Why Are All the Magical Girls Looking Like This Lately?

After reading it, the selection of the subject matter is quite innovative, the current shaping of the characters is also good, and the content description is also well combined with the subject matter. I personally think this book is a relatively good product among the red persimmons. The narrative and content of the story are quite tense. The only two problems are that the current data is not very good (maybe because the title is not eye-catching enough? I don't think there are any other big problems), and I am worried that the author will not be able to persevere. The other is that the selection of this kind of subject is often accompanied by a large number of scenes that are easy to be criticized. Once the glass-hearted Shen He is targeted, it is easy to be locked in a small dark room (that kind of thing is a tonic). If it can be written to the later stage and Shen He is let go, I think this book should be around 9.3 However, another problem is that the current plot contains a section about using magical girls as a seedbed, in which a supporting character who seems to have a lot of roles is combined to breed an offspring (although this is the first thing that comes to my mind between magical girls and tentacle monsters). I think there is no problem with this section. It is a good plot foreshadowing and the growth of the protagonist with strong tension. However, the problem is that most people may not be able to accept this content in the environment of Red Persimmon. Most people still like to watch Kill Kill Kill or Post Post Post. This may also be a possibility of poor data. Although the connection is indeed good and the depth is also very connotative, I still have a small suggestion to try to avoid this area and reduce some plots related to supporting characters that may be unacceptable. Maybe the data will be better. Of course, this is just a small suggestion from readers. The author still tries to maintain the smoothness of writing inspiration and maintain the plot. Ensuring quality is fundamental. All in all, if I can accept a certain degree of dark and dark plot, the quality of this book is quite hard-core, and the plot tension is very good. I hope the author can continue writing, and I hope Shen He can be merciful (I couldn't think of anything sexy when I read the plot, so I wrote a book review. The above opinions are all my subjective opinions. If you are interested in reading the book review, I suggest you try it yourself)

Transformed into a novel, the brother becomes the second sister who died due to monsters. The resentment towards the monsters and the obsession to protect the third sister become the reason for the protagonist to live. 🤓👍 There are some minor flaws in the early stage, but overall it's pretty good. The battle descriptions are very visual, and the content descriptions are also very large-scale. 🤓👍 All in all, book lovers who like transformation novels, twisted flesh and blood, and exciting combat can give it a try🤓👍

Personally I like this work. --If it were used as a game script, it would be a high-scoring one. This work follows the original route, and it has the feeling of eleven orthodox magical girls transforming into a masterpiece. The description of interpersonal relationships is handled without the usual sense of awkwardness. I personally think that many low-scoring magical girl works ignore the construction of character relationships other than the protagonist. I think this article handles this quite well. Many of the narrative techniques of the story are quite Japanese, as if it were a beautiful girl game. --Style is destined to be rare. Just like the audience for games of the same type in the same industry, the audience for games with the same theme actually has a more otaku-like feel. The protagonist of an avenger who suffers from deep hatred, explodes his seeds to increase his combat power. The protagonist has short-lived attributes and is light on curiosity. These are all catered to the tastes of the Japanese acg audience. --Looking ahead Personally I think it is a work full of potential. If you can stick to the basics and ferment for enough time, you will definitely get good results. If it was purely for popularity, it would be easy to fall into a whirlpool of troubles.

The following is my opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. It only represents my personal opinion. If you have any differences, please do not criticize me in other comments. Thank you. Comprehensive; relatively good among the same themes Disadvantages/need to be corrected; there is a tendency of collapse of combat power, poor segmentation in the early stage, and no order in the chapter names, which will cause a loss of personnel in the early stage. However, there will be improvements later, and everything that should be included is already there. However, it is recommended to make one chapter of 2000 words and two chapters instead of one 4000-word chapter. This is better and helps to better understand the content of this chapter, because not all readers read intensively, and some skip reading. There is also the writing style, which gives me the feeling of reading a comic. I can only say that if it were a comic, the traffic would increase by at least 9 times, but this is a novel, so it becomes a deduction point. In terms of character creation, the protagonist's early tsundere is a small highlight, but the degree keeps changing, and the extent of the change is not in line with the plot's impact on the characters. On the bright side; the setting of the companion creature is very good. Although the tendency of combat power collapse mainly comes from him, it does not hinder it from being a good setting. Also, the picture is relatively strong, and the writing style is barely beautiful. If those dark things are removed, there is also the characterization. Although some parts are unreasonable, it is generally good, and it can outline a life with less pen and ink. This ability of Shengsheng is quite rare in free novels, and the author's control over the article is also low. The plot is less muddled, and the plot progresses at a good pace, just a little slow. Also, I took a look at the ellipses that many people are complaining about, but those ellipses are three to one character, and there is no water word count, which is rare. There is also this setting of using souls to replenish souls, which is great. It gives readers enough space to think about the future, and it does not make the ending of resurrecting the sister later become tacky. Additional personal suggestions (for reference only, if you have an idea in advance, it is better to use your own idea, after all, no one knows his own book better than the author); it is better to have a bed end at the end of the book. Happy end and normal end are not very suitable for the previous foreshadowing, and it is better to have a just right abrupt end. If you can't control it, don't write it, it is easy to write like a eunuch. In addition, the crimson people can die a few more times, preferably those with high influence. The third sister can also die. The setting of the diamond can be an important event in the later stage, so don't bring it up in the mid-term. The above is my evaluation. Overall, it's pretty good. In the future, as long as there are not many tenacious reports, it should be fine. However, I hope you should pay attention to it. The previous content is really easy to persuade some people to quit. I don't know what to do in this situation. I have never seen a few cases of successful counterattacks. Anyway, come on, even if you just change the order of the first and second parts, it will be much better than now. To be honest

See the part where the tentacles are tied together To be honest, the writing skills are really strong, and the light sad atmosphere and the rhythm of the battle are well grasped. If I hadn't read a certain hardcore magical girl article, I would have given it full stars.

Nnd, when I opened the rating, I started going around in circles. In order to write a book review, I deleted it from Tomato and re-downloaded it. All in all, 📕It's very good-looking. The main character pretends to be aloof and a bit arrogant, but he's also very gentle towards people. He's like an angel. Moreover, the setting of eating monsters to become stronger is also very exciting. After defeating a big boss, you can harvest a wave of new skills or magic circuits, which makes me look forward to the follow-up. The villain boss is too confusing, which makes the process more difficult, but it is very enjoyable to watch, and it feels like you have finally passed the level. Finally, Xiao Hei is so nice o(^▽^)o

A very unique magical girl story [laughs], a magical girl full of hatred, all kinds of blood, darkness and twists intertwined. The fighting scenes, emotions, and logic are all online, but I just don't know how long I can live [face covering]

It's good to watch, especially if you want to see the protagonist who has been sexually transformed take a completely different path from the right path, stumbling on the road, no one understands, and being tortured from time to time [laughs]. Oh, it's also delicious to see the opinions and changes of other people and ordinary people towards the protagonist. I don't know if it counts as my personal Also, it would be great if it was a male protagonist from another world at the beginning. It could be written that the protagonist "kills" or thinks that because he "killed" his brother's soul, he can't protect his sister, and he takes over her body to continue his life. He also has to go unnoticed by the youngest sister. He always feels that he is incompatible with the world, and he always feels guilty, inferior, and atones for his sins [laughs]

Transformation processing: The reasons and methods of transformation can be said to be eye-catching at present. Combat part: The details of the senses are grasped. Why senses are needed in combat? You will know just by reading the article. Dealing with the enemy: It is a normal way of dealing with a person who has been hurt by hostility and has a close relative. Acquisition of power skills: There is no system, and the protagonist has just become a magical girl, so the acquisition method is not a one-shot process but an absolutely reasonable way. (Big skill) Stage BOSS: The design is relatively subtle and has a good look and feel. The author does indeed show us the alien world he saw. In the early stage, due to the shortcomings in the protagonist's power acquisition, it felt like a delicacy on the tip of the tongue. After making up for it later, the meal-making process should be greatly reduced [Thinking] (I don't know if this is considered a spoiler)

Fairless's "Heretic Magical Girl" breaks away from the sweetness and healing of traditional magical girl themes, and is eye-catching with its dark and passionate style. The story begins in a chaotic world where demons invade and goblins run rampant. The protagonist Liu awakens with overwhelming hatred for monsters instead of the common love and justice. This anti-routine setting instantly catches the readers' attention. The author's depiction of the battle scenes is outstanding. Liu wields the "cannibalizing gun" and activates the "Gluttony" magic to fight monsters. The picture is full of visuals and the aesthetics of violence are full, making readers feel as if they are in a fierce battlefield and full of tension. In terms of character creation, Liu's image is three-dimensional and vivid. She is cold and crazy when fighting, but privately she cares deeply about her sister. The bond of family ties injects warmth into this story full of darkness and killing. The daily interactions between classmates also show her side of an ordinary girl, and the strong contrast with the battle makes the character more layered. The novel cleverly combines fantasy adventure with urban life. While showing the magical girl's mission to save the world, it also deeply explores the inner struggle and growth of the protagonist, opening up a new path for the magical girl theme. It is worth reading for readers who love imagination and passionate adventure.

The writing is very good. The characters are very three-dimensional and the rhythm is pretty good. In addition, I actually think that considering the audience of this type of book, it would be better to develop the plot more in favor of Tangerine. Not to mention dual heroines or one-to-many, at least it can be labeled with an orange or something ( Why is woc still updating? This is so awesome. Such willpower.

It's a good book, but it's a bit laggy in some places, and the "even though you protected us, we still think you're a monster" kind of thing is too... Well... Canonical, so I can't complain about it. The world view looks large but it seems that it has not been developed yet. The plot of the protagonist hiding in the human world and killing monsters is a bit cumbersome. Some of the previously mentioned scenes such as the magical kingdom can also have more scenes. There is also the magic circuit in the protagonist's body that is the same as the garbage dump. This can also be an introduction to switching to the magical kingdom. Looks good, come on

Provincial Liu: A bitter joke? It's a bitter drama, a bitter drama is good, I love watching a bitter drama. High emotional intelligence: It was originally just a peaceful and ordinary day, but a disaster suddenly occurred, and two unrelated worlds were suddenly connected. A large number of beings called "demons" by humans invaded the original world, and the people fell into huge threats and deep suffering... Our protagonist? It is just a small microcosm in the vast tragedy, powerless and sad. However, the existence of magic becomes the continuation of hope, and the seeds of hatred quietly take root and sprout. When the souls of the two brothers and sisters are exchanged, this revenge story officially begins. My dear child, do not forget that the supreme beings in the world are suspended high in the vast sky. They look at the theater below and cast their will at the climax of the story. Remember, don't look at things beyond reason. Wanting everything will only cost you your life. Yes, don't look at it, don't... Look at it. ——— A good magical girl will not betray her wishes, no matter what the cost. A better magical girl knows when to pretend when she knows she is about to betray her wishes. One of the best magical girls, shrewdly assumes absolute leadership and leads the people to a better day. I am here waiting for your arrival, Your Majesty the Queen. (Is this person crazy?) (I can't get there.)

The structure is clear, the plot is compact, the characters are vivid, not sloppy, and the tension is interspersed with warm daily life. It has 1 million+ words in eight months. This is the overall impression that this book left for me (it looks good qwq). The author's writing is profound, and when I see the echoes and foreshadowing, I am really hearty, and there is nothing There is the emptiness of mindless fighting, and there is no sense of plot fragmentation like a copy of the text. From the writing style to the content, everything is carefully crafted (the author's introduction to the more than ten "People's Republic of China xxx" really scared me, haha) #Congratulations on discovering the treasure #@

A slightly cruel world view of magical girls (On second thought, today's magical girls seem to be quite cruel) But the author's writing and stories are indeed worth reading Personally, I think I've watched a lot of magical girl genres, and Tomato can still count them as masterpieces. So what are you still hesitating about? Just watch it!

From the beginning to now, I really recommend this book. This is a rare and very good magical girl themed novel. Moreover, the subject matter of this book is also very novel, a "heretical" magical girl! Very novel, let me take a look~ Click in and get caught up in it. It felt strange at first, but the further I read, the more fascinated I became. The plot is impeccable, the emotions expressed are very real, and the battle scenes are also very interesting. After seeing it now, I still believe that this book can get a 9 points! That's why so few people watch it now! ! ! The author would like to cheer you up! ! ! !

This book can be said to have made my eyes light up. First of all, it is different from traditional magical girls. The protagonist becomes a magical girl for revenge. And I also like the protagonist's venomous and arrogant character. Furthermore, the writing style of this book is very good, and the rendering of the sad atmosphere is very good, allowing people to truly feel the sad emotion. This is a very good book. The protagonist is not a virgin, she is cruel when she needs to be, and this character is very uninspiring.

It's pretty good to watch, but some of the plots are slow and a bit stiff, and some places look very frustrating. Many times when the protagonist goes to a new map, he doesn't let his family members collect information, and is pushed away by others. Also, the youngest sister is obviously the most important person left to him, so he doesn't know how to put a family member to protect her or keep an eye on her nearby. He just waits for something to happen to her and becomes anxious. Moreover, after his sister is rescued from an accident, he still doesn't have a family member to keep an eye on her. He is a troublemaker and has to carry his sister everywhere. He is a bit speechless. He has to put his sister in danger, otherwise it will not advance the plot. . . Apart from these, it is a good book. The psychological description of the protagonist is very detailed. Although he looks cold, he is actually a gentle person. The battle is very exciting. The background of the protagonist is very large. The combat power is theoretically very strong, but it does not feel that it is expressed. Moreover, the setting of the Demon King looks very high. In fact, it feels like anyone dares to make plans, but Bigger is pulled down.

Oh my God, this tension is so strong, so strong, I have pictures in my mind. Also, some places are really a bit curious... Tomato may really need to open a curiosity area [face covering]

The book is a good book, but the plot in the early stage is too tight. I can accept the more novel content in the book, but after one wave, it was flat, and another wave was about to kill me. After reading it, I felt more exhausted physically and mentally. In the middle and late stages, I finally got a little more routine, but the plot is still like a roller coaster, one wave after another. There are twists and turns, and then twists and turns [face covering] Is the author always abusing the protagonist because his life is not very satisfactory? [Face covering] Seeing that there are only a handful of fun clips now. After a few fights, he is almost dead, and the core of the devil is leaked at every turn. How can a Suiyun Temple write more than 200 chapters in the middle and late stages? It's almost half a book, and I haven't even finished it [face covering] The plot is very slow, and updates have been slow recently. I don't know if I can finish the book in my lifetime [smile] To sum it up, the book is a dark and dark world view with elements of curiosity. Although it is labeled as light, But there is very little in daily life. Battles account for 70~80% of the book. If you want to read the posts, you can go out and turn left. The protagonist is a black magical girl who wants to avenge the demons for her sister. The story is okay and the plot is compact, but it is not suitable for relaxing. ╮( •́ω•̀ )╭ The protagonist has been getting stronger, but he has been playing high-end games. In summary, playing low-end games is pure abuse, and playing high-end games is purely based on explosive seeds┑(￣Д ￣)┍

This is the first time I have read this type of magical girl. It is cruel, and there is a kind of magic that makes you nervous but reluctant to give up. I don't want this book to decline. I think all the book friends who have reviewed this book have similar opinions to me. Onegay, keep writing, Philles-chan✋🏻😭🤚🏻 Compared with the enthusiasm when I wrote the last comment, most of it has been extinguished by the torture of raising books. I was so happy when I read two volumes in one go. I hope you can work hard and get your life and study things straightened out.

Great, needless to say. The protagonist goes from being a cold-faced girl (male?) Almost alone in the beginning, to gradually coming into contact with other magical girls and no longer just relying on his sister. Rely on the trust of others to tap your own potential in disaster after disaster. Desires to have normal relationships with others, but suffers from the fact that he is different and worries that it will cause trouble, so he has early signs of distortion. The fights in the later stages were very strong, but they were almost always exchanging injuries for injuries, which was quite distressing. My younger sister's condition is also worrying. I think she has a tendency to twist (an urban female ghost's term). She is only 8.9 Years old. All in all, it is very delicious and highly recommended to watch. She is one of the few good-looking magical girls in Tomato, please take a look and cherish her.

Oh my god, my opinion is that it is a masterpiece in the field of magical girls. The world view is very organized and different from other simple love and justice or too dark and cruel movies. It is very exciting.

I have only read about 30 chapters. To be honest, I clicked in because I was bored and had nothing to read. I was confused at the beginning of the plot, but later on I started to understand, empathize, and even get involved. Although many things are a bit dark, it is also the process of the protagonist's growth. To be honest, I was shocked when I saw the scene of entering the tentacle monster's lair. But after thinking about it carefully, I felt that it was nothing. There are more disgusting things in reality than this, and this is just a small microcosm of reality. Although I have only read a little bit, this novel is worth spending a little time in your life to read it. I hope the author can persevere. The writing style and plot and character settings are very good. It is another very good magical girl novel that I have read since Xiaoluo Dada's works. If the author has seen it, can you review it? How many thousand words do you plan to finish? Do you want to build a fan base?

I've read about 20 chapters, which is almost a tenth. He came into contact with two poisonous spots, walked with a magical girl (which can also be classified as immature), and had his identity and secrets exposed by having his memory spied on (which was a bit unbearable). I will continue to check and try it later, if it doesn't work, I will run away. It's average in my eyes right now. Since everyone's preferences are different, I won't overestimate it.

A truly good book. I don't know how much better it is than other books like Rotten Persimmon that only write about useless cuteness, attract younger groups, or follow the trend and write about yandere. It can also be seen that the author's writing style is constantly improving. Come on

The author's writing is excellent, the advancement speed is appropriate, and the battle scenes are especially well written. The country in the world view is interesting, the ZF organization is a bit useless, the military does not understand the demons, and can even tolerate a Gotham. Also, isn't it unsightly to eat with a dirty look? The remaining blood stains and the like should be cleaned up with a meal, right? The best, keep writing, thank you, meow

It was a good read, I like the character setting very much, and the author is online. Fighting scenes account for a relatively high proportion, and I personally think the plot is compact. After reviewing it, AI is highly suspicious.

There is absolutely nothing wrong with the work, but it's a bit hard to remember the names after seeing them too many times [Thoughts]

A very powerful book. It may be more painful if you are catching up on updates, but it is so refreshing if you read it in one go. The protagonist was a little frustrated at the beginning, and has been playing high-end games. It can be compared to Xing Tie Yanqing [face covering], but overall it is still very good, and the author likes to put sugar on fake knives. The process is twists and turns, but the ending of the story is often without any regrets.