a grand fireworks show.

It's pretty good. Although you still suppressed Longzhu's combat effectiveness, the performance of Lao Bei's explosion was not written down.

Okay, okay, except for the period where Naruto's strength suddenly improved, it was a bit awkward, but everything else is fine.

The plot is good and the combat power is not compromised. I hope it will continue to be good.

So far so good, but the bond between Sasuke and Konoha is gone. Naruto really cares about Sasuke [eating melon]

Not enough, really not enough

It's so beautifully written.

Come on, at least it won't end badly.

Very novel and different

Come on, your writing is good.

Write carefully, write diligently Naruto vs Vegeta was completely shattered after that.

The subject matter is good and interesting.

Not bad, very beautiful

It's pretty good, come on